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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

this is not how things should have ended between them...maan was ready to put behind his past and make a fresh start...but geet's untimely angry words has broken his heart all over again, feeling exptremely sorry for him...that bloody man anant is such a scheming bas***d to stoop so low to get them apart..wondering how things are going to get set into motion to bring all misunderstandings getting cleared between them and realise what a crook anant has been all these years

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NephilimByHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

when i was reading ILWE ,, i never have any idea .. it will act AS DRUG for me ..

you write so well reet .. dat after u left dat ff ..i went through each social networking site to search for your real account .. but i lost hope after smtym ..

again after 1 year almost i read your dis ff ... n its toxicating man ... i loved it through my heart ..

i still have dat story which u left in middle ..

but connecting with sir arjun is far more easy den connecting with maan ( man with the mask) ... even charcters in dat ff were my fvrt ...

i wish u could cmplt dat also ...

anyhow loved ur work ,,, plz dont intrrupt it by any means

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riyasp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Will you be updating today...

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SOLACEofEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

awesome update
I have a fear now Mr raichanda will use arjun n dia's presence together in Kanpur as a weapon to create more misunderstanding between arjun n geet n he will present vikas as witness as vikas was stalking them n he had seen them leaving hotel together he will also take his veagenance on geet for rejecting him over arjun n say dia n arjun have illicit relation...oh I m just saying don't do dis Reet ...or else I will kill geet for believing dat vikas over arjun n for doubting him... Arjun is already shattered wid geet's words...how can a person stoop so low I mean to create diff between both dat oldy(well sorry to say him oldy I adore n respect old ppl a lot but can't help I don't feel like taking his name) did dat wid his own grandchild...Arjun wat to say abt him my poor boy totally shattered...
Reet I wanna say sumthing to u I noticed on thing in ur ff ur female lead characters are strong geet here n in ILWE both...n abt ur writing I love dat u don't make ur female lead only to suffer but even male lead as much as female is suffering...I thank u for writing one more ff...n u know again u made me teary with dis painful part n at dat moment I knew u r truly coming back n wen u make me sob (like did with me atleast by writing in ILWE enemy even after reading dat ff N number of time) with one or two painful part I will say u r fully back (sorry or last statement don't feel bad I just felt like saying coz whenever u wrote n emotional part u made me cry)
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY dont feel bad(I m holding my ears n doing sit ups) .
thanks for update n update soon.

Edited by SOLACEofEYES - 12 years ago

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soniaz121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

beautiful love the whole part i found it similar to devdas movie how we hurt our loved ones bcz of things we don't have in our hands and ultimately hurt ourselves why love has to suffer in this cruel world i hope these two got each other in the end but i m loving reading their journey of love u r an awesome writer keep doing good work love u bye

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

nice update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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nga0130

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

getting more and more messy for maneet!!

wonder when.. they'd steer clear of all d manipulation..

eagerly waiting for the next part..

continue soon..

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet
😳comments that touched my heart

well . thanx for pointing out the most important part . that putting the scenes in order. i accept its difficult to me but however i was not sure if they are co relates. cause while i know the story i have in my mind . but my readers dont know . nobody except you have put up the point . thanx . do tell me if they are not synchronous. i really like intelligent criticism .
everybody here writes a love story . but the presenting them is the difference.
i try to do that .
if i do good or not u are the one to decide. not me. lol i know the story . thats why i cant judge it .
thank you onir .
i loved weher u liked the characters in grey . cause one day i want to write a solid intense story where every charecter is grey .no body black or white . cause in reality none is black and white .

keep replying dear . and if u wud point out the parts where i lack i wud love it more. cause that makes my reader more intelligent than me.

I feel intelligence is a perception ... and also the dynamics relates to how you play with it.

Your USP is the different theme here, I know that its somewhere a love story but then the route/path to it has various parallel forces that make it all the more interesting and keep me curious and causes me to wait in anticipation about what comes next.

About grey characters then I feel none can be too white or too black ... its human tendency to be grey. We are too bounded by our own needs & egos that cause us to behave so. Its also dependent on what is the view the person holds in situations that causes them to be grey, white or black ... Vikas & dia and for that matter even Anant are all molds in different intensity & shades of grey. I even categorize Geet & Maan somewhere have a grey side even if it is actually their pain. so that's the reason why I love the portrayals of them in sync with the whole picture.

And yes for a reader to be perceived as intelligent the writer is much more intelligent... as said earlier Intelligence is a perception... 😊

I have yet to read the chapter 15 ... will read it & comment at leisure... 😊

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

awesome part...so many things happened within a short time...aargh anant raichand played the game today😡 hating him more with each part...i almost blved that it was maan who reduced her marks...but y did he do that to his own grand daughter...does he love her at all/??l

your style of writing is very different dear and it is awesome/...thank u for comin back,,...

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Reet !

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

an update is here !

i havnt finished replying your comments yet n the thread has flooded with such lovely replies .

what to say .

i m so lucky to be this loved !

thank you . i m just posting the update . pms tomorrow with another chapter probably ,
lol need to finish this fiction quick