Lamhe intezaar ke-mera samarpan..part 9 pg 55 26/7 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kingofme


thank u for liking the prolouge...😃😃

all thanks to the mind of maaneetians for the title..😉😉

haan haan sure will pm u...😆😆



Philse Meleko Thankyu Bola😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: preeti555

awesome starting
cont soon



thank u soo much for liking...

will update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet

hai aks ji


wow u started this

congrats for this

and it was looking interesting

she was looking for him from soo many years

waiting for more

plz updatesoon


hey hi...

😃😃

glad u liked it...

dreamy right???

will update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24


thank u for liking this... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet



Philse Meleko Thankyu Bola😭



arre sorry baba...mistake wa hoi gayi...

abb nahi bolungi...
and now comeon smile...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: spvd

prologue
nice one...
cont soon dear...



thank you for liking this story...

will update now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
thank u all for liking the prolouge...

and for the lovely comments and likes...

posting the 1st part in a while...

will wait for ur response...

i reaplied to al the coments...

LOADS OF LOVE AG

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: kingofme



arre sorry baba...mistake wa hoi gayi...

abb nahi bolungi...
and now comeon smile...😊😊


u HAmesha aise hi bolte ho
Next tym agar bola nah toh me aapse katti kar lungi...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1:
early morning at 4:30 am
someone was knocking a door.
"geet geet…jaldi utt kaam chor…" (geet up laxy bum.)
the girl gets up hurridly and opens the door.

"pranaam maami" (good morning aunty.)


" haan haan.. chal aab kaam suru kar jaldi."(yes yes.. now go and do work.)

"ji aayi maami.. bas 2 minute mein." (yes..coming aunty in 2 minutes.)

"hmm jaldi…sirf 2 minute.." (good soon..only 2 minute.)
the lady goes out and geet comes freshen up in 1 minutes and dressed up simplyly she then prayed to her babaji

and go to her routine..

first she goes and prepares tea for everyone.. she then goes to give the tea to her maami and her maama.. her maami just ignored her..but her maama caressed her cheek lovingly..


then she went to wake her cousins up.. she had 2 cousins.. that is her maami's son and daughter pari


and yash…

pari was just like her mom and yash like her dad..

yash got up almost immediately but pari as usual cribbing to get up when yash put water over her.. this is the usual way to wake pari up…
later geet prepared breakfast and served all…pari the fashion queen came getting ready in some fashionable clothes whose colour was disturbing eyes… but none said her anything…and her mom used to encourage her..
breakfast was aloo paratha for maama, yash and geet and cornflakes for pari and maami… they want to maintain their figure..
after breakfast geet prepared lunch soon and went to college… geet, yash and pari are in same college… geet and yash were same year whereas pari was 1 year younger.
That's all for this part..

the pic creadit goes to the uploader and google..😉😉

Precap: geet's college life… 😃


hope u like this part..

waiting for ur reviews eagerly...

sorry for the spelling mistakes...

for pms pls buddy "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet


u HAmesha aise hi bolte ho
Next tym agar bola nah toh me aapse katti kar lungi...😉



ok baba...aab nahi bolungi...(try karungi..)😆😆

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