THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 86

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Mohabbat toh hoti hai upar waale ka tohfa
Darey ga jo, ussey samet legi apni baahon mein!

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Mohabbat toh hoti hai upar waale ka tohfa
Darey ga jo, ussey samet legi apni baahon mein!

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

😳

Originally posted by: paponecon

maan have to watch DDLJ...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mast hai Sheen... Doll looks so gorgeous!!!

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I have done the impossible! I have caught up with this story! Someone, quick, hand me a medal!

I am so glad. You were missed Zarin! Gold medal for fast reading!

I am in love with the I-star - Devu equation already par woh toh hona hi tha. I always fall for the Naintara type characters and they always end up having the best love stories. Mujhse zyaada meetha saha nahi jaata. I am going to flatter myself quite a bit by saying that she reminds me a little of myself. I love that the girl has a talwaar and sharp tongue ready and waiting but she doesn't use them without reason.

Me too. Dev-tara are in the forefront right now and I am enjoying writing them.

Geet is an out and out jhalli. She has a very innocent, almost naive and childlike aura and actually, that scares me a little and makes me apprehensive about what she will have to face in the future.

Nothing bad happens to women in my story. Women pe atyachar all over the world hota hain, I think that is enough. They will fight and win every time in my stories and the men will definitely be worth it...😉. Avi ka style...😉

I immediately associated the word 'cute' with her and that makes me think that she will be the one to see the most hardships over the course of this story.

The music... ah... Avi, the music in this story reminds me of the wind. In every chapter it is there, quietly caressing the chapter, refreshing it and driving it along.

I love this format, the way you've weaved the songs and the words together. These short, regular bursts of Avinism (thank you, Palin, that is exactly the word) are perfect.

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Doll ko maine dekha hi nahi 😳😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Isiliye maine dikhaya!!! 😆