Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28

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Hello everyone


Hope at least some of you know me😆😳


Well, for the others..me one crazy fan, known by few as Anu/Bhanu/Cherishh, of Maneet and their fictional stories written by talented, marvelous and beautiful writers


So me also trying my hand at writing for the very first time. Please forgive me for any mistakes and do let me know.


Its going to be a simple story and hope you all will like it.


I would like to thank

My Sweetie (Candy_JS), My Devil/Shock Booster (angel-ki-shona/Mel), and My Dearie (jyothikrish) for encouraging, inspiring and helping me out...love you guys❤️❤️❤️


And yes if you guys get bored or crazy with it blame them😆😆😆


Please check the post below for prologue and don't forget to leave your views (good and bad both are welcome😊).


Index


Prologue----Pg 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3629050/maneet-ff-lost-part-4-pg-32-on-july-28


Part-1-----Pg 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3629050/maneet-ff-lost-part-4-pg-32-on-july-28?pn=12


Part-2-----Pg 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3629050/maneet-ff-lost-part-4-pg-32-on-july-28?pn=21


Part-3-----Pg 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3629050/maneet-ff-lost-part-4-pg-32-on-july-28?pn=25


Part-4-----Pg 32

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3629050/maneet-ff-lost-part-4-pg-32-on-july-28


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_Jyothi_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anuuu 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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(thanks jyothikrish for the sweet banner)

MAAN

Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd, I'm losing my breath.
Lost as a kid and as an adult
everything is falling apart and it's all my fault.
Lost as a person, can't find my way out everyday

Lost in life and lost in worry
I am living a lie
who am i?
Lost to kindness
Lost to love
Heart pounding, smashing through these concrete walls, defended through and through
Lost in my thought, which I shouldn't do, it winds me up and I cant break through.
Lost in me, I need a break.
Lost in wonder, which road should I take?
Lost, lost, lost.
Describing my life,
I'm lost,
in heart, and in mind.
Lost here, all alone.
Lost in mind,
Lost in soul,
Lost in memories, there's just a hole.
I wonder what is more to feel lost'.

GEET

Loneliness consumes every inch of my body.

Aching numbness crawls through my skin.

Blood as cold as ice running through my veins.

Day after day always putting on a happy face,

While inside I'm being tortured by loneliness, aching numbness, and ice cold blood.

Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is indeed an pleasant surprise😃
congrates sweety on ur very first attempt👏
the story sounds so promising...it seems both the souls are caged in the world of loneliness...and really looking forward for u to unveil the story...
start updating soon...will be waiting😊
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anu congrats on your first ss... loved it completely.
The prologue is so painful, both are lonely wonder why
and must say the poems are so so apt..
looking forward for the story to unfold...
and i am so so so happy. and thanku so much for posting anu...
@jeni akka: this is really treat for us na?? and see she is blaming us in the first post 😛 as if we care...

anu hope you write more and more stories... 😃
love you dear 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue seems interesting. waiting for the 1st part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plzzz cont. soon...
Waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as no one is going to get bored I am all ready to take the credit of your hard work 😆

Briliant start cherry. Loved the way the poems tell about Maaneet's feelings it''s so beuatifull. Can't wait to read part one eagrly waiting so update soon and a big WELCOME to writer land. 😃
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cherishh

(thanks jyothikrish for the sweet banner)

loved the banner nice work Jyoti😃loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for ur first FF Cherrish aka Anu...

very painful start...haan Mel ki sangat ka asar hai...tumne bhi Maan-Geet ke separation se hi shuruwat ki hai...yeh Mel kabhi nahin sudhregi...pata nahin apne dal-bal ke saath mere Maan-Geet ke hi peeche padi rehti hai...jab tak uchein separate na kar le chain nahin hai...

bore kyun honge tum shuru to karo story ko...

they both are lonely and in pain...what happen with them...

I am sending buddy request...

please send me pm whenever u update...
Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago

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