MG OS:ZIndagi pt 3,4/15,17 may 30 *COMPLETE* - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana



sure dear...accepted...

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thanks a lot glad that u like this fiction..add u ..do accept dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
omg they r separated
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nice work
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
lovely update. plz do continue it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
emotional update! Well written! Maan taking her wid him! update soon n do pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MG OS : ZINDAGI

PART 3

GEET...

his husky hoarse voice made her conscious of her self she was in his arms at their home... Maan was carrying his love his beloved wife geet in his arms... No alcohol no nasha was enough for him... His geet was in his arms .. Her eyes the soft breathing... Her hands that were around his neck and her eyes glued to him... She was constantly looking at him.. Her eyes were taking the depth of his love... The guilt the remorse was visible when she hide her guilty self in him weeping softly...

her tears were making him weak she was his ultimate weakness her every demand her every second wish was fulfilled by him...

geet : i am sorry... Please dont give yourself punishment for my sin .. I am not worthy for your pure and divine love.. I am the culprit... I killed your love i killed our love brutally maan... Please dont hate me i wont be able to take it that...

her gullible self was so much tormenting for maan that he couldnt even face her.. His conscience proved him guilty...
' maan you took that decision you made her leave you... You didnt stop her you are the main culprit the butcherer of her love... And know the reason of her tears...'

maan gently and with utmost care place geet on the bed... The soft cotton and silky spread just like she wants... The color of the wall painted in her fav color ... Her fav color curtains her pictures in every corner every nook of his life... This was maan's living.. He is been living in the same time the same memories of his geet.. The room still was as fresh as their wedding night... The fragrance of lavendar mixed with rose essence just like she smell...

geet was still holding his hand... He was in her arms.. She softly caressed his rough stubble face... Her fingers were just doing the magic.. She was insane the depth of his love made her to get lost in him... She was giving him the comfort he longed... His longing his craving for the love was just that geet saw...

her hands went to his back ... She was kind of seducing him.. Her eyes were closed tears were flowing as the realization of loosing him forever sunk deep in her heart... Those milky soft arms covered his hard form ... Weeping asking forgiveness...

geet : ma..a..an... Words were no where in context of the pool of emotions that was flowing know... He was about to leave when a soft plea made him to surrender himself to thr girl whom he lost and got after a longing of years...

geet : do..nt.. Leave me i wont be able to live... Please make me yours... I want to be the lady whom you loved.. I want to be the geet... Whom her maan loved... Please make me MAAN KI GEET... MARK ME WITH YOUR LOVE MAAN...


maan looked at her , she was shivering ...
maan tried to ask her if this was drem.. When she felt her shivering lips on his rough ones...

the shiver that was actually a sweet ache to finally discover your lost self was something that made them lost in the moment of love... The softness of her supple pink lips the sweet gestures of her when she accepted him and made him to gain what he owns was something that made her to blush.. His hands those were gaining its courage to make her his still coming out of those hard times of longing...geet shied and hide herself in his embrace...this was though not new her he had already claimed her but still what a wife feels when her husband touches her for the first time was still like a fresh dew to her...he loosen her sari pallu and opened the dori at the back... Geet was feeling all mushy.. This was total new feelings last time they were lovers who were totally lost in their love this time a longing a soft caressing from each other heart was there which they inflicted on each other...

maan slowly laid her on the bed and just like she want she opened her arms for him to finally envelope his love within her... May be the destiny tested them but today the lovers were finally with each other...

the silky soften covers were covering them the intoxication of their love was something that cannot be told the fire tht was existing made them to love each other more carnally...


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Awwesome and maaneet have finally become one and thir love won
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
loved the update dear👏
finally maaneet became one😳
update soon will be waiting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
sweet update
all last they are together
after a long tym
n loving with each other
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
awesome update ...wehen maaneet were lovers in past y did geet leave maan for her selfishness?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
my curiosity is growin to know wt happen
y my manet r not together
now they r together bt wt happen the next morning
waiting 4 next

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