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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
cool mom...now nothing can come in btw maneet... and their first kiss...
loved the twist...
and loved the maan's confession part too... ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: miss_dreamy

cool mom...now nothing can come in btw maneet... and their first kiss...
loved the twist...
and loved the maan's confession part too... ;)




Ya cool and sweet.😊
Truly said ,no more hurdles.😃
Thanks for appreciation.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Part 4

After few words with Maan and knowing him and his family better, Geet's mom left cafe in a cab as she had to meet her old childhood friend . She had left geet with maan on geet's insistence and told Maan to drop her near a mall where she will be present at 5.

"I am still waiting"-Maan commented as he watched the cab going out of sight.

"What??"-Geet became confused hearing him. Her eyes which were fixed on street turned toward him in response.

"I am still waiting for the three word confession"-Maan spoke in voice full of eagerness and love radiating from his eyes.

Maan saw her taking deep breath and then with a lovely voice she spoke-"I love..."-Geet was in full mood to tease. So, She purposely said these two words in slow manner only to increase his heartbeat and eagerness to listen. The excitment, joy, happiness, anticipation all kind of emotion which his face was depicting went down the drain by her next word-"rain"-and with this she brust out laughing hard while he just kept staring at laughing beauty in front of him , though he was disappointed but that didn't stop him from admiring her innocent beauty.

She raised her eyebrow in questioning manner. He just shrugged off and said-"Your eyes are enough to tell me whom you love but I want to hear from you"

"Okay, I will fulfil your wish, but-but-but ,for that you have to win my challenge"-she said dramatically and smirked . Upon watching his questioning gaze she continued-"You have known me from long time. So, you must have known few of my day dreams . Now, for challenge you have to fulfil my one of such day dream without even telling you".

He sqeezed his brain for any day dream which she had told then a thought of going on long drive with geet crossed his mind as she had once told about a daydream of going on long drive with her love and that too during rain.Thus, clearing bills, he walk out of cafe with geet toward his vehicle which was parked nearby.

After they settled in their seat, starting car he drove off toward the outskirt of city.

Atmosphere has turned quite windy. Cool breeze was making its way through the window of car making atmosphere inside car quite chilly too. Once he wished to shut all window and put AC on but discarded away the idea glancing on geet who was enjoying this chill of this windy weather . Few rain droplets often jumped inside the car through window which excited her for no particular reason. She would close her eyes whenever a raindrop fall on her face and felt its presence and movement across her face.

He stopped his car once he reached near a beautiful lake. She was long lost in the feel of rain and had closed her eyes but the slight jerk she felt due to pressing of brake revived her . Feeling the car is no longer moving she slowly opened her eyes with slight irritation and anger on him . For the first time in her life she was enjoying rain this much ,may be reason behind it was him or may be due to calmness she felt . So, she didn't like the sudden pull from her dreamland.

He had purposefuly stopped his car here . A small smile made its way on his lips as he looked at her irritated face which carried the same innocence which will be present in 5 year old kid when his favourite toy is snatched. He was waiting for her to open her eyes and look around at the beauty which surrounded her. She opened her eyes, not for looking around but for glaring at him and next moment he found her out of car standing in the rain drenching herself . She had pouted her lips and banged the door hard clearly showing her anger and dislike .

But her pouting face changed with surprised expression when her gaze fell on the beauty of place. Place hold breathtaking beauty and the drizzle she was feeling now made it a heavenly sight. The rain water which were present on leaves of small plants appeared as pearl spreaded all around.

He too came behind her shutting the door of car and watched her becoming like statue trying to capture whole scene in her eyes. She was drenched completely in water. Small droplets of water was continously travelling down her face and teasing him. Her curl were getting wet and coming on face hindering complete view of her face. Not able to hold back he engulfed her into a hug from back with both of his hands sliding along her arms and folded their hands just below her bosom. His arms surrounded her petite form with hands placed just above her hands. He whispered with his lips touching her ear occasionaly and sending shiver down the spine-"Now your turn to fulfil my wish."

Geet shudder for a moment before relaxing in his arms with her back completely resting on his chest and abs. Heat was radiating from both of their bodies making them carve for more. She tried to maintain her sanity while he whispered again fanning his hot breath on her nape-" Aren't you going to say those magical words for which my heart is carving from so long. "

His hoarse and manly voice in this situation made her want for more. she was not in condition to think clearly. Only few words like magical , carving and heart were registered in her mind, which didn't made any sense in her dazzed state of mind.

He placed a soft kiss on her nape which made her tilt her head giving more access to him . He then took her earlobe in his lips and started to suck it. He was going to turn her around and kiss her lips when a inner voice stopped him. She had not voiced out she love you yet, you are crossing your limit. His mind retorted , so what if she had not said it yet . I know very well she loves me . In this tug of war he uncounsiously leave her and stepped back.

Geet felt a electrifying current running through her body when maan kissed on her nape. His lips on her skin felt so good that she wanted it to live there forever and ever. Her next act of sucking her earlobe just fuelled her desires. But sudden act of him leaving and stepping back made her frown hard. She turned around and looked at him with puzzled expression. She was not able to point out clearly what made him to act so wierdly .

Maan was busy in fighting with his inner demon who was dying to take her into his arms once again. He didn't noticed her turning around with the frown . He was standing still and debating what should he do.

Geet opened her mouth to speak but found herself at loss of words so closed her mouth. What could she even speak that she was loving his proximity and advancment. This all was new to her she wanted to feel each and every emotions which his act was inducing. She looked at him and decided to break silence by her confession.

"Maan, I want to tell you something"- This line of geet broke his chain of thought and he stared her ,Geet was feeling nervous to admit it and his eyes on her was making her more nervous. She wanted to say it but was not able to decide how to say it-"You know Maan, four year back. I saw a boy who used to come in a boxing club for practice . I used to come there too but only to see him , only to hear him , only to decrease my restlessness which grew in my heart even if I missed watching him for single day . By the end of year he leave that club and at that time I decided to take admission in the college in which he took admission . In few days, I was able to become friend of that boy and now I cann't tell you how happy I am on knowing my love too love me. "-She completed her story and paused.

"who is he??"-Maan asked with anticipation and impatience.

She smacked her forhead and said-" Offcourse You duffer, I love you. The boy whom I followed was you. "

Maan look at her with surprised eyes. She used to watch him four year back when he used to go to practice boxing and was in love with him all these years when he thought of her as only friend. He took his step forward decreasing distance between them and hold her waist. He cupped her face and looking in large hazel eyes whispered-"I love you too."

He bring his face so close that their nose were touching each other's and breaths were mingling .He looked at her luscious lips and then her eyes , which she lowered in acceptance. Getting the required permission he moved forward and placed his lips on her petal like lips. He first captured her lower lip in between his lips. Sucking and nibbling her lip he turned her around so that she can get support of car from back and pressed himself more into her. After her lower lip he moved toward her upper lip and took it in between his lips trying to suck its all sweetness and preserve it in his mouth.

Geet was long lost in feel of his lips. She was not knowing how to respond to his kiss . She just let him do whatever he wants and tried to do same in response.

Maan after nibbling her upper lip for some time came back on lower lip nibbling it sometime and sometime softening it with his tounge while sometime sucking it. His tounge tried to enter her mouth but seeing her not opening her mouth, he bit her lip, This made her gasp and catching the opprtunity he moved his tounge inside her mouth. He moved his tounge freely inside her mouth touching each and every corner. His passion was increasing with time and he was moving his hand in sensual way to give her enormous pleasure and seeing her sqirm . He pressed himself more in her if it was even possible. His hand roamed on her back feeling her completely and trying to bring her closer and closer. He again wrapped his arms around her waist to support her and tasted her pink lips like there was no tommorow.

First geet was not able to follow him and his act of biting her lip made her gasp in surprise. And when his tounge entered her mouth she felt like thousands of butterfly are flying in her. She moved her hand on his nape and tried to bring his face more and more closer.All this sensation was new to her and she tried to match his passion, In short time she too darted her tounge inside his mouth and tried to taste every nook and every corner. Her tounge soon started battling with his tounge,both in need to enter other's mouth. After few second of battling both tounge started to move in rythm sticking to each other and moving all around. Need of air forced them to part away though non wanted to end their very first kiss.

Panting and taking heavy breath she placed her forhead on his forhead. Breath still mingling with each other. A red hue crept across her cheeks and to hide her shyness she hugged him tight with her hands on his shoulder from below his armpit. He too wrapped her in his arms feeling content.

After passing of few minutes when their heartbeat and breathing came at normal pace. He peeked his watch which was showing only one hour left to reach mall. So , he kissing her cheek whispered in her ear-"Let's go , otherwise my image of good boy will be affected in front of your mom."-upon watching her parting away and raising her eyebrow he winked and said-"Punctuality also count in good qualities."

Smacking his arm she went inside car and made herself comfortable in the passenger seat after which he too sat in driving seat. With the sweet memory of their first kiss in the rain they both drove off.


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Do leave your comment as its my first time that I have tried write with this much detail which you can see by length too as it is longest update i have given to any of my story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi buddy,

New Os,surprise for us but a pleasant one.It was such sweet heart melting story.I read all the for parts together.And u know till I finished reading it,I was all smiles and my tensions jst drained out.Maaneet stories do miracle for me.


Loved the resturant scene of Maan-Geet & mumma,funny.

And the kiss,hmmm...awesome,loved it.


Gr8 OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
beautiful update..pls give epi..tk u..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hi buddy,

New Os,surprise for us but a pleasant one.It was such sweet heart melting story.I read all the for parts together.And u know till I finished reading it,I was all smiles and my tensions jst drained out.Maaneet stories do miracle for me.


Loved the resturant scene of Maan-Geet & mumma,funny.

And the kiss,hmmm...awesome,loved it.


Gr8 OS.




Heyyy,

I am trying my hands in different type of stories. So, don't get surprised if you found many more os.😉

Thanks for appreciation.
I am glad that my os bring smile and drained out your tension.

By the way,May I ask you reason for your tension. Its completely ok with me if you don't want to tell.

And talking about Maneet ,they are themself magical couple. So, their jodi will obviously do miracles😃

Thanks again for your kind words.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

beautiful update..pls give epi..tk u..




Thank you
Will think upon epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
lovelyyy and awesomeee os dear ...like it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: AKSashadow




Heyyy,

I am trying my hands in different type of stories. So, don't get surprised if you found many more os.😉

Thanks for appreciation.
I am glad that my os bring smile and drained out your tension.

By the way,May I ask you reason for your tension. Its completely ok with me if you don't want to tell.

And talking about Maneet ,they are themself magical couple. So, their jodi will obviously do miracles😃

Thanks again for your kind words.



I m expecting a lot more from u buddy.

And tension,job related hai yaar,sunday ko bhi peechha nahi chodte.

Thats why come to GF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetkimeet


lovelyyy and awesomeee os dear ...like it very much



Thank you very much.
Glad you liked it.

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