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awesome... loved it... u changed defination of happy ending... but i loved atleast they are 2gether forever...

fabulous story ! though , was following the story from the beginning , couldnot comment before...as am scared to read stories regarding boundaries...a love which is very difficult to achive and a life to live happily ever after ! but couldn't stop myself from reading it because of your wonderful style of writing ! oh ! maan and geet...couldn't they wash away in that river...and reach a place where there are no boundaries and restrictions and be alive and happy ! feel like searching where this river flows and where it ends...may be would do that ...what ever the outcome ! and the lines written at the end...fabulous ...!!

edited my comment in prev page

Just stumbled across this story...very well written...i just loved it though I ma not a big fan of tragedies but I guess this one had just one ending...

its end already... 😔...

Originally posted by: palindrome

I read chapter 9 and 10 together and when they were talking in that "restricted area",I was like,"Why are they talking here???They should go to some safe place firstly" and then I thought,"There is no safe place for them at this moment..They are neither safe on this side of "Ravi" nor on other.."As soon this thought cross this mind,I got aware of the "end" of this wonderful story..

Though,the "end" was sad but it was perfect and may be "best optioned" end for them..They took their last breath together with the knowledge of the "love" that they had for each other in their hearts and without any misunderstanding and pain...!!!😊

Thank you so much dear for giving us this story..

I don't have words to praise your "writing skills" anymore..You are "best" in your own way dear...👏

Keep writing more and more...!!!!😊

and congratulations for completing your first story on GF..!!!!😃

I would surely follow your "next story" and I am pretty much excited for it..and if you had written somewhere else too,please let me know..I would read each and every work{whether a poem or story} from you...

Once again Thanks for writing this wonderful story...😊

PS-Poem at the end was "most beautiful" poem,I have ever read...!!!👏

First of all, Thank you! Thank you!!!!

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

awesome... loved it... u changed defination of happy ending... but i loved atleast they are 2gether forever...

Thank you darling!

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

fabulous story ! though , was following the story from the beginning , couldnot comment before...as am scared to read stories regarding boundaries...a love which is very difficult to achive and a life to live happily ever after ! but couldn't stop myself from reading it because of your wonderful style of writing ! oh ! maan and geet...couldn't they wash away in that river...and reach a place where there are no boundaries and restrictions and be alive and happy ! feel like searching where this river flows and where it ends...may be would do that ...what ever the outcome ! and the lines written at the end...fabulous ...!!

Thank you for commenting dear.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

😃

hiii am first

i hate the endings where the hero or herione dies which according to me is a sad ending..but here , may be for the 1st tym, i dint feel sad...as you said this was the best happily ever aftre this story could have got...nice one👏 the poem kind of thing , did u write that?? good one😊

Sorry for late reply!

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Just stumbled across this story...very well written...i just loved it though I ma not a big fan of tragedies but I guess this one had just one ending...

Please send me a PM if you start any new work as I will love to read more...

Thank you!