MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww so sweet part i love the way maan handled geet.. Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
i could not read last few parts when you pm'd me...
read everything just now...
fabulous updates!!!
hope maan punishes dev..
thanks for the pm and continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing.lovely maaneet moments.eagerly waiting 4 maaneet marriage
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Posted: 12 years ago


MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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PART --27


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MAAN to mohindar: DAD I'M very happy ke aap thik ho gaya...
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mohindar smiles: Main bhi bohot kush hu beta ke meri GEET ko tumhare jesa jivan sathe milne wala hain...
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maan: dad mujhe aapse dev ke bare main kuch puchna hain...
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mohi: ha bete bolo...
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maan: dev abhi kaha hain??
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mohi: maine police main de diya hain.. try to attemp rape case main...
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maan: dad main chahta hu ke main usse apne tarah se usko sazza du... i hope aapko use koi problem nahi hai...
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mohi: nahi bete hume kya problem hoge... aur wese bhi mujhe yaken hain police se behtar tum usse uske gunah ki saza doge... humare GEET ke sath usne jo kiya uski usse kare se kare saza hone chahiye...
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maan: sirf apke ha ki der thi dad... AAB MAIN DEV KA WOH HAL KARUNGA,KE DEKHNE WALO KI RUHH KAP UTHEGE...😡
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MOHI: But apna khayal rakhna bete...
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maan : ji dad... mujhe aapse ek aur jaruri baat karne thi dad...
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mohi: ha bolo bete...
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aan { in one breath}: DAD woh mujhe GEET se jald se jald shadii karne hain... I knw dad bohot sare tayari karne hote hain shadi main... but aap plz tension maat lijiye... main sab sambhal lunga... .. Nd i knw shadi ke barre main sab baree baat karte hain... main apke dadi se bhi baat karwa dunga... but plz dad SHADI ke liye naa maat kehna...
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mohi: BETE hume koi aapati nahi hain... GEET aur tum agar kush ho toh hume kya chahiye...
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maan: really dad... {hug him} I LOVE YOU DAD... U R THE BEST...😊😊
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MOHI: thore pyar mere geet ke liye bhi rehne do...
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maan smiles 😳 : uske liye toh bohot pyar hain DAD...
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Mohi: baass bete mere bache ko uhi pyar karte rehna...
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maan: Meri aakhri saas thak sirf usko he pyar karunga dad...
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... GEET CAME ...
GEET: dinnar is ready...
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mohi: maan bete opps damaad ji aap bhi chaliye...
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maan: ji sasur ji chaliye...
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geet start blushing...


THEY ATE DINNER TOGETHERLY...
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MOHI: GEET main apne kamre mai jaa raha hu... tum MAAN ko ache se bye bol ke wida kar do...
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geet 😳 : dad... aap bhi na...
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mohi: mere pyari geet... 😊
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maan: DAD kal dadi aa rahe hain...
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mohi: OK BETA main kal unse baat kar lunga...
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maan: good night dad..
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mohi: good night...😊
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...MOHINDAR LEFT...
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MAAN: So would be MRS.KHURANA aap kush toh hain na??
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geet: bohot jiyada... I LOVE YOU... { HUG HIM}
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MAAN: shadi ki baat pakki ho gaye aur sirf gale laga rahe ho... Mu toh mitha karwao...
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geet: main abhi late hu...
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maan pull her close: main uss mithe ki baat nahi kar raha hu...
looking to her lips: mujhe yeh wala chahiye...
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geet: MAAN ... abhi nahi dad ne dekh liya toh...
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maan: dad room main hain geet... koi nahi dekhe ga... ek KISS toh bante hain..
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geet: maan plzz nahi... mujhe sharam aate hain..😳
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maan: mujhse sarmao ge toh shadi ke baad kya karoge??😉😉😉
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geet: shadi ke baad ki baat baad main dekhn ge .. par abhi nahi plzz...
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maan: tum agar kisi baat ke liye raje nahi ho toh main tumhe kabhi force nahi karunga..😊😊 i respect ur feelings...
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geet: I LOVE YOU A LOT MAAN...
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MAAN : LOVE YOU TOO PRINCESS...
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PRECAP: WEDDING PREPARATION...😳

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
awesome part
maaneet going to married

part 27
nice part
maan going to give saaza to dev in his style
geet dad agreed for maariage
loved maaneet chota sa cute sa moment
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
vow maaneet going to marry
i read all 22 to 27 parts now
i am busy sorry for late liking and comments
superb update
hate dev
waiting for maaneet wedding
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just read all in one go.. nice ff yaar.. dev that .. thank god mohinder saved geet.. cont soon hun.. cant wait for maaneet wedding..
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Posted: 12 years ago
love maan and dad's convo very much
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Posted: 12 years ago



awesome update...

Geet's dad is alright now and he has decided to marry them...

now they are going to get married soon...

loved Maaneet moments...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow so lovely.awsm maaneet moment.uf maan wants the sweet of kiss.haye

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