MG FF ESSENCE OF LOVE- THREAD-4/ PART-45-59

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Part:-45
Geets house.
Geet bring tea for kaka, snakes and b.coffee for Maan
Dishu settled on maans lap and started to feed him. Maan laughed and he started to feed dishu.
Geet:- Dishu beta, isa nahi baiththe, getdown and have snacks fr. ur plate.
Maan:- nahi, ise rehnedijiye, mujhe accha lagtha hai, ye meri dost hai aur ye hum dosthonki beech ki baath hai, aap beech me math aayiye? kyu dishu?
Dishu:- haa,, dost. ur correct. per nani ko bura lagthahaina?
[ she dont want to let down her nani, looking geet with puppy face]
Geet:-smiled saying 'noutanki '
Dishu face lighted up with 1000 wats bulb, yeaah. nani mangayi, she jumped in joy.
Geet:- Aap kuch puchne waalithi na?
Maan:- haa, actually i want to buy the tourism co. isiliye tho mai tour me aayithi to know the pblms and profits etc..
Geet:- per is me meri openion ka kya jarurat thi?
Maan:_ Actually the com. is under loss. it some how cannot able to reach the peoples trust. once i took that com. i want to bring it to the no.1 position. so here i want all actual pblms u face in the tour and where they lack to reach the heart of people,and wat r the remedies u suggest to gain the trust of people,wat do u feel in this respect.As u also there in that tour u may observe some difficulties r to say frankly faults of organisers r regarding the tour arrangments, hotels and food everything.
I know u always think about others welfare, so can u suggest some difficulties and faults that u noticed in the trip regarding everything. And if u have any remedies to the problems suggest me how we can reach the peoples trust.
Geet:_ haa,.. i observed some pblms.and i have some ideas,but i dont know how far they can be applicable by the com.
Maan:- wat r they first u tell me later we can think about their practicality.
[ guys here i am giving ideas according to my openion i too dont know how far they possible so please take as writers liberty]
Geet:- First of all in my openion,the major percentage of tourists will belong to middle age and above middle age. so we should cocentrate on this middle age people requirements.
The first and foremost is the health problem. At this age most of the people will suffer with b.p. and sugar, braething pblm, heart pblm.et...etc.. so i thought there should be a dr. in each and every bus, because anything happens at anytime. we cannot say it. so in emergency there should be a dr. and necessary medicines, a male attendant for male and , a female attendant for females. Food is also prepared separately according to their want i..e.. less oil and less spicy low fat etc...
Secondly there should be toilet facilities in the bus it self as in trains and planes. it is not possible to sugar patients to control longer. A wheel chair must be there.
Thirdly some patients will not sit long journeys hrs a few sleeper beds should be there to relax.
There should be an attendant who should take care of children during journey they can engage them with some activities, so that children will not feel bored.
The tour guides and drivers must be friendly with tourists. 2 drivers must be there taking shifts.
We should organise some entertainment in journey and it should be not playing movies etc..etc..
It should be like this';;
Interaction between tourists. in the tourists there may be dr,lawyers, psychiatrists, teachers,professors,phylosofists, politicians etc...etc... fr. all professions. so we can make them to take classes,,in the journey it self like if any yoga trainer is there they can teach others yoga, meditation etc... if musician is there can teach something like that wat ever their field they can interact with others. it brings people close and finally at the end of the tour they feel they belong to a single family,and they can feel the trip like a family trip. After the trip also they will be in contact and hosaktha hai tho plan another trip with our com. and this will be the reputation to our com.
Every time geet mention our com. maan felt happy and ownness
The first and very impartant thing u should take carei s about roads. Most of the places especially pilgrims , there r not proper pakka roads.,as many of them located on mountains.. But we should not neglect that throwing the responsible on government..As com. is also having benifit there should be some responsibility to the com.. too. there r no. of com. in tourism, they can offer some share to govt. then govt take more interest in maintaining roads. AT start the profits maybe less but on long run it will beneficiable. the journey hrs will be reduced. it may ultimately helpfull the com. the longivity of the buses will increase and the damage cost will be reduced.
At starting it will not be possible but on long run these measures surely work to reach hearts of people. At pilgrim centers u can arrange stalls fr. ur co. so that tourists can get the required things for offering to god at a minimal prize,because at that centers the prizes r too high, they may not permit their budget.. before the tour starts , u may held a meeting and inform them to told ur tour programme and wat things required to offer god. so that they can arrange them fr. here.
Maan keep looking at her in awe, how she gave no.. of suggestions in one go.
Geet:- i know these reforms will cost lot ,but the amount u spend on publicity through all media, and internet will sufficient for this.
Maan remembered Nainatars advise to sped on publicity,by media etc...etc...,here geet is giving impartance to oral publicity. he smiled comparing nainatara to geet.

Precap:-Maan offers M.D. post to geet.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:- 46
Geet continued.
The people who felt homely,and who r treated as our guests can deffinitely does the publicity work. The mouth publicity is more countable than the medias i think. And i think this will increase our. com. reputation to ur expected level.
Every time she mentioned "our company"maan felt hapiness, hearing fr. her mouth"our" word.
Maans s.t.:-'My god", he murmered in himself. Itna observation, understanding,analising the pblms, more than me and kitni analised solutions for every pblms and estimation, the way she gave so many solutions, wat happens if i offer her M.D.post of tourism com. Diffinitely she will bring up it to my expected level. She will deffinitely excell in it.
" Well said geet. Tumhari suggestions bahut accha hai,aur i think deffinitely ,they fetch our com. a lot. Surely our com. become a no. 1. if u be the M.D. for that com.
Geet and Arpitha shocked hearing that fr. maan.
Kya?geet asked shockingly. 😲
Arpitha:- aap kya kahrahi ho sir, Maa,..aur M.D.?😲
Maan:- haa.,, arpitha i am offering M.D. post to ur mother. i believe she will lead it to a great level.
Geet:- nahi.. she spatted.
I dont want to become any M.d. ,to tourism com. I am quite satisfied with my teaching profession.
Maan:-tried to convince her saying, no geet aap samaj nahi rahe ki aap kitna talented ho? aur mai nahi chahthaki aapki talent ye school jaisa chote,chote jagah per waste hojaye., jaha aapki koi development nahi hai.
Geet:- mujhe koi development naji chahiye maanji;,,ye chote jagah mujhe apni aasray me leli,jab mai pehli baar khaali haathonse, chote,chote bacchonke lekar akeli Delhi aagaya. Ye chote jagah hi mujhe do wakth ki roti di. ye chote jagah mujhe sab kuch diya. unki wajase aaj mai itna khush hu, meri do betia ko pala, posa, itna bada kiya, aaj mai jobhi hu sirf unki wajese sir.Aap nahi jaanthe hai sir,ye chote jagah meri jindagi me kitna maine rakhthe hai. mai jobhi hu, khush hu, aur mai ye school nahi chodesakthi.
Bacche meri zindzgi hai maanji. mujhe bacchonke saath khushi milthe hai. unke bina mai nahi rah saktha. mai nahi jaanthi, ki mai aapko kitna accha suggestions dediya. Maine wo kaha jo mera man me aaya. wat i felt i told u. mai soche thi huki aap kisi aur ko hire karna chahiye, i dont think i can fit in to it. mai jaisa hu waisa hi acche hu.
Kaka:- Geet bete. chote babu bahut soche samajkar decisions lethe hai. Tabhi tho itni saare business handle kar rahe. ek baar sochlena, mai bhi yahi chahtha hu ki aap chote babu ko maanle na.
Geet:_ nahi, kaka isme socheneki koi nahi hai. I never want to leave my school. I have promised the management not to leave in the middle till my reterement. And ur chote babu bhi loyal staff ko chahthe haina. how i can be a loyal to him , when i betray the school management? so no scope to join in this com.
Maan:_ Thik hai as u wish.. one cannot force others. but one thing i clarify u we need ur suggestions, can we atleast expect this fr. u.
Geet:-Aap ye kya kahrahi ho sir? aap kabhi bhi mera rai puch sakthe, mai jobhi aap chahe wo karneki tayaar hu siva M.D.post lena.
Maan:- Arpitha, tum kaho tumhari maa se , tum jaantthi ho na ye kitna talented hai. tum samjhavo ise,wat i am offering.
Arpitha:- nahi sir, we dont want to force her sir. aap jaanthi hai na sir maa hamareliye kitna important hai. Wo hamari Angel hai sir, wo hume sirf jaan nahi diya, balki zindagi diya. Humare liye aur hume palnekeliye, posnekeliye bada karnekeliye wo bahut kuch kiya hai sir. Aaj hum jo ho wo sirf aur sirf maa ki wajase hai sir. hum isa kuch kabhi nahi karsakthe jisse maa ko takleef pahunche. wo jo karegi jisme unki khushi milthi. Hume sirf unki khushi chahiye sir. ye baath mai nahi , puri family yahi chahthe hai sir.
and she hugged her mother saying this.
Maan:- thik hai geet aap ek baar thandi dimmag se socho. mai such me chahthi hu ki aap ye offer accept karlena. aap chahe tho thoda wakth lelijiye, baadme decide karlena mai inth zaar karunga such mai i need an employlike u.
Geet didnt say any thing.Maan ko kuch bhi samaj nahi araha hai. ek tho iski sincerityb and loyalty, she is showing to her school ye dekhkar ek part of him proud feel kar raha hai, aur dusera part regret kar raha hai ki ye M.D. ka post reject kiya.kuch bhi samajnahi araha hai khush hojavu aur chintha karu.
He stood up to leave. Maan:-o.k. bye, mai chaltha hu. he started to leave half heartedly.
Geet:- Maanji;.. i am sorry kuch galat boldiya tho.
Maan:- nahi aap kuch galat nahi boldiya.shaayad aap thik ho.
Geet:- Kal dishu ka birth day hai.. Dishu aapko bulana chahthe hai. humbhi khush honge agar aap shaamil hojayetho.
Maan:- kal kitne baje party?
Dishu:- shaam 7 o. clock aap aavogena? dost?
Maan:- sure, how can i miss my dost ka birth day party. i will come. he kissed her and said bye to geet and arpitha.
they all said goodnight to him with bye.

Precap:- Maan s.t.;Maan Singh Khurana,the winner of "Best Bussinessman ' for the last 20 yrs was rejected by a woman.


thank u. for ur respons. guys always encourageme like this.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 45 n 46
nice updates..
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please send me all the parts links
awesome ff

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awesome updates. nice suggestions from geet. maan offered her MD post but she rejected it saying she doesn't want to leave her teaching field. so again maan will meet geet in this birthday party.
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Part:-47
Maan is returning to his mansion in car. He is thinking about geet and the events went at her home. First her wonderfull dance performance by which he spell bound and secondly her wonderfull suggestions for tourism com. and lost but not least,which damaged his ego " her rejection" for his job offer.For the first time in his life ever he was rejected "Maan Singh Khurana' "The winner of the "BEST BUSINESSMAN award" for the last 20 yrs was rejected by a woman.She has rejected his job offer. He himself never offer any job to any one, here he himself offered her job and was rejected by her. Miraclely he was not feeling bad, instead he was happy because she again amazed him by her sincerity and loyalty. He smiled thinking all this. kaka looked at him wondered.
Maan lost himself in geets thoughts, in that he dont know when he reached mansion. He directly went to his room without giving any head to pammi, nainatara annie and rahul sitting there.All looked their faces with question " wat happened to him?"
Annie called him ...bhai;... bhai;...but he dint give head to her. She looked cofused😕and went inside behind him.
Annie:- bhai;..bhai;..
Maan startled by her voice and said," haa,.. annie?
Annie:- bhai;.. aap thik tho hai?
Maan:- haa.. annie kyu? mujhe kya hua?
Annie:- yetho aaphi bathana hai? ki aap ko kya hua? kisi ki khayaal me khoihue aap? kiski baareme soche rahe aap?
Maan:- Tumhe kaise pata ki mai kisiki baare me sochrahi hu?
Annie:- abhi aap batharahithina?
Maan:- mai kab?
Annie:- abhi..abhi. jab mai pucha kisiki baareme sochrahahai, aap ne pucha mujhe kaise pata ki aap kisike baareme soche rahehai? tho pakka hogayana ki aap kisiki bareme sochrahe ho?
Maan:- haa.. haa.. mai.. haa..mai com. ki baareme socherahithi.
Annie:- per bhai isme itna khoi,khoi honeka jarurat kya hai?
Maan:- baath hai annie kyunki ye ek nayaa com. hai isliye
Annie:- thik, hai aap fresh hojayiye, mai aapki coffee lekar atthi hu.
Maan:- nahi mera coffee, snakes hogaya.
Annie:- aaj bhi hogaya?bhai aap roj, roj kaha khakearahahai?
Maan:_ kya hai annie? ye kaisa sawaal hai? ab business ki silsile me baahar jana padtha hai,waha khaunga,isme itni pareshan honeki kya hai?
Annie:- thik, hai, bhai ab mai kuch nahi puchunga aapse and she went out.
Maan went to fresh up. He sat up to do some work in his laptop,but he is not able to type a single word. Baar,baar iski ankhonki saamne geet ka picture araha hai. He tried to stop thinking about her but failed .He closed his laptop with thud and throwed it on bed. He closed his eyes indisgust , not abe to stop thinking about geet. He swith on the t,v. to divert his thought. but to his misery , in that chanel some love songs r tele costing.He stood numb observing that song . He never watches movies, songs serial like entertainment chanels other than news chanel but now he is watching a romantic song fr. the movie,savariyaa," jabse trer nainaa.. mere nainose laagire". with full attention. to that each and every liric in that song he is trying to relate it to himself and geet. Infact he is imagining himself and geet in that song. Asweet sensation crept in his heart, slowly filling all his sences,giving beatiful feelings , sending sweet currents to his whole body. For the first time in his life he is enjoyng this type of feelings.he dont understand wat is this feeling why tihs romantic song is effecting him a lot?how he is enjoying this feeling and wanting more and more.he kept on watching that song like that.
Annie came to his room to call him to dinner, she wondered that her brother is watching that romantic song with full concentration.She called him,bhai;.. bhai;..
Haa.. annie? he startled and said. aap ye kya dekh rahi ho? Maan:- kyu? mai ye nahi dekhsakthi hai kya? ab is me bhi tumhe pblm hai? he asked irritated by her qust
Annie:- nahi bhai mai yuhi pucha.. chalo ab dinner keliye...
He went silently and sat at dinning table and started to eat. but he could not concentrate on the food. he is not at all noticing wat he was eating. Annie asked about the dish which she prepared for him. but he didnt give any reply, he finished half and left it and went to his room silently.
Annie:- Arjun;.. office mai kuch hua hai kya?
Arjun:- nahikyu?kya hua?
Annie:- bhai shaam se kuch khoi huye se lagrahahai.
aur dinner bhi thik se nahi khaaya.
Arjun:- wo naya com. ki baare me soche rahe hai.
Naina;- per iske baare me itna kuch sochene ka kya hai,.. hum sab discuss karliyana meeting me?
Annie;- itna pareshani? bhai ko kabhi nahi dekha isa?
Naina:- isa nahi hai mera publicity waala idea bahut accha hai dekhna maanji deffinitely wahi karega.
Arjun:Anie, tum kyu itni chitha horaheho? chodo use. kal thak thik ho jayega. he went to his bed room.

Precap:- He felt thirsty. He took water bottle and gulped all in one go.
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Part:-48
Mid night.
Maan suddenly wake up fr. his sleep. He sat up in his bed looking confused,why he woke up at this hr. of night. He looked at himself fully covered by sweat droping in the full a.c. room. He checked a.c. it was full on. Then wat made him wake up at this hr? He looked at himself.He was fully aroused. His body is feeling something want. He felt thirsty. He took the water bottle and gulped all water in one go. Even though he didnt feel quite. His body is wanting something which he never know. This type of wanting is existed in him.
He suddenly remembered yes,i dreamt. I dreamt about geet.Geet came in my dream. i slept dreaming about geet. How on earth i dream about a woman? wat happened to me? why i saw geet in my dreams?
He sat on his bed holding his head with his hands. Why i dream about geet? kal shaamse tum iski baareme sochrahithina, tho wahi ayegana tumhari dream me,his mind told him. Per mai itna kyu sochthi hu iske baareme? why is she effecting me like this? isa kya hai isme? Bahut kuch hai,wo tumhe,tumhari ankhonse dekha hai, tumhari khanose suna hai. Haa...haa.. wo bahut acchi hai, talented hai,innicent hai,sabki bhalayi kieliye kuchbhi karneki tayaar hai,nave hai,sincere hai,loyal.,pyaari bhi hai, downto earth natured hai, and ..so and so.. per iska matlab ye nahi hai ki tum unme khoikhoi hojaye. aur aaj tho use tumhari offer reject karke tumhari ego damage kiya, phir bhu tum iske baareme kyu sochrahiho?
Maan kya hua tumhe?Itni saal gujargayi kabhi ek aurat ya ladki ka khayaal tumhari man me nahi aayi? aaj kyu? aur wo bhi ek shaadi shuda aurat, do jawaan ladki ki maa, aur wo bhi shaadi shuda, ek poti bhi hai, uski ? kitni saari ladkiya,aurat tumhari aage peeche ghumthe hai,throwing themselves on u, u never give a head to them. kabhi isa khayaal tumhari dimaag me nahi aayi. aaj kyu horaha hai?wat type of emotion is this?why I am falling for Geet?wat happens if she knows about my feeling towards her?She is a married woman,but where is her huaband? I know she never want to reveal about him,and today she told that she came here along with her two daughters 20 yrs back all alone. But where is her husband? wat happened between them? Is she left him? or he left her?why she has to face all this alone?
Wait...Maan...wait... wat r u thinking? why u worried about her husband? its her personal matter hai na? how does it matters to u?
He looked around his room. Wahi susaan kamara. wahi wall decors.,ahi curtains, shelves which he specially designed,now looking all dull and phika,phika. He looked at his bed. wahi susaan bed ,large bed, costly and rich bed covers duvets, pillows now looking dull. He felt his bed alone. He felt he was alone for the first time in these all yrs of his life. He felt his life is colourless. The empty bed made him more aroused. He want something wat was it he doesnot able to findout. He went to wash room. He flashed water on his face to control himself, but it does not work. He removed his vest and tracks and stood under shower for hrs. He came out after cooled. This type of heat and want he never faced in his life till now. He changed and again laid on bed to sleep, but sleep is no where near him. He kept on rolling on his bed,about early hrs he slept.


Precap:- Geets monolog.
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awesome storyline
ur a brilliant writer
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awesome update. maan realising about his loneliness and feelings towards geet.
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Awesome dear so maan is feeling something to geet loved the parts 45-48 now let's see how the story turns..waiting to know dear!👏

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