Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi maaneetians...

i have come with a new concept on maaneet...i know i am not a regular updater...but my hands were itching to write this..

hope u all suport me in this journey too...

will post the prolouge now.. there is no character sketch...

hope u like this...do tell me ur views..

here goes the prolouge...

Prolouge:
a girl sitting on a window pane and looking out towards the garden in front of the her home. this was their neighbour's garden. in the garden she was looking longingly, lovingly at a handsome person. she thinks

"when will u think of me?? u know how much I long for ur love?? but I have learnt to live like this' from many years I have longed but now this longing has become my life.. I know u don't want me in ur life'but what to do??? I am bound by my heart.."
she was sitting and tears were coming from her eyes. but none was there to see her pain and love. she was drowing in her own miseries at that time some one called her and she went to listen to another day filled with orders.



hope u like this..

waiting for ur reviews...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Prologue...
Namkaran nahi kiya abhi tak...
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Nice Prologue...

Namkaran nahi kiya abhi tak...


haan mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha...😕😕
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thank u dear...
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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply superb.loved itb



thank you very much...😊😊
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thank u soo much...😊
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bm will read after exams
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

bm will read after exams


ok dear...

will be waiting for ur review...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful prolouge...i think the title should be " lamhe intezaar ke "😊

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