MG OS- EK LARKI KI DASSTA..part 4 pg 20 (30/4) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part dear..

n the song at background was gud..
naina made him realize his love..
fb was bubbly..



thanks valli dii glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: chavvi16

took him long enough didnt it to realise that he loves her
man how could he not get this
uff this maan bhi naa
agar naina ne nahin kaha hota toh inhe toh pata hi nahin chalta
what would we have done with naina making this thakur realise he loves his basanti
so what will he do to win her over
or more like see if she loves him too
hope she does
well i guess we shall find out soon wont we


thanks dear
n yes tym will say
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: NadeeMaaneet

wwwooow shona this is awesome yaar...lovely concept mmmaaan and his basanthi's prem kahani goin to start...wooow me lovin ths yaar...beautiful story baby.loved the bonding between maan and his familt.all of them supports him,specially naina coz of her maan realised tht he is so in love wz jhalli geet...maaneet k pyaar zindabaaad...


its very intrestinggg sweetu😊now all khurana family in action to bring their DIL back ...

plzzz mujhe b tag karna.bhoolna math warna jiju k bol kr tera kaan pkdungi...😆
v love u jaana👏


thanks a lot nadee dii
n plzz karo na jiju se sikhayat woh meri kaan khichege
haaye dreamy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

AWSOME UPDATE CUTEIII... NOW WAITING FOR MY ANGELS ENTRY


thanks richa dii
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan was excited to meet his basanti his geet after a long tym...more to know does his love is soo much powerfull that he can make her his for always.. till eternity...

Handa's welcomed khurana's warmly ...where all the youngers touched the feet of elders..but someone was missing ..maan's eye was searching for her basanti only..but she was nowhere..rano came to maan as she loved him soo much as she don't have any son..only two daughters...so maan was not less than a son to her..n maan too call her chooti maa ... she loved him soo much n she is the only one in handa who always wanted to see him as her son-in-law..but she love her daughter too so she accepted her choice veer singhania but her heart still wants maan as a SIL...

Rano- kaesa h mera maan..said lovingly while hugging him

Maan-hum aachhe h chooti maa aap kasi h...n itni weak lag rahi h ..yeh basanti aapka khayal nahi rakhti h na ...milne do use ..uski kaan khichuga kash ke

Rano-kuch nahi beta bas u hi beti ki shaddi hai na iss lie thori tension h

Maan- chooti maa ab hum aa gae h na ab aap bas hukum karo or apni sari tension humko de dejie

Rano kissed his forehead.. Then maan asked kaha hai yeh basanti mujhse chup ke ku baithi h

Vijay (geet' chachu)- are beta who toh aapka kab se itnejar kar rahi h jae jaldi se mil lijea use

Maan-okk mai abhi aata hu use mil ke

Maan went toward stairs ...n where all members were seeing toward him..handa's were suppressing their evil smile..where khurana's were smiling becoz their mission is gonna to start...as maan reached the first stair a bucket full of water fall on him...he was soo much shocked that from where did the colour water came ..yes a bucket full of colour water ..every one brust in laugh...n maan tilted his head toward up n then saw her devil is sitting there on the railing on stairs n eating apple ...wearing beautiful baby pink colour suit..hairs opened ..some flicks teasing her cheecks ...her earing dancing in her ear ..n she was enjoyin apple with having evil smile on her but ..in that evil smile too she was not looking less than a angel his angel .. his banati..he was watching her without blinking his eye lashes...then riya voice broke his trance...

Riya- wow diii at last aapne aap holi ka badla le lia maan bhai se

Geet-who toh lena hi tha ria ..n start laughing

Where maan was giving her his big glares.. famous MSK style one

Geet-thakur don't show me ur big eyes yeh aapne office me dikhana mujhe dar nahi lagta h ..tumse ehhehe n start laughing

Maan-basanti ab tu gae ..ab koi nahi bacha sakta h tumhe mujhse

N ran towards her where she ran from there n they both start their tom n jerry running n cribbing .. where all were enjoying free tom n jerry show ...

Rano-they won't change

Mamta-who toh hai rano yeh dono kabhi nahi badalte n in slow voice said n badle v na ..but rano heard it n ignore

N here our thankur n basanti still chasing each other ,,,,,,running in whole home at last maan caught her in her room ...n they both fall on her bed...geet was above maan ..n maan was holding her from waist ..n she was laughing heartly where maan was drooling over her

Maan-badi hassi aa rahi h tumhe mujhe aese colourfull bana ke haan

Geet-haan thakur bht maja aa raha h ...at last I took my revenge of last holi

Maan-but lolz u took after almost 1 year

Geet - toh kya hua thakur lia toh sahi,...n sweetly cribbed I missed u thakur u r sooo late .. n I hate u..n move from his embrace n stand in the corner

Maan-aww basanti missed me ...she nodded cutely ...n hate me too ..she again nodded...but I love my basanti(hehhe maan kitna chalu h dekho keh v dia)

Geet-y r u late thakur I have to tall u soo much about veer(ab yeh kawab me haaddi kaha se aaya)

Maan-his simle lil went but said hmm i too want to kown about MR.VEER SINGHANIA.. who is gng to snatch my basanti from me ..but before that I think I need to take shower... nahi toh teri shaddi me rangeen dikhuga (teri nahi humari lolz)

Geet-hmm yeh toh mere rangeen Bandar

Maan-basanti

Geet-ok ok thakur go n take shower m coming in ur room wid our fav ,... cold coffee

Maan-but tumhari hath ka hona cahie

Geet-sure g ..n gave a cheecky smile...maan haye tu toh lut gaya iss smile pe(me nahi maan thought) n went in his room

(ok want to clear something they live in same house ..that is of handa's n khurana's which a big haveli made by maan n geet grandparents ..as khurana's moved to delhi but handa's still live in their home ..n lolz maan n geet room are just beside each other n their room balcony is same )

Maan went in his romm ..n directly went into washroom...opened his all clothes n stand below shower...after shower he came out of washroom in towel only as he was colourful so didn't take his chothes..at that tym geet came in room with 2 cold coffee(lol without knock) n our hero was drooling over his naked body ..then saw saw geet coming..n lost in her until her voice broke his trance ...

Geet-oye thakur itna bada ho gaya h or aaj v aadha nangu punu ghumta h sharam kar😆

Maan-basanti sharam toh tumhe karne cahie na ...tum ke paraye mard ko ase kase dekh rahi ho..tumhare veer ne dekh lia toh kya sochega

Geet-ab yeh veer humare beech kaha se aaya(maan said in low voice tum hi toh le aae hu us chaparganju ko huh)

Maan-let it be ...

Geet-maan ek baat batao

Maan-hmm bolo while drying his hair

Geet- aapki koi gf ya someone spl. Hai joh mujhse v jada spl. H aapki life me

Maan got lil angry while hearing this...he pinned geet to nearby wall n said

Maan-tum nahi janti aapne maan ko kya ...joh eh sawal pucha...but thought something n said...yes I have a gf ...she is the most beautiful n prettiest gal I have ever saw ...

Geet got lil J but then said huh aesa kya...kaun hai who badnasseb

Maan left her n said NAINA KAPOOR with smirk on his smile to see geet pouting

Geet-aapna mujhe kabhi bataya ku nahi ..huh

Maan came deadly closer to her n say-tumhe v toh nahi batya shaddi kar rahi h ..or yeh v nahi batya larka kaun h ..bas chachaji se phone karwa dia ki geet ki shaddi h said wid lil pain in his voice

Geet- are thakur who toh mai aapko surprise karna cahti thi

Maan-toh mai v surprise karna cahta h ...now don't mess ...ab bataogi v ki kaun gadha h shaadi kar raha h ..said while wearing his shirt

Geet-thakurrr...he is not gadha ...n pass his coffee to him...he is super cute

Maan- mai toh gadha hi bolouga bechare ki jindagi kharab ho gae..hehehh n laugh loud..

n geet thorwed a pillow on his face n said aap bht gande ho mai kabse aapka wait kar rahi hu ki aapko veer ke bade me batau ..but u don't want to hear..joa m gng..n started leaving then maan cluth her wrist

Maan-oohhoo basanti kitna gussa karti ho tum...aao baitho yaha n tell me kaesa h veer ..u knw na I can't see u sad

Geet smilied lil n started telling about veer how she meet with him in London..n slowly slowly stared liking him(lolz not love)...n one day he proposed her n she accepted it ..n now they are marrying each other ...then she excitedly said who kal aa raha h yaha hum sab se milne

Maan was smiling but feeling pain to see her talking soo much about another boy..but didn't utter a word ..at last mamta came to call them for dinner...geet left as rano called her

Mamta- sabar rakh beta agar tera pyar sacha h toh who tujhe jarur milegi mera dil kehta h

Maan smilied n side hugged his mother n both came down for dinner...at dinner table all were seated n as always maanet were siting beside eachother n fitting on small small things... but l were eyjoying the food as rano has cooked all fav items of maan n geet too like these things ...n mostly teasing geet on the name of veer...n she was actually blushing n maan too smiling but he was smiling becoz he had a plan in his mind which he gonna to start from tomm. Day only...after dinner both maaneet went to their fav plac.e...

their swing near lake which was made by maan in childhood for her

basanti n both sat on it n started taling about each other n smiling thinking about their childhood n till now days...how thwy use to fight n in last maan manofy geet wid his love ...n their teasing of other children..maan's fight for her basanti...n soo on...

Precap- more nite masti ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,veer entery n naina re-entry


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Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
kya geet maan k pyar ki kadar karegi?...kya maan ko apna pyar milega...m really worried fr all...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77


thanks naddee diii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: love2_soma

kya geet maan k pyar ki kadar karegi?...kya maan ko apna pyar milega...m really worried fr all...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...



dont get panic soma dear u will get a happy wala heart attack in next part just wait for twist😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for ur comments😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mindblowing update

geet please maan ka pyaar dekho i cant see you with another man

thanks for the lovely update


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