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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

hum har ne wale nahi hai 😆

hum ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
why u told me to give big update i did but now when i wanna know u r review on it u r not giving it to me 😡 and from where did win and lose come here dear i just wanna know u r view about the update and teaser is it wrong to ask u as a frnd and as a writer to give me u r review ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kkiddoo

why u told me to give big update i did but now when i wanna know u r review on it u r not giving it to me 😡 and from where did win and lose come here dear i just wanna know u r view about the update and teaser is it wrong to ask u as a frnd and as a writer to give me u r review ...

well friends are allowed to trouble too 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

well friends are allowed to trouble too 😆

yup they r but u r just way too much 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago


(banner credit goes to priya di aka priya111111)


Part 30



Early morning Vicky returned from jogging and moved towards garden as he entered their he saw geet with her wet hairs and a towel in her hand with her eyes closed enjoying the morning ...looking at her he thought to himself...


Vicky: kya main ju such raha ho woh sahi because seeing her no one can say that she is here because of some bad motive or bad intension se yahaan aye hain ...but what if all this is a lie and pretence just to became a khurana daughter in law ..Now a day's u can't say from a person's face what he / she actually wants...the people who looks very innocent from their faces r mostly the one to cheat and hurt someone...

He was still lost in his thought when geet feeling something strange and getting lil uneasy opened her eyes she was not feeling good from morning and have even puked that's why she was here in the garden after taking her bath to get some fresh air thinking that it will help her to sooth her burning sensation and make her feel fresh too after taking her medicine and it did as she was feeling quite batter now but suddenly she again felt lil uneasy an felt like puking again as she smelt something don't know what type of smell it was so she opened her eyes and looking in front of her she saw Vicky and thought to herself making a weird face...


Geet: Hey babaji kiska chera dikha liya subha-subha uff ajj ka pura din he kahin kharab Na hujaye ...


But suddenly she again felt like puking and run from their totally ignoring the fact that Vicky was also their standing looking her weirdly and have seen her talking to herself and giving him odd looks but as he was quit far from her he couldn't hear her talk luckily for geet and left from their after few second as he was getting late so left shaking his head not getting anything...

Here maan come out from washroom after getting fresh and thought in his mind rubbing his wet hair from the towel setting on the sofa in his bed room...



Maan: I need to talk to dadima soon about geet and her past and even tell her about my decision...I just hope she agrees to this and support me for this also like she had done every time...I can't hurt her and if she come to know about it any other way she will be very hurt knowing I hide such big truth from her... But geet what about her will she trust me and support me in this knowing her past doubting me on this won't be wrong on her side too and I know it will be very difficult for her to understand and do this but it's the only way I have to save her from getting hurt and she too needs to face this reality once she do it she will never fear her past again and will be able to face whatever comes in her way in future too she had to become more strong and determined in matters related to this truth of our life and I will always be there for na I just hope she understand this and trust me enough to do this...


He was still thinking and was lost in his thoughts as he thought about it and made some future plans...


It was afternoon and maan was busy working while everyone else were also there in the outhouse expect geet who was send to her room after her breakfast and medicine to rest with maan's strict order of not getting out of bed and she too didn't do it as she was not feeling good from morning and had frequently puked because of her morning sickness...it all happened before everyone came so no one knew about it and as soon as they come in maan had warned everyone not to go upstairs and disturb geet as she was not well and was resting...and have even told them not to make any noise while working as that may disturb her...adi and pinky were very happy seeing and hearing it from maan loving the way things were changing and happy for geet for getting maan's love and so much care for her ...while shasha and Tasha just kept gaping at maan for sometime at first but then were back to their work again after getting a glare from him ...


Dadima entered outhouse and saw every one working their silently not making any noise at all and was surprised when no one noticed her entering as everyone was lost in their work and she also noticed everyone talking to each other in whispering and was confused as in why they r behaving like this but just shook her head thinking it to be something related to maan's angry mood and she cleared her throat to gain everyone's attention...


Everyone got surprised seeing dadima and adi asked...


Adi: dadima app kaab aye?


Dadima: hum bus abhi aye ...


She replied it with a smile and then looked at maan and saw that he was looking at her with a questing look...she just give him a slight smile in return of his look by which he understood that she is here to talk something important with him and thought to himself...

Maan: what does dadima want to talk to me at this time but anyway it's good that she come here on her own now before she says something I need to talk to her about geet's truth and my decision before something else happens its way to important than anything else at this moment for me ...


And he just gives dadima a slight nod and then turned to adi and said...


Maan: adi now that my side work is finished u all can go to office and continue u r work from their and keep me informed...I will cu guys in office in 2 days u all can leave now...


Everyone agreed and left packing from their bags and taking the files in their hands...now it was only maan and dadima present their when they heard some noise from geet's room and hearing it both dadima and maan got worried and in next second maan run towards her room with dadima behind him...


As both of them entered in the room they got the biggest shock their waiting for them as they saw geet on the floor by the bed side table seating their fainted while maan was the first one to reach the room got hell worried and shouted seeing her...


Maan: geet...


Dadima to got worried and quickly called her family doctor from her mobile ...while a worried maan picked geet up in his arms and made her lye down on the bed and then started rubbing her hands and patting her checks trying to wake her up calling her again and again ...




Maan: geet open u r eyes ...geet wake up please open u r eyes...



When he saw that all of his attempts were getting fail and not getting what else to do he got up and brought a glass of water from the side table in the room and taking few drops of water in his hand he sprinkled it on her face and then again patted her checks and for his relief geet reacted by closing her eyes tightly at first and then slowly she opened her eyes making maan to release the breath he was holding till now and he just hugged her tightly ...while dadima took the glass from maan understanding his reaction and knowing what his next move can be...but what happened next was not what she had expected and the next set of words that escaped from maan's lips made dadima to drop the glass of water that she was holding in her hand... all this while geet was not in her senses so she didn't respond to anything that happened at the room at that moment...




Maan: r u alright geet ...tum thik tu hone baby is fine Na ...tum he kahin chot tu nahi lagi Na ...


But he stopped saying further when he heard the glass crashing sound and looked ahead towards dadima getting shocked at once but then he understood what the matter is as soon as he realized what he spoke to geet in his worry...


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Guys please don't complain and say that the part is short bcz this is the size of my regular update last update was 2 times this one that was only bcz of the delay in the update that i give u long update just bcz i made u guys wait for to long for it and nothing else and any how i am quite sad too bcz not more then 1-2 people's give me long comments and told me how they found the song and maaneet moment it was my time to write something like this with such a long update and that response did made me really sad ...😔sorry for any mistakes will be eagerly waiting for u r views on this as i always do and hope u guys will trust me with the plot of the story too ...


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Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛
Vicky ke shak ke dyre main hai Geet .. Par Geet tho use se anjaan hai...
Sasha & Tasha 😆
Maan still thinking how to say it to Dadimaa... But Geet ko bohat zyaada jaldi thi sach bata neki...
isliye Maan ko shock kar diya aur saach bata diya... and now there would be no delay in her knowing the truth ...offcourse the kid has to update na ... there the delay is expected...
Shock laga laga laga Dadi ko Shock laga!!! Courtesy Maan Babu !!!!😆
Edited by reachsky2011 - 11 years ago
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praff tu aur tera special comment 😆

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