MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 10

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

WAitingg...

i'll update tomorrow for sure dear..
Thanks for waiting..:-)

Originally posted by: Shonameet

i'll update tomorrow for sure dear..
Thanks for waiting..:-)

hmmm...ok...
will wait..

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"Toh..tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni..?? Hmmm..??" maan asked shocking not only her but himself too.
He had never thought that he would tease her like this..that too when they hardly know eachother. He would have really thought that she had cut the call as she didnt answer him...but he could hear her breathing which comfirmed that she was still there. He waited..but didnt got any reply..
"achha..i got it.. Nahi baat karni na.." he said in a disapointed tone, he so much wanted to hear something from her..anything.. didnt know why?? he just wanted to hear her!
On the other hand geet was too shocked to say anything at first.. But then hearing his question again..she came out of the shock.. She didnt wanted him to misunderstand her talks..but didnt know how to explain..she was really nervous..
"nahi..."geet replied quickly. she wanted to tell him that it was nothing like, he was thinking..
"ok..nahi karni..??" maan asked... "atleast she talked"..he thought smilingly.
"nahi...main.. wo.." geet was fumbling in nervousness.
"Main.. wo..kya..??hmm..?? " he was enjoying her fumbling..he could hear her faint mummers but couldnt understand what she was saying. Next he heared naina laughing loudly & geet cursing her.."naina ki bachhi..tujhe toh main.."
maan smiled listening her angery & annoyed voice..
"hello..?" he said to remind her that they were still on line..
"han.." geet replied glaring at naina who was trying to muffle her laugh.
"han..kya..??" maan asked teasingly..
"wo.." geet was struggling with her words..
"hmmm...wo..??" maan was loving it so much.
"kuch nahi.. Bye..!!" and with that she had cut the call! He knew she was annoyed by naina's & then his teasing... But he simply loved it! He really enjoyed teasing her. He himself was surprise as he had never done anything like this before!
Later that night, he got a text message from her.. It said.. "Sorry"
he knew very well, what was that "sorry" for.
But coulnt leave the chance..and message back..
"sorry? Coz u dont want to talk to me..?" he waited for her answer..unsure if she would reply or not.
"maine aisa kab kaha?" came her reply..which made him smile at her.
"that means..tumhe mujhse baat karni hai..?" maan himself didnt know that why he was stuck at that line only.
"maine aisa bhi toh nahi kaha.." geet too replied teasingly.
Maan chuckled reading her reply and asked.. "toh fir...??"
"toh.. fir..?" geet too questioned him instead of replying.
Maan smiled at her teasing. He knew she won't answer him now..so he thought to leave it there and texted..
"good night.."
"good night..take care.." geet replied back.
Though it was nothing special..but He liked her little gesture!

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Jaldi😃

updated:-)

Me first😃

so beautiful part!!
so cute moments of maaneet..
though it was on only on phone..
cute teasing of geet by maan😆
It was so cute part...
you are awesome writer shona!!
It was really amazing update😊
will be waiting for next part...
continue soon!!!

plz update your stories also

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Waiting for more...such a wonderful soothing work...just Title forced me to jump here😆...I can't say Title is more awesome or writing loving it dear...🤗read whole in one go...and a treat got new update just after finishing track...now plz jaldi update karna...</font>

thank u so much for ur precious & encouraging words dear..it means alot to me..that u find my work soothing..i really luv it whn my readers smile reading my updates.. Thanks again dear🤗
Will try to update soon..😊