MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Its been 4months to their engagement. And they have developed a good bond with eachother...they knew & understand eachother pretty well now. They have started to feel for eachother..and those feeling are getting deeper each passing day..and they both knew it very well. But never did they gave words to their feelings...or may be it wasnt needed! Their emotions & feelings towards eachother can be easily felt in theiry every gesture, every word and actions!
They have seen dreams of their future together...how they will be living & sharing their life with eachother. She wished to take care of his every need..supporting him through the every path of their life together..sharing his happiness as well as sorrow.
He wanted to fullfil her every wish..protect her from every pain & hurt..and shower her with all the love he has in his heart for her!
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They hadnt met after their engagment..its always been just phone calls & messages! But then a month back..he had to go to mumbai for a business meeting. He had told her that he was coming.
And then he got a call from his inlaws and they insistated that he should come home. As he too wanted to meet her.. so went there for coupal of hours.
He had expected to spent some time with her..but that girl wasnt even ready to come infornt of him! He was stuck with his father inlaw and daarji most of the time..while his mother inlaw was busy in feeding him all the type of pakwans! He hardly saw her for few minutes..when she was bringing trays of food & sancks..and all that time..she wasnt even meeting his gaze! He would have thought that she was avoiding him...but her pink cheeks let him know that how shy she was feeling at that moment!
He couldnt belive that she was the same girl who love to tease him on their phone calls.. And now, is having so much trouble in moving her lashes to even meet him in the eye!
He was really disappointed that he couldnt spent time with her..and that made him mad at her.. But then he understand her situation also.. Though she is a little naughty..but at the same time she is a typical indian girl..who will feel shy to speak to her would be hubby infront of her elders... and he loved her for that!
Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor maan thinks that he will get some time to spent with geet but now he is stuck between his FIL nd daarji
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear...
Jus now read tis...
All parts are sooo cute...
Love tis story...
Awesome gal... Superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update
Poor maan geet se Milana chata hai aur geet toh unse nazarie bhi nahi mila pa rahi hai
Ye hi hamara culture hai maan geet ka pov bhi samj ne ki koshish karta hai. Compromise karta hai aur geet ko dekh kar satisfied bhi hai
Hope maaneet thodi der to mil payenge I feel bad for maan...bechra...!!!!
Itne wait ke baad itna chota update!!!!!!
Waiting for long long long update very soon
Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago
very beautiful part..
Simplicity is the beauty of their relationship..

maan is going to mumbai
but no tension they will be in touch with their phone calls😉

Hayyyeee shy geet😳
poor maan😆

Loving this so much...

Itna chotu update😒
will be waiting for long update...
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_smily

nice update

poor maan thinks that he will get some time to spent with geet but now he is stuck between his FIL nd daarji
thanks for the pm

ya poor maan..;)
but dont worry..just wait a littile..;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayapari

Hey dear...

Jus now read tis...
All parts are sooo cute...
Love tis story...
Awesome gal... Superb

thanks alot for appriciating dear:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! ahh Geet all shy! Maan wnated to spend tym wid her bt cld nt nw! She understands her! update soon! Well written

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