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need to type a lil di will update as soon as i finish doing it but can only do it when i am alone in room which is quit tough at this point of time
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hi guys sorry would have updated in afternoon itself but had to type lil bit of update 80% of it is done only 20% is left and i need to proof read it too before updating but couldn't do it as my sis took pc and give it back now only when everyone is present here and i can't update it now before them so will update as soon as i am alone in the room and its fully ready 😊hope u guys understand and wait for the update lil more 😃
Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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done with typing dear just need to proofread and then i will update it just hope to get some time alone to do it 😉
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Part 28





When maan took geet hands suddenly in his hold and started moving making his way upstairs to the room ...Reaching half way on stairs he looked at dadima with an expressionless face and nodded his head in a no knowing she will stress herself worrying about him and give her a lil smile while trying to hide the hurt inside him...when dadima just hold his check in worry and maan said looking in to her eyes...



Maan: I am fine dadima don't worry now u go and take some rest ok...



While dadima just nodded in response and maan move forward taking a silent geet with him...



On reaching near the door geet looked back at dadima who was looking at both of them and blinked her eyes telling her silently that she will take care of maan she doesn't need to worry about him while finally dadima's forehead which was till now having worry lines on it relaxed knowing she doesn't need to worry any more about maan as till geet is there nothing can happen to maan he will never ever be said till she is there with him...



Reaching the room maan left her hand and moved to the window standing there he got lost is his own thoughts while geet kept looking at him few minutes passed with maan lost in thoughts and geet looking at him in worry not knowing what to do and how to change his mood ...



She was thinking that only when her gaze fell on the pregnancy book kept on the table by maan seeing it she got an idea to divert his mind from those talks and moving towards it she read out loud the name of the book...and that was enough for maan to come back from his lala land and thought in his mind...




Maan: ohh god how can I forget about it ...




And turning around maan moved towards geet he give her a angry glare and started moving towards her while geet moved backed ...forgetting she was standing beside bed she fell back on bed scared suddenly seeing him so angry ...she didn't got hurt luckily and maan to realize it and give her one more glare while she made a baby angry face like saying it's not my fault but yours as u scared me with u r look suddenly...



When maan suddenly remembered about her medicines which he bought for her before everything happened downstairs and that made him very angry on him for forgetting about it before...





And he moved towards table to take the medicines from their and took water and medicine and moving towards her he forwarded both towards her with a glare which made geet to gulp her saliva knowing she is gone now and she silently took those bitter tablets making yucky faces...




After that she made angry face and turned other side and lie down angrily on bed facing backwards to him plus she felt sleepy too while the medicines also made her feel sleepy ...



While maan who himself was angry ignored her anger and started reading the book to know more about how to take care of a pregnant women ...




While an angry geet slept as soon as she closed her eyes after lying down on the bed...maan had only started reading the book when he got a call from adi who informed him about some pending work and they continued to talk about it while talking maan got up and keeping the book aside for now he come to his working place in outhouse and started working on some files while talking to adi ...



It was 2 hours since maan was talking with adi discussing some work with him when he got one more call it was sasha this time while maan just sighed and told adi to keep on hold while he talked to shasha ...as maan talked with shasha he come to know how much work is suffering because of his sudden disappearance from office and its time that he should look into it as many imp project r going on which needs his imitated attention and he told shasha to come to outhouse with adi Tasha and pinky so that they all could work down together and finish all the pending work and inform adi also about it after cutting call with sasha...as maan put the phone down he just pinched the bridge of his nose knowing that he is going to have a long day ahead while geet was also little upset with him and he understand that it was just because of his anger which she didn't know was on himself and not her...and thought to talk to her later about it as she needs to rest right now while he finished his work and he know he has to tell her about some more things which r important for their future but didn't knew how to talk to her about it but it will be good if he does it before she gets to know about it from someone else other than him which can be harmful for their relation and he didn't want that to happen it will weaken their relation but at this point he can't even give her the stress and the truths of his past may even make her sad too...



He closed his eyes thinking about all this ...when again his phone ring and he again got busy with his work ...



Geet got up after her peaceful sleep and looking around she found no one in the room she thought ...



Geet: yeh maan sir kahaan hai?



She comes down from bed and after washing her face she comes down to see maan busy working and twisting her lips she looked up towards babaji with a baby face...complaining to him about her dusht-danav...



Geet: dikha-dikha babaji apne he doesn't even care if I get angry with him he didn't even once tried to talk to me...



She made a face looking at the ceiling when she heard noise of the main door opening and seeing there she saw adi pinky sasha and Tasha all the four of them with some files and folders in their hands ...she got confused as in why they all were here ...but before she can ask anything she heard maan saying ...




Maan: now will u all come inside and start working or does u all need an invitation for that too...




Listening to his stern voice every one hurriedly set their self and soon the all were working while geet looking at them in amusement and then she thought to herself...






Geet: array geet what is there to get amused in this when maan Singh khurana start coming in his original dusht-danav form this is bound to happen ...



She said and looking upwards she said...




Geet: haina babaji...



When heard maan saying coming near her ear...maan had seen her talking looking upwards and had come near her when she was lost in her on world talking to her beloved babaji...



Maan: geet u can talk to u r babaji later for now go and have u r evening snacks with dadima I have already informed nakul about u joining dadima so go now dadima must be waiting for u...



Listening to him geet got all the more angry with him and gives him an annoyed look when maan looked at her with a raised eyebrow seeing her not moving at all still looking at him he said...



Maan: now why r u looking at me go ...


And geet moved from their stamping her foot she left ...



Maan kept looking at geet till she left from their and then he too got back to his work...



While sasha who saw maaneet talking burned in jealousy seeing them ...when Tasha come there and said...




Tasha: sasha I mean mam did u see how geet left from here without even meeting adi and pinky waise tu bahut dost bante firti hai in 2 ki and now just see her attitude mam...Engagement kya hugaye hai is bahenji ki tu tiwar he badal Gaye hain...



When sasha give her an annoyed look and said...



Sasha: u came here to work or see this bahenji and her attitude...get back to u r work now before MK sees u here talking with me and gets angry with u and because of u I too will have to bare his anger which I don't want get it...



When Tasha understood what sasha was seeing was right and getting scared Tasha too run back and soon both got lost in their respective work ...when maan came their talking on phone and give a glance to all of them working and moved on his table seeing everyone busy with their respective work and Tasha and sasha both give each other a glance before returning into their files...





Here geet reached mansion and saw dadima seating on couch and having her tea and evening snacks...she moved towards her when dadima saw her and giving her a warm smile which geet returned with her beautiful smile and keeping her cup on the table dadima welcome her and both seat down having their snacks when dadima said...



Dadima: geet how is maan now beta?



She asked her in a worried tone...when geet understood her worry and replied taking dadima's hand in her after keeping her tea cup on the table ...



Geet: don't worry dadima he is alright at the moment and is working with everyone in outhouse...



When a confused dadima said...



Dadima: everyone?



Understanding her confusion geet replied...



Geet: everyone as in dadima sasha, Tasha, adi sir and pinky...




While dadima got surprised hearing this when geet told her how she too was surprised seeing everyone suddenly there in the outhouse but before she could talk anything about it or ask anyone maan had send her here for snacks saying she was waiting for her ..geet completed saying everything in a complaining manner to dadima who laughed hearing her...and geet to smiled seeing dadima laugh at last she was not able to see her worrying so much about maan and was happy that she could make her forget her worry and make her laugh too...soon both of them were lost chatting with each other and laughing...



This whole scene was seen by Vicky standing upstairs and he was surprised seeing their bonding and their talks surprised him till no end...he thought to him...



Vicky: dadima seems to like this girl very much and I just hope she is the same person she is showing to everyone here and this entire thing I have watched till now r not pretence otherwise I can't even imagine what will happen...


Outhouse...

Everyone was working and was too lost in their work that they didn't even come to know how the time passed and now it was time for dinner...



It was nakul sudden presence which took all of their attention out from their work when seeing him their maan asked...

Maan: nakul tum yahaan koi kaam hai kya...



And what nakul said surprised them all...



Nakul: yes sir I came here to tell u all that dadima is calling u all for dinner...



A surprised maan looked at the time and said...



Maan: itna late hugaya kaam karte-karte time ka pata hi nahi chala ...


When adi laughed in his signature style and said...



Adi: yeah u r right sir we all were too lost in our work...


Maan looked at all of them and then turning to nakul he said...


Maan: u go nakul everyone else is joining dadima for dinner and tell dadima that I will have my dinner here only I have some work to finish and after doing it I will have my food...


Nakul left after listening to maan's order ...And then turning towards everyone else he said them all to move ahead and soon everyone packed their things and moved out of outhouse...while maan looked at everyone leaving and closed his eyes resting his head on the chair back words ...he was very tired after the long day ...

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sorry for any mistakes guys i really don't know how it come out as i didn't got time to proofread it hope it come out well ...will be waiting eagerly for u r response guys thank u all luv yaa 🤗


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Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Superb update
Love it
Loved dadi n geet talk
Thx
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Kya update diya... itna intazaar ke baad
Geet sleeping & Maan working 😔 bus kuch huva hi nahi
Is maan avoiding confrontation with Vicky that he didn't leave to mansion for dinner...
suspense kol de...
agli update kab milegi...
jaldi dena
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da terrific update! Geet tries to divert his attention n is successful! she is angry! Maan does nt want to upset with his past! Maan wrking n all come frm the office! Geet n dadi talk n Visky watches! He is so mysterious! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update.Try to update next part soon

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