Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

part-3

omg... i thought both had a past and something happened in their past that's y both get separated...
but here u showed us their first meeting... and he liked her...
what is happening here yaar?
me so confused... kya karu...
why they were sad in starting...?


😆😆 me happy that no one thought other way around, yup they never met before😳

as to why they were sad has different reasons for both and there past is not gonna come at least for the next couple of updates...so u need to wait a little more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice part dear...
cont soon...


thank you for liking it😃

will be updating today
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

congrats dear for new ss

i know im late to wish to u lol
awesome dear

thanks a lot dear

well u didn't know, so no probs😳...me happy that u read

loved the way maan narrating his life n also telling abt him n his family
his 2 siblings are different

glad u liked his pov...yup they are different than him

y maan is like this is it becz of geet

well as they met first time in the last update..u can be sure that its not becoz of geet

y maan hates his mom

I will not tell u so soon😆😆

loved geet n her frnds very much
loved their bonding
y geet doesnt like their parents togetherness?
loved geet small family

its not she doesn't like their togetherness, but just that she doesn't like them😳 and u need to wait a little to know that

loved maneet meeting

it was simple and so i was worried, but happy that u liked it

will b waiting for next part
continue soon

will be updating today dear

thanks for writing such awesome ss

thanks🤗

awesome banner loved it yaar

well all the credit for that goes to jyothi❤️

finally read and comment this ss too lol
love
meena😳

glad u could take out time to do so

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalireddyy84

Congo bhanu awesome different concept nice work n I loved first time MSK has Dadu hehe all FF ss oly Dadi but here dadu there
Good continue dear


thanks a lot for reading and liking it dear😃

yup me so wanted MSK-Dadu combo, so I went with it..glad u liked it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

waiting for the next update

update soon!!!!!!


will be updating today yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...waiting yaar...and me updating DIL..
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Posted: 12 years ago

(Thanks a lot Sara for such a lovely banner)



(Thanks a lot Jyothi for this beautiful banner)



Part-4

Rashmi and Shashidhar (Priya's parents, Geet's friend😳)

As always, Geet's pov in pink and Maan's in blue, and Rashmi's in purple and Adi/Sasha in green😊


I have been in Ahmedabad for a week now. I came along Priya to attend her cousin's marriage and today we are going back to Mumbai, which reminds me of the day I was left speechless and captivated in those beautiful eyes that never left me. More than anger, the pain and a feeling of helplessness was which made me all the more numb, though he tried to cover it...well even I couldn't have realized it if I wasn't in the same boat.


I came out of thoughts with Rashmi aunty's call.

Geet

Ji aunty

Geetu I wanted you to stay back here as Sashi's mom wanted to spend some more time with us, especially Priya, and I don't want you to leave alone, so why don't you extend your leave dear.

Thats fine aunty. Its good that you gonna have some family time, but I really couldn't stay any longer as you know I am shifting to Delhi and have very less time to settle everything over in Mumbai and there are many things to look after too

but Geet

you don't worry aunty I will manage and it is not the first time I am traveling around alone.

And finally with lots of assurance from Geet and instructions to take care and all from Rashmi, she bid bye to all

The same morning

It has been a week since I have seen that innocent angel…those hazel eyes have kept me awake all these days. At first, I was restless seeing that unnamed emotion there, but now when I understood that I see myself in it, my emotions, pain and anguish along with hope, I couldn't stop thinking about my life.

I always felt that everything is against me and guilt just eats me up to no extent, but those eyes calmed me a lot and I don't really understand why.

Drowning in that beautiful whirlpool of life, he continues with his exercise before freshening up and moving ahead to the construction site of one of his current projects.

Almost near the highway to Mumbai, there has been an accident and I saw a car being dashed with a tree with everyone in it lying unconscious. There was no hospital nearby too, so I took them to a small house located about 15 minutes ahead and with the help of the residents try to treat them as they were not in much danger, though it would take a week or two to heal completely from all the bruises and sprains.

Now when they are cleaned and wounds being dressed, I feel as though I saw them somewhere, but am not able to think when and where.

As if it is not enough, the thoughts of my stranger, yes My Stranger, whose eyes haunt me never seem to leave me. I feel like to hold onto him and know what is it that is troubling him. His eyes hold a pool of varied emotions that attracted me as a magnet with just a glimpse and not letting me forget even for a moment. Seems like my mind and heart does not want to give up either. I know its all stupid, weird for me to think, but I can't help myself.

Khurana Constructions

Maan entered KC making it shiver with his walk, rage and eyes spitting fire and leading to it being just filled with deafening silence with just the raising heartbeats audible of each and everyone present there. They are dead scared and praying the bomb etched with anger to not explode on them.

After he left to cabin, everyone took a breather, which didn't even last for a minute as they heard the roar of The MSK on Sasha and Adi making all to get back to work and avoid a chance to be a victim of his temper.

Inside Cabin

It seemed like the silence was never wishing to leave him and in turn it was making him more and more angry


I didn't call you both to witness your silence…just speak up now


but again silence is what met him and having no other option he tried to infuse something in their now silent brains and mouth

How the hell did this happen Adi. I think you were the one who appointed that good for nothing field officer.

Sir woo…woohh

Don't test my temper Adi

I am sorry sir

To hell with your bloody sorry. I don't know what you will do, but I want that man to be taken good care of…do you get that

Ye..Yes…Yes Sir

All this while, the face which was grinning and smirking that she wasn't targeted or even doubted for her mistake had lost all the color and became dead pale with a single stare of her boss or say her MK, which she feels has her copyright to call so and noone should or could dare to address him as MK

So Sasha how are things moving along

Fine..absolutely fine MK

Hmm


I hope u know how important this project is for us and I don't want any mistakes. Now why don't we once again go ahead with the details and yes Adi will submit the tender after that.

But MK…and received another glare in response

I want you to come along with me for the Malhotra's meeting

After hearing that, Sasha was elated and Maan smirked seeing her reaction and thinks "Sasha now you will know what are the consequences of playing with Maan Singh Khurana." I thought by now you knew that MSK never leaves his enemy and people who betray him.

On the other side, Sasha unknown to what is brewing up in her MK's mind was all the while in her dreamland of making MK her pet and enjoying his money and status and thinking this to be a step to her dreams, but she couldn't even think in her worst nightmare the dreading future of her dreams and herself.

I can't believe why can't they stop their games and why are they taking my silence as my helplessness or fear. I don't want to become a monster as they made me. I want to come out of that tag, this anger and most importantly this loneliness. I can't take it anymore. This guilt and silence is eating me. I want it out of me, out of my life. I sometimes wonder is it even possible, no it isn't and shouldn't. I deserve every bit of it. The pain, hurt and fear everyone lived with cause by me all these years cannot be forgiven.


I don't deserve love and happiness from anyone, but it doesn't mean I have to be cruel and stone-hearted or heartless, but why are they hell bent on making me so.

No they can't rule me anymore. I really need to show my power and their place in my life. I have been a fool to have got trapped in their plan for years, but not anymore and not now when I know everything.


They are thinking my silence as love and respect for them. Yes its because of love and respect, but not for them, its for them whom I have killed every moment, hurt them, made them cry….no, I can't and will not play with their emotions anymore. I do not have any reason for my harsh behavior, actually no reason will be good enough to get me out of this never ending guilt, which is breaking me more and more day after day, minute by minute. I have been silent so as to not put any more pressure or give pain to my people, people who loved me boundless, loved me with my hatred and indifference, but not anymore, the people from my past will have to suffer, suffer to an extent that they would fear to think to hurt me or people around me through me. They will not succeed in destroying me in any way or anything as they will now face Maan Singh Khurana and not Maan.


After a long time, I am updating this...hope you all still remember it😛

Please do hit like and comment...will be waiting to know how you all felt after reading😃

Do let me know of any mistakes or if you have any doubts😳


Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first🥳
awesome update di
loved it
maaneet still remembering each other after that encounter
geet shifting to delhi,great
will be waiting for more parts ...
update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
read it .. but din't remember the story or the previous parts 😛

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