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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 15: Oh my that was painful. Very painful. I don't know whom should I feel more for Maan or for Geet.

They both are equally hurt ... and their reactions were something I expected out of the whole web they are in woven so cruelly & manipulatively by Anant. Though somewhere I had expected something drastic to take place by Anant's knowledge of something going on but didn't know it will leave everything so shattered with just bits of hurt & broken hearts needing desperate tending to & putting them together yet the cracks will be visible & painful. If he can do something so solid & evil just for someone he felt could ruin his reputation and go ahead and hurt his so pretended love for his granddaughter then if he comes to know that the said person is Maan then I dread to imagine what steps he will take.

I wouldn't blame Anant completely though ... Its mainly due to their own insecurities & pain that has caused the budding relation to be crumbling so badly & cruelly. I would say Anant was smart & quite experienced to use Geet's weaknesses to make his hold stronger & his will to manifest.

It must have been quite hurting for Maan to hear such accusations when we was going to propose her. But then he too here is not so forthcoming. He too has remained in shadows & has somewhere given fuel to Geet's fears & inner self doubt. If he was ready to put the past behind and start anew by proposing her then why did he go to kanpur, why didn't he soothe her in her times of doubt, why did he brush of her sadness on his rejection. He is equally to be blamed I suppose. He isn't put his past to rest so this hurt was needed & was quite good it happened because if not so then again their relation would be on unsteady grounds & foundations. Reet in one single part you make feel varied emotions for your characters. Maan here in one part... I adore, love, find me so charming, so teenager to plan for proposing, hate him for doing favours for Dia (though its his own need to help her reasons known and justified by him... ) Awesome writing. 👏

Geet is bound to have been so. Her nature though impulsive is also very insecure. Her Dadaji used it for her own downfall. Her anger took the better of her. Also it was her own inferiority feelings, dejection and self doubt & deeply wounded soul that was brought out in form of blind anger that broke him & hurt both the most. It will haunt her more now...

Beautiful blend of characters & intensity of human nature & dynamics... Loved it ... 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



It is like that isn't it... 😆

And Reet wonders how come we don't comment quickly 😆

Avi I WAS SO INTO THE CHAPTER 15... the whole feel is yet sinking in... 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
Res ... 😉
I'm reserving but don't know how long it will take for unreserving... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeppie update on its way!
hey Reet where do u live btw?
n do read my comment on pg40 I want u to read dat one n u can throw chappals at me after reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
is it complete can we start reading?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Avi I WAS SO INTO THE CHAPTER 15... the whole feel is yet sinking in... 😳



I know what you mean Onir! I love her writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


I know what you mean Onir! I love her writing.

Me too... i love the way her characters mingle here... shows her depth and touch with the characters...

I see chapter 16 is updated... another few hours of being bowled over by the writing ... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 15: Oh my that was painful. Very painful. I don't know whom should I feel more for Maan or for Geet.


They both are equally hurt ... and their reactions were something I expected out of the whole web they are in woven so cruelly & manipulatively by Anant. Though somewhere I had expected something drastic to take place by Anant's knowledge of something going on but didn't know it will leave everything so shattered with just bits of hurt & broken hearts needing desperate tending to & putting them together yet the cracks will be visible & painful. If he can do something so solid & evil just for someone he felt could ruin his reputation and go ahead and hurt his so pretended love for his granddaughter then if he comes to know that the said person is Maan then I dread to imagine what steps he will take.

I wouldn't blame Anant completely though ... Its mainly due to their own insecurities & pain that has caused the budding relation to be crumbling so badly & cruelly. I would say Anant was smart & quite experienced to use Geet's weaknesses to make his hold stronger & his will to manifest.

It must have been quite hurting for Maan to hear such accusations when we was going to propose her. But then he too here is not so forthcoming. He too has remained in shadows & has somewhere given fuel to Geet's fears & inner self doubt. If he was ready to put the past behind and start anew by proposing her then why did he go to kanpur, why didn't he soothe her in her times of doubt, why did he brush of her sadness on his rejection. He is equally to be blamed I suppose. He isn't put his past to rest so this hurt was needed & was quite good it happened because if not so then again their relation would be on unsteady grounds & foundations. Reet in one single part you make feel varied emotions for your characters. Maan here in one part... I adore, love, find me so charming, so teenager to plan for proposing, hate him for doing favours for Dia (though its his own need to help her reasons known and justified by him... ) Awesome writing. 👏

Geet is bound to have been so. Her nature though impulsive is also very insecure. Her Dadaji used it for her own downfall. Her anger took the better of her. Also it was her own inferiority feelings, dejection and self doubt & deeply wounded soul that was brought out in form of blind anger that broke him & hurt both the most. It will haunt her more now...

Beautiful blend of characters & intensity of human nature & dynamics... Loved it ... 👏

Onir: don't you think Geet has the right to be so. I mean look at the way she was raised after her father's death and then Maan leaves. I am sure she hides a world of doubts behind the bindaas nature of hers..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi I absolutely agree that Geet was bound to behave so... its her insecurities that are affecting her.She needs to overcome them and break the shackles her dadaji has bound her to... Only an emotion as strong as passionate love, uninhibited trust and constant touch of belonging can make a whole person ready to give in and equally share her bond with her love...

Just my view... did I make sense or it was just weird ramblings... 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Avi I absolutely agree that Geet was bound to behave so... its her insecurities that are affecting her.She needs to overcome them and break the shackles her dadaji has bound her to... Only an emotion as strong as passionate love, uninhibited trust and constant touch of belonging can make a whole person ready to give in and equally share her bond with her love...

Just my view... did I make sense or it was just weird ramblings... 😕




You made perfect sense Doc! I want her to stand up to her grandfather now for him. That is the only way he will heal.

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