Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7

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akanshya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: punam2712
GEET HAS A TOUGH LIFE
ALONG WITH DOING THE HOUSE WORK SHE HAS TO LISTEN TO HER MAMI'S TAUNTS

yeh...she has to manage all this...

hope u like the upcoming story too..

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akanshya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: love2_soma
itna chhotasa update...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

sry for the small update...

will try to update today...

hope u like that too...

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

lovely update but chota sa
loved it cont soon

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: preeti555
lovely update but chota sa
loved it cont soon

thank u for likiing it..

will try to update today...

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akanshya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

hi maaneetians...

thank u soo much for liking this story..

have commenetd to every comment...

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misthy, maaneetkisonali, kabslocks, Paingel, MaankigopiMadhu, ns.1, preeti555,

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thank u soo much for the encouragement...

updating now...any one waiting????

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Part 2:

the trio entered the college… geet and yash went to their class and pari being lazy went to meet her so called friends in canteen..

in geet's class her and yash's friends were waiting for them… mostly their friends are common coz yash is very protective of geet..

friend meera " hey hi bro sis jodi.."

(bro sis jodi was their nick name in friends..)

both " hi meera"

frient puneet "kaise thi aaj ki subha madam ki??"

(how was the morning of madam??)

yash: "yaar punne mein di se kitni baar boltha hun ki wh itna kaam na kare…par nahi…meri tho yahan koi suntha hi nahi hai!!! bande ki koi value hi nahi hai..!!"

(punne how many times I told di not to work this much…but will she listen to me!!! I have no value here…)

Geet: yash drama band kar..aur haan punne mujhe kaam karna aacha lagtha hai…aur rooz rooz yeh baat lekar bhais karna aacha lagtha hai kya???"

(yash stop ur drama..and punne I like to do work..and arguing about this everyday is good ah??)

in sometime the professor came and the lecture started…geet and meera were concentrating on the lecture where as yash and punne were busy niharoyfying the girls of the class and the girls walking in the campus from the window.. meera nudged geet to look at them…

Geet: " yeh kabhi nahi sudhrenge!!!"

(they will never change..)

they left them and concentrated on the lecture and queen pari today also bunked the lecture…

after college they returned home and as soon as she reached home her maami started giving her commands….

so geet immediately freshed and came and did all the household works... in sometime in between she would stare outside garden which was their neighbours..

her eyes would search someone..

it was evening and geet was making tea for the family…

maami came inside

maami: "sun mein aaj mandir jaa rahi hun.. tu pari ke papa ko chai dedea..aur haan pari se kuch mat bolna..nahi tho teri khair nahi.."

(listen I am going to temple..u give T to pari's dad and don't say anything to pari..else!!"

saying so she goes out of the home…suddenly bell rings..geet goes to open the door…when she reaches half way she heard pari telling that only she will open the door..so geet returned to kitchen…

pari opened the door and geet peeped to see who it might be be…she saw pari covering the face of the person.. she wasn't able to see him but it was some man she could guess it from the height and body…

after sometime when pari moved and geet saw his face…she was shocked and immediately hid inside the kitchen…

"don't worry mein apna promise nahi todungi.." (don't worry I wont break my promise.) she said to herself and there were tear streaks on her face…

that's all for now..

PRECAP: pari's trying to impress someone!!! someone save him…

hope u like this..

waiting for ur views...

LOADS OF LOVE AG..

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

miss pari lazy bug

koi tho hai uasko protect karneko yash ur soo sweet

ye mami kab change karegi grrr

who is that yaar

update next soon

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Interesting concept :-)
Nice updates...
Y geet does all work...
N y she is not comin in front of maan ???
I hope my guess is correct n it's maan only .. Tat new person ;-)