my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 26

this is not how things should have ended between them...maan was ready to put behind his past and make a fresh start...but geet's untimely angry words has broken his heart all over again, feeling exptremely sorry for him...that bloody man anant is such a scheming bas***d to stoop so low to get them apart..wondering how things are going to get set into motion to bring all misunderstandings getting cleared between them and realise what a crook anant has been all these years

when i was reading ILWE ,, i never have any idea .. it will act AS DRUG for me ..

Will you be updating today...

awesome update
I have a fear now Mr raichanda will use arjun n dia's presence together in Kanpur as a weapon to create more misunderstanding between arjun n geet n he will present vikas as witness as vikas was stalking them n he had seen them leaving hotel together he will also take his veagenance on geet for rejecting him over arjun n say dia n arjun have illicit relation...oh I m just saying don't do dis Reet ...or else I will kill geet for believing dat vikas over arjun n for doubting him... Arjun is already shattered wid geet's words...how can a person stoop so low I mean to create diff between both dat oldy(well sorry to say him oldy I adore n respect old ppl a lot but can't help I don't feel like taking his name) did dat wid his own grandchild...Arjun wat to say abt him my poor boy totally shattered...
Reet I wanna say sumthing to u I noticed on thing in ur ff ur female lead characters are strong geet here n in ILWE both...n abt ur writing I love dat u don't make ur female lead only to suffer but even male lead as much as female is suffering...I thank u for writing one more ff...n u know again u made me teary with dis painful part n at dat moment I knew u r truly coming back n wen u make me sob (like did with me atleast by writing in ILWE enemy even after reading dat ff N number of time) with one or two painful part I will say u r fully back (sorry or last statement don't feel bad I just felt like saying coz whenever u wrote n emotional part u made me cry)
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY dont feel bad(I m holding my ears n doing sit ups) .
thanks for update n update soon.

beautiful love the whole part i found it similar to devdas movie how we hurt our loved ones bcz of things we don't have in our hands and ultimately hurt ourselves why love has to suffer in this cruel world i hope these two got each other in the end but i m loving reading their journey of love u r an awesome writer keep doing good work love u bye

nice update

getting more and more messy for maneet!!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

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well . thanx for pointing out the most important part . that putting the scenes in order. i accept its difficult to me but however i was not sure if they are co relates. cause while i know the story i have in my mind . but my readers dont know . nobody except you have put up the point . thanx . do tell me if they are not synchronous. i really like intelligent criticism .
everybody here writes a love story . but the presenting them is the difference.
i try to do that .
if i do good or not u are the one to decide. not me. lol i know the story . thats why i cant judge it .
thank you onir .
i loved weher u liked the characters in grey . cause one day i want to write a solid intense story where every charecter is grey .no body black or white . cause in reality none is black and white .

keep replying dear . and if u wud point out the parts where i lack i wud love it more. cause that makes my reader more intelligent than me.

I feel intelligence is a perception ... and also the dynamics relates to how you play with it.

awesome part...so many things happened within a short time...aargh anant raichand played the game today😡 hating him more with each part...i almost blved that it was maan who reduced her marks...but y did he do that to his own grand daughter...does he love her at all/??l

an update is here !

i havnt finished replying your comments yet n the thread has flooded with such lovely replies .

what to say .

i m so lucky to be this loved !

thank you . i m just posting the update . pms tomorrow with another chapter probably ,
lol need to finish this fiction quick