OS-First kiss in the rain; Part 2,3,4-page 2,3,5 (COMPLETED)

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Part 1


Maan was sitting in cafe , thinking over events that happened few hour back.After span of whole 2years he had gathered enough courage and was finally able to confess his love for her but a slight fear was making way in his heart, that was fear of rejection. He tried to calm himself and repeated to himself-'Geet too love you. It's just that she is confused about her feeling right now and needs time'. But the restlessness was not ready to leave his heart.

Atmosphere was quite cloudy , cool breeze was felt whenever door of cafe got opened. He tried to divert his mind ,so glanced outside through the glass sepration. People were in hurry to reach home, so a lot of rush was seen outside which increased more when droplet of water started to fall.

A girl standing on opposite side of road caught his attention. She was standing there in the rain with her wide open arms .Due to rain , he was not able to see her face clearly but felt it familiar. She was wearing white salwar-kameez which was giving feel of fairy in the rain. She turned to her right when a woman came near her and started to drag her in the direction of cafe. Both females made there way inside cafe and were looking for place to sit as it was crowded and almost every table was full.

Maan had not removed his gaze from the girl even for a single moment. As Soon as both came inside cafe, Maan got to see her face clearly and The girl whom his eyes were following was none other than Geet Handa who was his love from first year of college.

Geet's mom watched all around but there was not even single empty seat except on the table of Maan. So she moved toward him .

Watching her mom's eyes on him. He quickly stopped his drooling session on geet and picked up menu , acting as if selecting what to order. But his full attention was toward coming steps of Geet's mom and offcourse Geet.

"Excuse me, If you don't mind may we sit here. All other places are already full "- Her mother asked Maan indicating all around.

"Sure"-Maan replied keeping menu on table. He had child like excitement bubbling inside but got control over himself and reminded himself about presence of her mother.

"Thank you, son"-both of them acquired remaining two chairs.Her mother then ordered hot chocolate for geet and coffee for herself. Maan order of black coffee was also taking time.So, he just bring out his cell phone as excuse of being busy, so that nobody disturb his drooling session and kept looking geet through corner of his eyes.

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Finally back to my place, after tiring journey of entire month. Will start to give update to all my stories in 2-3 days.
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fatema_007 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prlogue..
would be waiting for the next part 😊
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Originally posted by: fatema_007

nice prlogue..
would be waiting for the next part 😊




Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan is afraid to propose geet n drooling geet...gr8 geet...

beautiful starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

<div align="center"><font color="#FF00FF"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font size="4">maan is afraid to propose geet n drooling geet...gr8 geet...

</font>beautiful <font size="4">starting</font>...

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">loved it very much...

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">thank u very much fr d lovely <font size="4">story</font>...
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">continue soon plz...</font>
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Thanks
Next update tonight or in the morning tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN HAD TO STOP HIS DROOLING AS HER MOM WAS THERE
HE IS SCARED TO PROPOSE TO HER
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Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">MAAN HAD TO STOP HIS DROOLING AS HER MOM WAS THERE</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">HE IS SCARED TO PROPOSE TO HER</font>





Maan ka Dil hai ki maanta nahi😆
He is not scared but was scared to propose, right now he is only scared of geet reply as geet did not reply at the moment of confession of his love
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Part 2

Even though Maan was using phone as excuse, Geet had noticed him looking on her and was getting worried as her mother was sitting just beside her . 'What if she noticed him like this and came to know about our love . She will surely not accept him and even if she does then whole family will be against this relation as my family is quiet traditional.'-Geet wandering thought came to end by ringing of phone.

A phone call came on her mother cell so excusing herself her mother walked away from there.

"What were you doing ??"-Geet asked suppressing her voice from getting loud.

"Was checking email in gmail. Do you also want to check?"

"Email in gmail? Are you sure? Because your eyes were saying different story."

"Okay, I accept that I was watching you. But you are going to be my girlfriend , I have got atleast this much right."

"Listen, I will be your girlfriend if I accept your proposal. Till then we are just friend so stop looking at me like that in front of my mom."

Her mom came finishing her call and took her seat which resulted in end of their talk. Their orders also came on table by the time .

Waiter placed both coffee and forwarded hot chocolate toward geet. As soon as Maan drank coffee , he spit out and started to cough badly .

Geet's mom was about to get up for help but Before she can even move ,geet got up in reflex and started rubbing his back totally forgetting about her mother presence who was looking duo with complete shock. Here, Maan was also in complete trance on getting so close to geet and watching her concern for him.

Geet's mother cleared her throat to bring them in real world where other people were also present other than them. Geet's hand which was busy on maan's back, came to abrupt halt. Geet looked at her mother wide eyed and then at her hand.

Embarrass by her own act in front of her mother , she came and took her seat quietly. She was smacking herself in her mind-'Idiot!, stupid !,how she could do such blunders in front of mom. It was just cough and you ran to help like typical wife. Mom was getting up for his help but no you have to jump for help of your Maan.'

Maan was also surprised due to arrival of geet for help and nervous as her mother witnessed whole scene. He was now getting ready for the questions which will be soon bombarded.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol cont soon.. nice ff.. maaneet r in big trouble now
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hehe tat was superb dear

geet shouting first and when he coughs she helps him

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