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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

what a story

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

amazing story , wonderfully written , and awesome views dear

I am really speechless dear

by the end and the poem

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

what a poem it was

each and every word so true so deep

though I don't like stories with sad ending

but as said by geet it was indeed their happy ending

cant tell u how I felt after reading the last chapter and the poem

as I am not so good in putting my feeling into words

all I can say is this was a very beautiful story with a strong message

and u r an amazing writer dear

when I was reading this story I got so involved in ur wonderful writing that I could not comment at that time

but I thought when I would comment I will say this say that

and now here I am forgot every thing

all I remember a soulful maan geet story with such deep emotions, passion, and above all the message u tried to put here

well done

and the poem was superb

I was reminded of this song

PANCHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE

KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE

SARHADEIN INSANO KE LIYE HAI

SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE

KYA PAYA

INSAAN HOKE

but ur poem was even better than this song dear

keep up this wonderful writing

this forum is really full of brilliant writers

once again dear

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

lots of love and happiness dear

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: pearl.white
Beautiful is the only word i have to destroy the story..
Ur os 'unfinished' lead me to read this ff and it was so painfully perfect that i dont hv anymore words to describe it...
It was the best ending, actually their happy ending as per the circumstances...

Thank you!

Yes...this was the best they could get and I am happy that my readers have found acceptance in this bitter-sweet ending!😃

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: gudmeet
what a story
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

amazing story , wonderfully written , and awesome views dear

I am really speechless dear

by the end and the poem

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

what a poem it was

each and every word so true so deep

though I don't like stories with sad ending

but as said by geet it was indeed their happy ending

cant tell u how I felt after reading the last chapter and the poem

as I am not so good in putting my feeling into words

all I can say is this was a very beautiful story with a strong message

and u r an amazing writer dear

when I was reading this story I got so involved in ur wonderful writing that I could not comment at that time

but I thought when I would comment I will say this say that

and now here I am forgot every thing

all I remember a soulful maan geet story with such deep emotions, passion, and above all the message u tried to put here

well done

and the poem was superb

I was reminded of this song

PANCHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE

KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE

SARHADEIN INSANO KE LIYE HAI

SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE

KYA PAYA

INSAAN HOKE

but ur poem was even better than this song dear

keep up this wonderful writing

this forum is really full of brilliant writers

once again dear

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

lots of love and happiness dear

Thank you darling! Such a long sweet comment😃😳

Glad you commented at the end, I love to hear from my readers...nothing contents me more!

it's good to know you'll remeber my story as a soulful Geet-Maan story.

The poem was vaguely inspired by that song, yes; but it had more of the history depicting India-Pak borders.

Awww! Thank you so much!

Love yaa too<3

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

U know.. i am still confused over who u are...

The others i guessed in two sentences ...

But i have guesses 😛

Edited by Loquacious_Aash - 12 years ago

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
U know.. i am still confused over who u are...

The others i guessed in two sentences ...

But i have guesses 😛

Hey!😃

Beg your pardon, I didn't get you??😕

What guesses do you have??

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

again beautifully written

wonderful story

i cried while reading

again a sad one...seems you are best writing sad ending

it was their destiny ...ek doosre ke pyar me fanna hona hi unke naseeb me tha

I liked your style of writing

all os are awesome

👏

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
again beautifully written
wonderful story

i cried while reading

again a sad one...seems you are best writing sad ending

it was their destiny ...ek doosre ke pyar me fanna hona hi unke naseeb me tha

I liked your style of writing

all os are awesome

👏

Thank you darling!

And welcome aboard😃

Saw all your comments; will reply to all soon.

oh I had this 'tragedy' tag with me for long until I wrote Back to You which my readers believe will be a happy one😉😆

it was their destiny ...ek doosre ke pyar me fanna hona hi unke naseeb me tha

I liked your style of writing

all os are awesome

I agree...this was their happily ever after.

Thanks again😳