THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 87

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Ah, there's always such beautiful things to see on your threads ;) 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Zarin as much as I love your nice comments do guide me if you find I am going off track. I will definitely trust you and my mafia to do that... 🤗

Of course 🤗 We're all here to help each other and the minute I see something worth making a note of, I'll let you know :)

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Ah, there's always such beautiful things to see on your threads ;) 😆

updated on 81..

sorry for late comment ..

Originally posted by: dqno1

Stubble kaha hai...?

Have a gr8 day Sheen🤗

Sair karne gai hai 😆
Looking malai makhan 😳😉😉

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">sorry for late comment ..</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">me not active these days due to exams ..🤢</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000099">but now i am glad that i dodn't got to read it bit by bit ..</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#000099">coz reading 6 chp together was great fun ..😃😃</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#000099">loved the way u narrated each one ...👏👏</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff9900">this devtara couple seems to be a cocktail ..sweet n sour</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#ff9900">yet adorable ..⭐️</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc00cc">fir se maaneet ko hi fate game a nishana ban'nna para ...😭</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#cc00cc">humare poor babies always have to face so much be4 getting together ..</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">but sachi i loved each n every song ..👏👏👏</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">specially dadi's CS wala kishore da wala</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">n maan's song ..😳</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#ff0000">both were fab perfectly fitting with the scene ..⭐️</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#009999">well i am already falling for this Maan ..😳</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#009999">lol he was actually dreaming a dance sequence sitting in a meeting ..😆</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#009999">but kya karein ISHQ ke maare hain ..rolf</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#009999">dance sequence was described beautifully ..felt really romantic yet serene ..😉</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0033cc">naintara's intro part was too good ..i was smiling through out ..😆😆</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#0033cc">what with that marriage thing ..?? didn't got that point ..is thr some mystery related to it yet to be unfold ..??? plss clear this ...</font></font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">n geet ..haayeee she is such a sweet angel</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">my god she is been working with savitri dad since last 2 years n maan doesn't know of it ...😲😲😲</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">but gali mien aaj chand nikla was beautiful to hear in the background with maan's entry ..😳</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900cc">over all i am in love it ...😃⭐️⭐️</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900cc">beautiful concept n exceptionally beautiful narration ..👏👏</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900cc">thnxxx for the pms ..😊</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9900cc">n keep giving such awesom blossom stories ...😃</font></font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#009900">next comment kitne parts ke baad huga i don't know ..🤢</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#009900">but plss do send me pms as i will read it all when ill be free</font>

<font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#009900">thnxxx 4 all ur efforts ..😃</font></font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">luv ya</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">sobia</font>

<font color="#ff3399" size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">🤗
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Thank you Sobia. Here I was thinking you did not like it.

Best of luck!

Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all,Title of this chapter intrigued me..I was about to google it,thinking it would be some new member of Apple family..But then I preferred to read the chapter first But Not even once,i thought it could be english version of "Nayan Tara"..😆

Jokes apart,Really very creative use of words avi.👏.I thought only parjai ji{Nisha aka susegad} is expert in this form of art,but I have found a new talent in this field..😊

Second thing that attracted me and awwed me were the "words" you have used to describe I-star's restless eyes.."Color of stormy night"..👏Very refreshing and new for me..I have never read such description of eyes before...😊

Dev's narration was "super fun" to read..I was laughing cum giggling whole time..It isthe first love story which has started with Hero calling the heroine,"chotu motu Haathi.."🤣

and this chotu motu haathi has mugged the whole "Employee rule book"..😆She has all the rules on her finge tips...😲Photographic memory,i must say...She reminded me of "Mike Ross" from "Suits"..😃

I totally loved Dev's theme song for I star...

Tu tu tutu tara..

Its "fas gaya dil bechara" now...

Very soon,it would be "Todo na dil hamara.."😊

Wonderful chapter avi...

and I am already loving the teaser cuz it has "SRK" in it..😃

Thank you Palin! No sorries please.

Hero also got slapped so haathi bolna banta hai. Although this is not their first meeting...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you Sobia. Here I was thinking you did not like it.

Best of luck!

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

i loved it yrr bas just that exams hain tou ziada time ke liye nahi arahi so didn't got to read much lately ..

hopefully i get over these board exmas soon ..just 36 days left for my 1st paper ...🤢

n in between thr are so many test n papers in my coaching centre ...😭

anyways list lambi hai ...😆

thnxx for the wishes ..really in need of them ...😃

luv ya

Don't take tension dear. Do your best. This is a long story so u will be able to catch up later

Wishing you all the best 🤗