Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply fabulous.loved it
keep writing-

thank you dear😳

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Cherishh

achhaji toh hum apko permission aur order dete hai ki update all ur wrk daily😆😆😈

Ohhh first you give the right example then me will gollow your lead😛

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Cherishh

awww...me not choorrr but yes lazy just like u😛😆

hope we chat soon ji

Haina I miss you a lot but ever since you got famous and all you forgot me😭😭😭😭😭

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Cherishh

smart SB😛😳

woh toh appki smartness ka asar hai

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: valli22
nice part
nice banner
maan is lost
the change in him..is it becoz of geet
or anything else.

thank you so much dear for reading it

glad u liked the banner, thanks to jyothi for it

well u need to wait for that

Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shobsrocks
😃 bhanu so nice nice intro for Maan,whre s our Misty waiting for her.

update soon.

waiting

waiting
waiting

thanks for liking it shobha

hopefully misty will come next😊

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

very well written...

thanks

Maan's POV was really very interesting...

Maan have very strange relation with his mother...hate and anger from his side and love and care from her side...

why he hates his mother when she loves and care for him...

well thats the story all about why he is so aloof, arrogant and all

Maan is as usual sadu,khadoos...kisi se baat nahin karta and na kisi aur ko karne deta hai...

how can he be maan without it😛😳

waiting to know more...

hanx for pm...

😊

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hey Babbie...its not fighting yaar, its chattting😆😛

haan haan de do babbie yeh humari pinky hai

double update..yeh kya hota hai😆😆...maine abhi abhi shuru kiya hai likhna issi khushi mein Mel triple updates degi😛😆

aur Mel tu unique haina so as I am good girl u will be a bad girl😆😆😛 (nahi toh tu aur mein jo karungi woh karegi😲😲)

ohhh dehk babbie me was all ready but cherry backed out saying double update kya hota hai now you decide how is lazy

Acha ji who says Mel kush hai Mel is hell jealous that you just started writting and your zillion yimes better. Dukh mein mel will not write at all

hawww cherry called me bad😭😭😭

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Cherishh

helloji

is there any reward for missing u😆😆

leh tu kab BG ki baatein sunne lagi hai aur toh itne din Geet se dur rakha ab toh usse leave de😆😛

the truth that we need money for everything yet it means nothing is the bitter truth ji😛

awww...tu itni attentive kaise hogayi ki u r thinking about his words😲

ab Sam kahan se aagayi...maine mention hi nahi kiya. Tu naa apna dimaag zyada mat chala, mein pehli baar likh rahi hoon toh suspense jo thoda bahut hai woh rehne de😡😆😆

Hayeee mein bahut khush hoon ji apke praises se...thanku thanku...happy u r liking it

Yeh sooner kya hai😆😆...if it is me updating after u update 2 updates of each of ur story, then surely will SB😆😆😉