Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG FABULOUS FF
maza aa gaya yar
i guess geet ko koi prblm hai thts why she fainted
maan loves her so much yr
waiting
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

sssrfor late reply dear, quite busy

read all parts dear
loved it



no problem dear..

glad u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

agrrhhh Kamini I thought flashback ab aayrga but u stopped there :(

Story is going Damn Interesting


n geet ne maan ko dhoka dia but for pari i think


Areyyyn update jaldi de now i cant wait...

Luv
vanshi


aab aayega...Flash back..

😆😆😆

mein abhi update karthi hun jaan...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

OMG FABULOUS FF
maza aa gaya yar
i guess geet ko koi prblm hai thts why she fainted
maan loves her so much yr
waiting
waiting


glad that u liked it dear...

will try to reveal soon...

updating now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u all for liking and commenting...

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updating now...is any one waiting????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6:

******FLASHBACK****** (in POV of maan.)

it was maan's birthday..that day he was very happy...and that day he wanted to propose geet in front of the whole world.. he went to meet geet morning...

maan: hello jaan..tum kya kar rahi ho??
(hello jaan..what are u doing??)

geet: maan mein tumse baad mein baat karthi hun...
(maan I will talk to u later..)

saying so she cut the call..maan thought it a little odd because she never cut his call like that and she had not even talked to her in that manner..

but then he shrugged it thinking it that something is wrong.. because she never even wished him his birthday..and this never happened in their 8 years of friendship and 5 years of relationship..

maan never liked to go to temple but on his daadi's instance he went that year..and he was very grateful for daadi to force him to go to temple so that he knew the true colour of a person..

he went to temple.. there he was praying to god to fulfil geet's every wish and to make them one at that time the priest was preparing for someone's marriage..

maan's face broke into a huge smile thinking about his and geet's marriage..

he had planned a grand thing for geet in his birthday party.. he wanted to confess his feeling in front of everyone that day and make her his..

these 5 years no one knew about their relation but now he wanted to scream to the world about his life and love geet..
the wanted to see the marriage and wished that the couple gonna marry should stay together forever..
so he went for some time to call his daadi that he would be late..after calling he came back to the temple the groom was sitting near the fire..

he started to dream about him being sitting in the mandap and after sometime the bride was called..


maan was seeing the groom.. when the bride almost reached the mandap and maan saw the bride to get the shock of his life..

here he was dreaming about his and geet's marriage and here geet was getting married to someone else in front of his eyes…
geet's eyes to met his.. maan saw that there was no guilt about being caught.. maan dragged geet in front to the whole temple to a corner to talk to her..

maan: geet yeh kya hai??tum kya kar rahi ho??
(geet what is this??what are u doing??)

geet: maan mein who hi kar rahi hun jo tum dekh rahe ho..
(maan I am doing that only which u are seeing..)

maan: kyun geet???tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho??
(y geet??y are u doing like this??)

geet: chodo mujhe…
(leave me..)
geet pushes his hand which was catching her..then she starts laughing…

geet: tumhara dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai maan.. tumhara jaise gareeb insaan se koun pyaar karega??? mein tho bas tumhe time pass mein use kar rahi thi…aur tum!!!

aaj meri shaadi ho rahi hai maan!!!kisi gareeb insaan se nahi…balki ek aise insaan se jo bohut ameer hai..

maine tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya…mujhe tho paise se pyaar hai…mein tho tumhare paas isliye thi ki 2 saal pehle tum boj-hut ameer the…phir tumhara sab lut gaya…

mein tho tumhe ussi samaj chood ne wali thi phir soocha ki ho saktha hai ki tum wapas ameer ho jao..par tum tho!!! 2 saal ho gaye…mein tho thak gayi tumhare saath gareebi ki zindagi se..isliye meine tumhe chood diya..

(ur mind is spoiled..who will love a poor person like u??i was only time passing with u..

I am marrying today maan!!with not any poor person like u..but a rich person..

I never loved u..i only love money..i came to u at that time when u were rich..but before 2 years u lost everything..

I was going to leave u at that time itself but then I thought that u will get again everything back..but now I am fed up of living a poor life with u..so I left u..)
saying so geet returned to the mandap..not able to bear the heart break maan left the temple at that time itself..
maan returned to his home.. he had to tell geet one more good news that he had got everything back from those who had cheated and got his family's reputation..

but now he hated the money and business which led him to his own destruction..

that day the maan who once loved love was changed to the MSK the one who hate love and the emotions related to it..

after the incident he went abroad leaving the indian business in the care of his daadi and he built a his empire abroad..
he built such a big empire that none can ever cheat him..
he had become a stone hearted person and so cranky that even his employee's started to fear the MSK..

he never saw any girl..if any girl would come to him he would spoil her career..so all feared him..

now due to daadi's instance he had agreed to marry only for her happiness..

******FLASH BACK*****
PRECAP: maan's engagement party..

hope u like it..

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for pms pls buddy "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG..
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Posted: 12 years ago
pata nahi mujhe kyu lag raha he k maan ko sab kuch wapas dilane k liye hi geet ne maan ko cheat karne ka natak kiya .../
geet can never do tihis to maan jarur ye koi badi MU he .plz maan ki shaadi mat karana sameera se ...i want maangeet together .plz plz plz ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayyyee itni jaldi update...it was an awesome one di...geet ki shaadi i m sure shaadi nhi hui hai...bas jaldi se maaneet ki misunderstanding clear kar do...waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
if geet was married than what she is doing in her mayka?may be she had sacrificed her love for some reasons but she was married na than how come she is not in her sasural?

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