my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 25

my dear, after reading the update I was so mourning over the fight , as it seems it happened to me. Such was your writing prowess. I feel like each and every scene play on my head like movie scene. I got the picture of college, maan's room everything. Lilac Lilac !!! I smell it when I read that line hmm., you take me to a world of total bliss. Don't want to tell you anything, other than your writing skills. Keep on writing please. … 👏

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

imp note :

to sarita and my dear readers - i tend to include piece of literature here and there .
q is how do i get them .my mom had recomended me crime and punishment by feodor dostoevsky. . i had read that before i joined med school . john webster is a world famous writer and duchess of Malfi is a classic. sarita if you get time you should read it . the poem of virtue from astrophel and stella by philip sidney is a sonnet series i got my hands on while googling . so tried putting it on .


about astrophel (star lover) and stella (star ) the sonnet series is about how the poet is in irrevocably in love with stella and he hopes he would understand his pain for loving her. he has described her as cold beauty . very nice sonnets u can google them .

but if you are feeling bored i can stop using them , personally i think they keeps the flow.


well i try to do research before writing a fiction .
lol he is english teacher , she is a student . what more you expect them to do . avi complains i use medical terms so much in my writing its in me. she had to ask her husband about the meaning . lol .

now next post will contain the comments reply and next the update . dont finish reading until i remove the red letters .

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

comments that touched my heart



god sarita i wud need a hell lot of time to explain this colors . but seriously you are the best . i love ur questions .
i have been a book worm since i was 6 . and my mom guided me in a few ways . rest i caught up in the journey . and no i didnt read a single stry book while doing mbbs. but couldnt forget indiaforum and its passionate fictions. love it really . if i m a writer i m because of indiaforum.

i dont know why do i have a mind of a writer .trust me seriously . my husband is like a medical machine .he doesnt understand a word outside medicine .but my father being also a doc , he managed to read a lot . but he didnt write . so when i picked up this habit .one of my friend asked my the same question doctor and writer ? guess i dont have answers .
i m very imaginative from the childhood. always day dreaming lol .. so that makes the plot .rest i dont know .

u know i loved scrubs and greys anatomy (watched till season 4 still continuing . i wud rather read than watch :D) . as fiction i dont watch a show until its finished as far as my memory serves private practice is still on one quick question is karev there ? alex karev ? i like his no nonsense attitude .
oh by the way tell me another thing when we are at this discussion . i hav been planning write a fiction on medico's for quite a few years now would people like them ? i mean being all doctor stuff .

And finally coming to the update.

Oh god!! Am I the only one who needed some time to collect themselves before giving thr view. Damn that was Sooo painful. Not even a single moment I cud have peace abt!! YES not even when he bought the ring..thanks to dia 🤢mujhe bardassht nhi hoti wo**grrr***

mamma left and she didn't come back . now papa and you .. both of you are leaving . you would not come back too.

The tug at my heart..Ahh..clenched. Geet has gone through so much and is still going thru. She deserves life, a beautiful one.

I will always come back for you , even if you hate me .again and again . So much maturity from a teenaged maan..he didn't know how true it would turn out! So much for the promises maan, can u keep it??

you kept repeating Maan maan: so wow that's a revelation, she still at heart belongs to him..is it..or its just abandonment issues??Only time will tell.

What maan . whose maan . whose respect she was talking about ? Hahaa Su just destroyed the moment by making it utterly humerous..maan=respect and not a person *dim wit* but she was adorable in the way she was trying to protect geet till she can. Developing side characters well *thumbs up* ANd btw Su reminds me of ILWE😭

Exactly . shut it geet ! stop expecting . stop saying may be .. that's what it hurts most ! The dilemma she is ubdergoing..makes up for the whole concept of FF. I love that constant fight she undergoes every waking moment!

tender heart she had got under the spiteful tongue: This sums up the whole essence of geets character in a sentence!!

I . NEED . IT.

Okay now here I am torn between dia/ geet and uday scholarship. The million dollar question..WHO deserves it. And yes the answer cant be that simple. On one hand here is dia..who needs it and her hard work speaks for the chance. On the contrary stands a woman who has a lot emotional value associated there! He is her DAD! No matter if she is sound financially..at least maan shd have thght abt that fact. For dia every scholarship wud have meant the same..for geet that was like bng closer to the only man she ever loved her father And secondly we all have seen she is a good student as well. So how do u decide..who deserved it :/ 😕I cant.

Hello dev . Namaste ! she politely said as dev withdrawn the semi raised hand for a handshake . he shook his head with a hurried namastey . HAHAHA..dev ka to LOL hi ho gya!!

'that too with her fiance' SHIT WHAT!!!! The chit of anant!! Okay I kind of liked him till now..he was a grey character..and you need that in every story. At the end of the day he loves geet! But this update just broke all my notions! How could he..poor geet..No oNE has understood her heart till date!! I was all the while feeling bad for her... i was seething at Maan…till the tables turned in his apartment. Man..I was shaken by d intensity of his grief. You are so biased reet..maan got to explain is his front right now and right then, but you will never give geet an opportunity for that :P wrna masala kse bnega😆. The way events are taking place,Vikas, dia , anant, past.. I wont be surprised if some major misunderstandings are coming our way. But then no complains..thats what makes a story 😊 So keep going!!

And yeah don't fret abt proof reading..no body cares!! You already have ur hands full 😊 We at IF have the hidden talent of understanding most poorly written english lol. and you on d contrary here are a genius. So leave it when it starts to tk a toll.

PS: I am again unbearably long 🥱