MG(SS):Love from Across (Last Part X-Pg 22) 16/05 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
U have no idea how much i cried last night!

under the kambal at 3 in teh night

Lovely story🤗 and more than that, i loved teh style of writing.

U wrung out emotions in simple sentences, crisp langauge😳

Awesome story.

i normally dont read sad ones, but i sure am glad i read this. coz like u said, this is their happy ending😳

the one thing which touched me to teh core was geets thot.. "had i known u were saying amen...i wud have asked for something else"😭


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

U have no idea how much i cried last night!


under the kambal at 3 in teh night

Lovely story🤗 and more than that, i loved teh style of writing.

U wrung out emotions in simple sentences, crisp langauge😳

Awesome story.

i normally dont read sad ones, but i sure am glad i read this. coz like u said, this is their happy ending😳

the one thing which touched me to teh core was geets thot.. "had i known u were saying amen...i wud have asked for something else"😭


thanks for recommending me this one...
How much i loved it...
Hugs
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leverne

thanks for recommending me this one...
How much i loved it...
Hugs

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

U have no idea how much i cried last night!


under the kambal at 3 in teh night

Lovely story🤗 and more than that, i loved teh style of writing.

U wrung out emotions in simple sentences, crisp langauge😳

Awesome story.

i normally dont read sad ones, but i sure am glad i read this. coz like u said, this is their happy ending😳

the one thing which touched me to teh core was geets thot.. "had i known u were saying amen...i wud have asked for something else"😭


Hey!!
Welcome to the story, though its over now...!
Hahahaaa
Sorry to make you cry darling, but frankly it was meant to cry on.
Trust me I didn't drop as much as a tear while writing but cried with a choked throat when I re-read the part!
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. Glad you found this sad one interesting.
And as I have always maintained, this was the best end they could get under the circumstances thrown their way.
Geet's regret was palpable, at times when something happens at our whims and fantasies, we wish we'd fancied something else; don't we?
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hugs to both of you!!!
*Group hug*
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorryyy fr being late latif 😳
wat to say it ws heart wrenching to see them lyk this😭 actually d way u hav portrayed d whole scene dat made it so 💔...bt dats d best end or can say beginning they can evr get fr their lives in d givn situation
bow down to ur writing ability dear ⭐️ lit ...👏 👏
luvd d story n d poem at d end ❤️
n my heartiest congratulations fr beautifully completing ur frst story 🥳
so glad to hav u here in dis forum 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

sorryyy fr being late latif😳

wat to say it ws heart wrenching to see them lyk this😭 actually d way u hav portrayed d whole scene dat made it so💔...bt dats d best end or can say beginning they can evr get fr their lives in d givn situation
bow down to ur writing ability dear⭐️lit ...👏👏
luvd d story n d poem at d end❤️
n my heartiest congratulations frbeautifully completing ur frst story🥳
so glad to hav u here in dis forum🤗


Thank you darling!!
I wouldn't have come this far without my readers support and love...!
Glad you enjoyed the story and hope you continue to enjoy other ones too.
And I am glad to write on this forum.
Maaneet is all I'll ever write...
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Posted: 12 years ago
jus came across this ss n its wonderful
completed all parts in one go
u r the best
i can really imagine each n every word of urs
great writing skills
luved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .ramya-gurtian.

jus came across this ss n its wonderful
completed all parts in one go
u r the best
i can really imagine each n every word of urs
great writing skills
luved it

Thank you!!
Welcome to my little Literary shelf (Maaneet World offcourse)
Glad you liked the SS!
<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful is the only word i have to destroy the story..
Ur os 'unfinished' lead me to read this ff and it was so painfully perfect that i dont hv anymore words to describe it...
It was the best ending, actually their happy ending as per the circumstances...

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