Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 3:
geet was inside the kitchen…where as pari made him sit and came to kitchen and ordered geet to make coffee for him.. geet quietly made the coffee..


in the mean time pari called her dad..
maama: arre maan beat!! aap kab videsh se wapas aaye??
(oh maan son!! when did u return from abroad??)

maan: bas kal hi wapas aaya uncle ji… app kaise hai?? aur aunty kaise hai??
(I just returned yesterday..how r u and aunty??)

maama: sab aache hai beta..aapki videsh yatra kaise thi??
(all r fine.. how was your foreign trip??

maan: bas uncle sab kaam ho gaye.. humara business wahan settle ho gaya aur mein wapas aa gaya…
(all the work was completed uncle.. the business was setteled and I came here.)

mamaji: oh bohut aacha hua beta..
(this is very good son..)

pari comes with coffee..maan takes it without noticing her..but then she bends more than needed and maan feels uncomfortable…
even maama saw this and became angry..
maama: pari!!!

pari: ji..ji papa..

maama: tumhari maa kahan hai?
(where is ur mom??)

pari: papa who maa mandir gayi hai…mein bhi jaani wali thi…par jab maanji aaye tho mein yahi rukh gayi unke coffee banane ke liye..aur haan maanji yeh coffee maine aapki liye banayi hai..khaas..
(dad mom had gone to temple..i was also going to go…but maanji came so I stayed to make coffee..and maanji I made this coffee for u..specially..)


maan immediately kept the coffee on the table..

pari: arre maanji yeh aapne coffe kyun rakh di??
(maanji why did u keep the coffee?)

maan: pari mein aaj jaldi mein hun isliye mein yeh coffee nahi pee saktha…phir kabhi piyunga..
(today I m in hurry…so I wont be able to drink coffee..i will drink someother time..)

maama: arre maan beta aise kya jaldi hai??
(maan what is the hurry??)

maan: woh kuch kaam ke liye jaana hai…aur haan yaad aaya…jis kaam ke liye aaya tha who tho hua nahi…yeh lejiye card..
(I had some work…I remember…for which work I came that work is not completed…here is the card..)
saying soo maan gives maama a card..maama opens the card to get surprised…
aab soocho soocho kis cheez ka hoga who card???
mein tho chali…
PRECAP: card and its side effects…

pic credit to the uploaders and google...

HOPE U LIKe THIS...

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i know this part is small...but i am trying to update everyday...

LOADS OF LOVE AG..
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Posted: 12 years ago


what is that card for...

is there any party...

Pari is trying to seduce Maan but Maan don't notice her...

does he also want to see Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey akki nice one re is pari na chichi babaji seductive creature how can she kutha hai wo yuck haye agayemera dreamy and wts the card for nextplz
Edited by lovebirdsmaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update di...ufff this pari can never change but maan ne coffee kyun nhi pee...i m now curious to know ki ye card ka kya chakkar h...waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just awosum updates..pari line maroying on maan..😆but maan ne kuch responce hi nahi diya..excited for next part..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

pari trying to seduce maan but maan searching for geet

now whats that card for
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
this Pari is so irritating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ho...toh maan came to see geet...he started drinking coffee coz he thought it made by geet...but whn he heard pari's lie...he kept d cup...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all updates are so small that it sounds like teaser and seciondly you said u are not regular updater than what is the use of start reading and left halfway though start is good but i will appreciate instead of giving irregular updates make this ss or os rather than long ff,as it will maintain continuity of the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Work Glitter Graphic Awesome

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