Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all...
a big congrats for starting ur first ever story that too on maaneet...
i am glad that u also tried ur hand on writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now come to the title...
it seems there is so much pain , loneliness there, like their soul, heart is lost somewhere...
after reading the poem in prologue, ,
seems they are connected with each other from childhood...
like the are missing in each other memories but couldn't reach to their partners...
too much pain, loneliness that is unbearable for them now...
being in world with lots of people around them, they are alone, lost in the crowd...
well, now won't judge further...
ab to part-1 ka wait karna padega...
aaannnuuu...jaldi se update dena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



CONGRATULATIONS for ur first FF Cherrish aka Anu...

thank you dear

very painful start...haan Mel ki sangat ka asar hai...tumne bhi Maan-Geet ke separation se hi shuruwat ki hai...yeh Mel kabhi nahin sudhregi...pata nahin apne dal-bal ke saath mere Maan-Geet ke hi peeche padi rehti hai...jab tak uchein separate na kar le chain nahin hai...

😆😆 sangat ka asar..well u will know about it as the story proceeds😳

par yeh sahi ki usse dono ko separate karna uske upar Maan ko humesha galat karna😡😡

bore kyun honge tum shuru to karo story ko...

aww...so sweet of u❤️, but I want to hear the same after u read the updates😆😆

they both are lonely and in pain...what happen with them...

well u have to wait and read ahead to know that

I am sending buddy request...

please send me pm whenever u update...

have accepted it and will surely PM u

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

eh loh di Meine kya Kiya 😭

Me inncoent woh to cherry aisi baathe karthi hai, uske sangat ke asar mein mei asis hoge mein to innocent bacha hoon nah woh bhi di kah😳


awww...my innocent bacchaa ya mommy😕...haan haan sabko pata hai kispe kiske sangat ka asar hai😡😊😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

congrats on ur first ss di!!,loved both the poems,its look quite interesting,update soon


thanks for the wishes and liking it dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will try to update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .bloom.

Nice Start.
Will be Waiting for an Update 😊


thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058

first of all...
a big congrats for starting ur first ever story that too on maaneet...
i am glad that u also tried ur hand on writing...


thanks a lot dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: neha5058

now come to the title...
it seems there is so much pain , loneliness there, like their soul, heart is lost somewhere...


yes dear their is pain and loneliness for sure

after reading the poem in prologue, ,
seems they are connected with each other from childhood...
like the are missing in each other memories but couldn't reach to their partners...
too much pain, loneliness that is unbearable for them now...
being in world with lots of people around them, they are alone, lost in the crowd...

well, now won't judge further...

u have to wait to know whether they are connected or not😳

@blue, yep dear, u got the prologue in this sense

ab to part-1 ka wait karna padega...
aaannnuuu...jaldi se update dena...

sure dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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main Maaneet story ko read kar ke bore to kabhi nahin hoti yeh to pakka hai...haan irritate ho sakti hoon...to tab daant khane ko taiyaar rehna...😆

aur kya woh to Maan-Geet ko budhdhe hone ke baad milwaati hai...bechare pyaar se rehne laayak bhi nahin bachte...😉

thanx for accepting...will surely wait to read ahead...

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