Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Loved the twist in the story , please PM me after updating your ff.



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Part 9:

after knowing the truth of the marriage maan was broken…he thought that geet cheated him and told many things to her which she dint deserve.. he wanted to ask her forgiveness but don't understand why she said all that if marriage was dev's??

he was going to her home when he saw yash, maamaji and geet going somewhere out.. he curiosity took better of him and he too followed them…
after sometime while following them in car he lost the track of their vehicle..
later after going for some more distance when he couldn't find them he left hope..while he was returning he saw a crowd assemebled.. he too went to see what was happening.. he saw that a person had accident and no one was taking him to hospital…
maan took him to nearby hospital which was a little near from his home and the area was that where maan lost sight of their vehicle..
he went inside to admit the man.. after completeing the formalities he called the family members of the man getting the details from him…
after getting the confirmation that noting is serious he was about to go when his eye fell on maamaji… he was shocked that what was he doing there… he had a faint idea that when all 3 came together then geet would also be there only… so he hid from maamaji and kept a close view…
after some 5 to 10 minutes geet came from a room and yash came from opposite side where pharmacy was present… maamaji sat down with geet outside the room and yash went inside to give some parcel…
when yash came out geet again went inside.. outside yash and maama seemed tense.. maan was the most tensed… his brain was not at all working… but then to he wanted to know what was going on…
after sometime maama and yash went inside and closed the door… maan went and stood outside the door trying to eve's drop… he opened the door slightly.. all he could see was that there was a doc who was coming out from some room like thing and maama and yash sitting in front of the desk..
maama: doc is there any improvement??

doc: much improvement than expected…

yash: thank god..

doc: but..

yash: but??

doc: I already told u the consequences.. but I would like to remind u again…. after this does she become violent for the need??

yash: not very much doc.. very rarely… even if she then she becomes calm after giving injection… doc is there any serious issue???

doc: nothing serious… but just be careful that anything which increases the hunger of those things must not be there….even she must not be remeinded of it…..else there are many chances that she becomes very violent that it would be impossible to handle her.. even after the session overs…

maama: oh..but are there no chances that she can never be affecetd with those things again in her life??

doc: the chances are very less… according to her medical history her condition is like this because her mother… now whenever she would think of her mom she would try to become violent… u must take very much care of her and give her more love and try to fulfil all her wishes and try to keep her as busy as possible..so that she doesn't remember them…
geet came out and they collected her reports and left the cabin.. maan immediately left the place…everything was roaming in his mind…what happened to her??? what did her mother do??? now where s she??? when he was here before 6 months she was there and her dad was also there only…then where are they now??? all these questions of him and your are waiting for answers….and will be answered soon….
hope u like it…
I know u might have all thought cancer…first I too thought to bring cancer…but since many FF's are having cancer in them I tried to bring something different…hope u like the twist…
PRECAP: answer to all the questions and the last part…

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
maan feeling guilty...
what happened to geet??
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
what happened to geet??

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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN FOUND THEM BUT HE ONLY HEARD PART - WHAT IS WRONG WITH GEET
WHAT WAS IN THE PARCEL
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet ko kya hua maan listening doc and confused



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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh kya twist h me waitingg for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update..hope maan can help geet in what ever problem she is in...babaji..pls protect them..sad it is ending...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
maan feeling guilty
what happened to geet waiting to know

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