Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

awesome update

i dont like pari
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear


glad u liked the updates..

i too 😡😡

will try to update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sudha_gc

nice parts... wondering if it was his wedding card or wat 😲
update soon


glad u liked it...

hmm..will know it soon...😃😃

wil try to update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4:

Maama: beta yeh kis cheej ka card hai??
(beta what card is this??)

maan: uncleji yeh meri saagai ka card hai..
(uncle this is my engagment card..)

***thud***

maama and maan turned to see pari on the ground…maama immediately sprinkled water on her..


maan: (st) nautanki…dono behen ek si hai!!!
(drama queen…both sisters are same…)
pari got up from the ground…

pari: maan ji..aap saagai kar rahe hai??
(maan ji ur are doing engagment??)

maama: pari tumhe ek baat kitni baar batani padthi hai??
(pari how many times should I say one thing?)

maan: uncleji aapko aana padega…aur haan saagai kal hai..
(uncleji u must also come..tomorrow is the engagement..)

maama: itni jaldi kya tha beta??
(what was the hurry??)

maan: who daadi chathi hai ki saagai and shaadi jaldi ho..tho aabhi saagai hai…shaadi ki date kal nikaligi..
(daadi wanted it to happen soon..so engagement is tomorrow and the marriage date will be fixed there.)

maama: aacha beta…hum zaroor ayenge..
(ok beta…we will surely come..)
maan goes from there…pari was still in shock…there was one more person who was hearing this and was numb was none other than geet…her face was filled with tears…
geet: (st) maan mujhe aapke liye khush hona chaiye tha na..mein hi tho chathi thi ki aap mere dhoke se bahar aaye aur phir hasna suru kare…phir mera dil mujhe dhoka kyun de raha hai aapki saagai ki baat sun kar??? mujhe pata hai aap mujhe kabhi dekhna pasand nahi karenge…maine aapse wada jo kya hai ki mein kabhi aapke saamne nahi aaungi…mujhe maaf kar dejeyi maan..pls…
(maan I must be getting happy for u..i only wanted that after my cheat u start to live life again..then y is my heart betraying me after listening to ur engegement??i know u will never want to see me..i have promised u that I will never come in front of u…pls forgive me maan..)

geet composes herself and sees maan going out…she stares him for the last time…
maama sees him off and comes to geet who had come to living room.. she sat on the place where maan sat trying to feel him…
maama came and said geet about maan's engagement..she faked a smile and went to kitchen to start preparing dinner..by that time maami had come from temple and got shock hearing about maan's engagement…. she wanted pari to become his wife..but everything spoiled…
after dinner maami and pari went in..yash, geet and maama were sitting…suddenly geet felt uneasy..she started to vomit..then suddenly she fainted…


yash and maama were shocked..they sprinkled water on her…she slowly gained consciousness..
yash: di aap thik tho hai na??
(di are u ok??)

geet: haan yash mein thik hun..
(yeh yash I am fine..)

maama: kahan thik hai…tune tho dara hi diya tha..
(where u are fine…u scared us..)

geet: maamaji mein saachi mein thik hun…bas who dawa khane mein late ho gaya na..isliye..
(uncle I am fine…it became late in having medicine..)

yash: kya???aapne abhi tak dawa nahi khai??
(what?? u dnt take medicine till now??)

geet nods her head in no..
yash rushes to take her medicines…maama glares her… geet slowly murmurs sorry.. yash brings medicines and geet unwilling haves them…they are her life now…without them she cant live…

that's all for now…

PRECAP: maan tries not to think of geet..

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Posted: 12 years ago
party time🥳🥳 me first
awesome part
maan ki saagai kaise and why maan said dono behen nautanki
from which disease geet suffering from

Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part...
thnxxx for reveiling sum mystery...
1st whn maan said dat both sis r same i was like maan geet ko galat samajhta hai...
nw i cn understand sun wat...
so they both love each other...
bt geet ne maan ko dhoka dene ka natak kiya... so dats y maan is in pain n is doing this engagenment...
btgeet ko kya hua hai ...kahi is bimari ki wajah se he usse maan ko khud se dur kar diya...
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Posted: 12 years ago



what happen to Geet...

why she Vomits...does she have any health problem...is there any threat to her life...is this the reason she pretend to betray him...

lekin Maan ki shaadi kisi aur ladki se na ho...

awesome update...


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...but please geet aur maan ko alagh mat karna😭 waiting for more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part di...
Wooo so maan n geet were in relation but geet potrait as if she cheated him n maan is getting engaged now...i think geet has some type of disease thats why she lied to maan...i m eagerly waiting to know wats coming next...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is suffering frm some disease...is she suffering frm cancer or something...dats why she left maan...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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