Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

nice start dear loved all the parts


glad u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
nice...
Geet got married?
but shes alone here in Pari's home...
cont soon...


glad u liked it..

will try to update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jassdip

Nice story
I read all parts in one go
I think Geet did this fake marriage fr sake of Maan bright future


glad u liked it..

will try to reveal soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi..

thank u all for liking and commenting for this story..

i have replied to all the comments...

The following 26 member(s) liked the above post:

Aakshitha, maaneetkisonali, MISHAGOYAL, kabslocks, ashwimaaneet, nat10,


am updating now..

hope u like that too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 7:

it was time for the party…maan was getting ready half heartedly..all the guests had started coming.. maama, maami, yash and pari had come..

daadi welcomed them..they were neighbours from many years and good friends too..

the party was held in the garden.. the place was decorated like a bride.. y not it was the engagement of The Maan Singh Khurana.. the most eligible bachelor of india.. but now taken by a girl from delhi..
maan came wearing a sherwani..


he was busy in his business guests.. suddenly his eyes caught the staring pair of eyes of someone.. but then he could not see it again.. he was feeling restless..
he searched here and there.. he found maama and his family but not geet.. he became more restless.. but then he thought that she might be busy in her husband.. this made maan more irritated..
after sometime the bride came with her family..


maan had never met her family coz this marriage was fixed when he was abroad..he had only met sameera..

when he saw the person coming with the bride his blood started to boil.. but he didn't want to create a scene there..
sameera came to maan and introduced to her family..
sam: maan mere bade bhai hai DEV chopra
(maan this is my elder brother DEV chopra)
maan was trying to control his anger and heartbeats thinking to meet geet after 6 whole months..but as someone's wife and Sister in law.. but the next set of sam's words brought him back..
Sam: maan yeh hai naintara, dev bhai ki wife..
(maan she is naintara, dev bhai's wife..)

maan was shocked would be an understatement to explain his emotion at that time.. he wanted to kill dev for cheating on his geet.. he was very angry on dev and wanted to do something..
when the party stated he felt again that someone is staring him…when he turned again he saw the pair of eyes.. this time he saw the eyes a little deeply.. immediately he knew whose pair of eyes where those..
he went to maama's home.. the home was not locked.. he straight went to the kitchen.. there he saw the preson who never left his mind ever.. the person who used to be his life..
it was none other than geet.. she was till now viewing their garden and trying to see the happening.. maan became angry..
maan: geet..
geet stilled.. she wanted to hide somewhere and never come in front of him after doing this to him..
maan: geet mujhe nahi dekhogi??? yeh nahi dekhna chougi ki mein kaisa hun??
(wont u see me?? don't u want to know how am i???)

geet: maan chale jau yahan se…
(maan go from here..)

maan: haan haan chala jaounga…waise bhi tumhari jaisi ladki ke sang rehna koun pasand karega?? tum jaisi dhoke baas ke saath tho aise hi hona tha.. kya koi aur usse ameer mil gaya??

(yes yes…I will go..BTW who will want to be with a cheater like u??cheater like u will face this only.. did u get any one more rich then him??)

geet: matlab..
(means??)

maan: ha.. geet bohut aacha natak kar lethi ho tum..mein kaise bhul saktha hun tumhare issi natak ke jaal mein mei phas gaya…tho koi aur ki kya baat hai

(u act very nice..how can I forget.. in this acting only I was cheated..then if anyone else is cheated then not a new thing..)

geet: maan pls jao yahan se..
(pls go from here..)

maan: tum mujhe apna chera kyun nahi dikha rahi??
(y are u not showing me your face??)

geet: wo..woh kuch nahi…bas tum jao yahan se…tumhare saagai hone wali hai….
(umm.. umm nothing…enough u go from here…ur engagement is going to happen…)

maan: geeettt…
maan tries to pull her because she was acting stubborn.. and he wanted to talk to her.. she started to struggle to come out of his grip.. but he was very strong for her..
geet was getting tired of fighting and today she didn't take her medicines.. she the tiredness and the effect took toll on her and she fainted..

maan was shocked.. when he made her lie down on the kitchen floor she was shocked seeing her..

soocho soocho kya ho saktha hai??

mein tho chali…

PRECAP: reason for geet's fainting..

hope u like it..

waiting for ur response...

for pms pls buddy "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
I think Geet suffering frm sum disease
Suspense again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
dev toh sameera ka bhai nikla and married too
maan met geet and geet fainted but you at the climax
update soon next part
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Posted: 12 years ago


thank God Dev is Sameera's brother...this way Maan came to know about Geet...

why he is shocked...

very interesting update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya chote chote updates deti ho?thoda bada wala dogi to kuch coment karenge na kutch raj to hai lekin kya chalo jaldi se fatafat dusra update dedo...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awosum parts...i think dev ne geet ko dhoka diya..poor geet...do continue soon..excited for next part

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