MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2.

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~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar...~


He came out of shower, wiping his wet hair with a towel. Selecting a dark blue jeans & cotton white shirt, he quickly got ready. He collected his watch, wallet & car keys.. And once again checked himself in the mirror. After being satisfied with his looks, he turned to go out.. when his eyes fell on the photo frame, placed on the side table near his bed. An instant smile appeared on his lips..as he moved towards the table & picked up the frame in his hands.
He kept looking at the smiling face in the photo. It didnt matter that he practically see it all day & night.. Still everytime it felt like it was the first time that he was seeing that face. Face that has become so much important for him in just few days! Face that become the reason for his life now! He moved his fingers on the glass of the frame..unconciously, crassing those smiling lips.. And his own smile brighten unknowingly. He just love that smile...naughty & teasing.. But also innocent, at the same time!
He kept moving his fingers..tressing the featurs of that beautiful face.. When the shining metal on his ring finger caught his attention. A strange kind of excitment & contentment filled his heart, seeing that peice of metal..a ring! Its not just any ring...its a symbol of a new relationship.. his engeagment ring! Its symbolise that now he belongs to someone..someone special! And that someone special.. belongs to him..& only him! It symbolise that now he is not alone...now there will be someone with him..throught his life..who will share everything that is his...his life..his relations..his emotions..his happiness..his pain..everything! Who will be his strenth in weak moments.. & will guide & support him through every tough phase of life.
And most importantly..it symbolise that there will be someone, who will have expectations from him..frm now on. There will be someone..who will look up to him.. & now.. he has to take care of that someone..that special someone!

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Awesome and lovely os.. Jaldi se 2nd part b de do.
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Originally posted by: DevilClan

Awesum and lovely os.. Jaldi se 2nd part b de do.

thank u so much dear! I'll try to udate soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...so beautiful part...
loved it..
Continue soon..
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

WOW...so beautiful part...
loved it..
Continue soon..

thank u so much dear.. 😊
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How Sweet😳

The emotions on wearing somebody's special ring were described beautifully and perfectly.
A simple piece of metal yet the tiny circle binds you for life.😳

Nice start to a sweet story, perhaps.😊
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Originally posted by: Susegad

How Sweet😳


The emotions on wearing somebody's special ring were described beautifully and perfectly.
A simple piece of metal yet the tiny circle binds you for life.😳

Nice start to a sweet story, perhaps.😊

u liked it!
thank u so much!😊
hope u will like the whole OS!
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thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

u liked it!
thank u so much!😊
hope u will like the whole OS!


I always like everything you write. The emotions you describe are always clearly felt and are heart touching.
I will come back and read it along with all the others that I have to yet read.😃

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