MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 3

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His gaze moved to the photo again & this time..those hazel brown eyes were the center of his attention. Those eyes were full of mischifs.. There was a naughty glint in those beautiful eyes. They were teasing him..just like, they had teased him last night.. whole night, these naughty eyes didnt let him sleep. They kept teasing & taunting him silently..about his impetient heart & his restlessness..thus increasing it all the more. They had laughed at him, hearing his uncontrolled heartbeats, in the anticipation of the next day.
He had felt annoyed & irritated by their constant teasing.. But he cant deny that he had loved it too! He loves it, when these eyes speak to him. He loves it, even more when they tease him..when they show him, their naughty side. He loves it, when they look directly at him.. At least, its better then the time, when these eyes had refused to meet him, in the eye..coz of shyness...thus, leaving him carving for their one glance!
He just loves it, when these eyes make silent promises to him.. of their beautiful future together... When they assure him that they will be with him always..no matter what may comes their way.
They speak to him without any hesitation or any shyness... Unlike the person who is owner of them. And this thought made him remember a song which is quite suitable for their situation..
"sau rang mohabbat ke..
Ye mujhko dikhati hai..
Na ruth-ti hai mujhse..
Na ye sharmaati hai..
Sine se lagalun toh..
Lag jati hai sine se..
Tum se toh kai achhi..
TASVEER tumhari hai...!"

He chuckled at his own thought..imagining the expression of this pretty face..if he sang that song in real. He was sure that..then these naughty eyes will hide themselves from him.. They will refuse to look up & meet him coz of shyness. He bite his lips..smiling.. And brought the photo frame close to his face .. And kissed those hazels one by one.

He was lost in his own world with those hazels as his companion..when he heard someone calling him, & that brought him back from his haven.
"bhaiii.. bhaiii" ..his lil-sister yelled from downstairs.
"coming..annie..!" he replied.
He looked at the photo once again and quickly kissed.. "See u very soon.." ..he wisphered. He couldnt stop the grin that came on his lips while saying that. He then, kept the frame back to its place, near his bed..and left the room quickly.
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He went downstairs where everyone was waiting for him. He avoided looking at them, sensing those teasing looks they were giving at him.
"what happened bhai..? U took so long to get ready today? Koi khaas baat hai?" ..vicky, his younger brother, said with a teasing smile. He could hear everyone surprressing their chuckles as vickys teasing.. But he chose to ignore..yet didnt forgot to glare at vicky..making him to shut up instantly.
"chalen.. Annie??" ..saying that he started walking out.. without even waiting for annies response.
He heard them all laughing.. So quickly rushed out towards his car, followed by annie..who herself was trying to surpress her laugh.
He gave her an irritated look..seeing that teasing smirk on annies face.
But then couldnt stop himself from smiling slightly..thinking about the reason of this teasing.
"hmmm..."..annie teased again raising her eyebrows naughtily.
He chuckled in respose... "chalen.. Warna late ho jaaenge.." ..he said starting the car... As his heartbeats increased..thinking about his destination.
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Beautifull part..
Well described😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifull part..
Well described😊
Continue soon!!

thank u sooo much dear..
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loved it chavvi..awesome...

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awesome update!!!⭐️

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