MG OS- EK LARKI KI DASSTA..part 4 pg 20 (30/4) - Page 10

Originally posted by: geetsmile

omg i did blunder mistake thanks dii for saying this...i will make it correct ..sorry

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

aisi galtiyan to hoti rehti hain dear...so don't say sorry and for thanx u r welcome...

waise to main bhi dhyaan nahin deti itna but actually my native place is Dehradun so when reading any FF on Maaneet based on Dehradun so I feel very elated...as I belong to Uttrakhand so knew about Nainitaal also...that is why I said...

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

beautiful update

maaneet nik jhok..

geet drenched him in colored water!!!!!!!!!!!!

will geet able to understand maan's love...

lovely update...

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Awsome update cutieee pieee
loved it alottt...
My geet is naughty hehehehehe
i hope wo jaldi apne dil ki baat samjh jaye...
I know wo Veer se pyar nahi karti sirf use aisa lagta hai...
Maan bechara usse pyar karta hai..
I hope Maaneet jaldi sath aa jaye

hellooo guys need to clear soo many things now

1stly thanks to kiran dii..agar aapne who baat remind nahi karwae hoti toh blunder mistake karti mai..thanks a lot ''

N the mistake was geet lives in dehradhun not nanitall'n the swing is near the lake of their house

N now the twist in story starts from here only u all thought it is copy of MERE YAAR KI SHADDI HAI toh aap sab galat ho dearies ' :D I know maine sabko haan bola tha beocz don't wanted to revel the twist 'so dhayan se geet ki pov read karna n enjoy the lil heart-attack ''

Now enjoy update

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Dil tootne per bhi jab koi shikwa na rahe?

Chahe saath nibhane ko koi mitwa na rahe?

Zamane bhar ke gum jab has ke sehte hai?

Chahat ke isi ehsaas ko to Pyar kehte hai?

(cute poem from gravy)

After long tym spending with maan talking about veer '...'.n maan too talked about naina'...'both went back to home '...where geet was talking with ladies about functions n dresses '.n maan was drooling over n talking wid all gents about business n preparations of marriage...'in mid geet's cell buzzed ... n it was from veer ..everybody started teasing her...'..she ran in her room while cluthing her phone ...'.where maan was liking that everyone is teasing her wid the name of veer n thought yeh chapparganju mera picha nahi chorega(hehehe maine veer ka name chaparganju rakha h) isse toh mai aapne geet ko wapash leke hi rahuga...

In room

Geet-heloo veer kaese h aap

Veer-hum aache h geet '...or bataie aap kya kar rahi thi

Geet-who badi maa or sab aae hai na bas unke sath tym spend kar rahe the'said wid a smile

Veer-hmmm soo aapke thakur aa gae

Geet- g aa gae humare thakur

Veer-that's y u didn't called me

Geet-oohhoo veer u know na kitne din bas hum sabse mile h soo tym nahi mila

Veer-hmm who toh hum jante hi hai aap kitni excited thi sabse milne ke 'nahi nahi apne thakur se milne ke lie'.wase yeh batae hows plan working

Geet-I don't think veer humara plan kaam karega

Veer- aesa mat bolie geet hum itni dur se bas iss plan ke lie hi aa rahe h

Geet- hope yeh plan kaam kar jae..said wid a smile

Veer-geet talk u later I need to goo 'clients aa gae h

Geet- ok veer bye tc

Geet leaned herself on the door of the balcony n lost in thought'...''

Geet- agar humara plan kaam nahi kia thakur g toh hum aapna sab kuch kho dege ''aapne pyar ..apna dost ..sab kuch...hum aapko kho dege maan ...humne bachpan se sirf aapse pyar kia h bas aapse par aap itne buddhu hai ki kabhi samajh hi nahi pae mera pyar ko ...aaj jab aapne who 3 sabad bole the I was feeling lyk I got my life back but ...maan hum aapse woh 3 sabad ek pyar '...aapke andar ke aye ehssaah ke sath suna cahte h ..woh masti wala nahi maan ...hum jante the jab aapko humare iss jhoothe shaddi ke bade me pata chalega u will get angry '..call me humse ladege but aapne aesa kuch nahi kia maan'..a tear escaped from her eyes''...aj humne aapke aankho me who gussa dekha tha jab humne aapse yeh pucha tha ..kya aapki jindagi me koi humse v spl. H ...''par aapki aankhoo ne phir dhokha de dia maan hume u said yes ...'that tym I felt lyk crying loud out of my lungs but hume aapne aap ko sambhala tha maan ...'hum jante h aap kisi se pyar nahi kar sakte '...nahi kar sakte h aap kisi se pyar '.aap bas geet ke maan ho ...''.or mai aapki geet hu maan'.agar aaj aapko mere pyar or apne pyar ka ehsaas nahi h toh hum aapko wapash karwege maan '...shayad aap bhool gae hai who din ...but mujhe yaad hai aachi tarah se yad hai aap'...

Aapki labjo se pahli baar humne aapne lie basanti ke alawa mishty suna tha ...'who sabad aaj bhi goonjti hai humare kaano me maan'...'

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It was holi (hehhe yad hai na geet ka revenge..chalo puri kahani sunati hu )

All were enjoying holi '...playing holi in the huge garden of the haveli ...'.n as always geet was missing n maan was getting restless'.looking here n there for her..n there she came in white colour beautiful churridar suit looking lyk a angel

She went toward everybody n touched their feet and everyone putting colour on her face n blessing the angel'...n maan was getting restless to colour her 'nooo nooo to put her in a big tub of colour which was specially made by him for her ..geet came near him n try to put colour on his face but he disappear from there ''...n she was trying soo much too put colour on her face but everytym unsuccessful 'she was crbbing n complaing to her thakur g then don't know from where maan came n scooped her in his arm n throwed her in a big tub of colours ..where geet was cribbing for making her drenched her in all water colours n cursing him for doing this 'but when agsin tried to colour him'...he was out of her reach but some boys were drooling over her as she was all drenched in water n her clothes were like 2^nd skin to her making all her curves showing ...'n they were druken (lollzz bhang) one of the boy came near her n hold her wrist n said

Boy 1- are geet ku maan ke piche padi ho hum v khare h hume v rang lagao aapne in gore gore hatho se

Geet-leave me u jerk otherwise u don't know wht will happen to u

Boy 2- iss larki ke tewar toh dekho... n was looking at her with lustly..which geet noticed n she didn't liked it n struggling wid his hold '...

At that tym 1^st boy forcefully tried to colour her 'in very bad way by toching her curves n all 'n was about to touch her waist at tym he got a tight punch on his face ..n others too tried to hit but at that tym whole family came soo he went but maan has already beaten the 1^st boy black n blue until raj has stopped him ,,,,,,,,'he hold the geet' s wrist n dragged her to his room(hmm maan was too druken lil as he too had almost 7-8 glasses og bhang )

Maan in angry tone kya jarurat thi aese waha pe bhatanke ki ''.agar mai tym pe nahi aata tumhe kuch ho jata toh

Geet- maan galti toh tumhari hi hai na tumne hi mujhe iss tarah puri pani me daala tha na

Maan got more angry n pulled her in his embrace by holding her waist tightly ,...'janta hu meri galti hai par tum 'change karne nahi aa sakti thi kya haan ..tumhe har baat samjhana ku parta h geet u r not a kid now ,,,so for god sake kuch dimag use kara karo

Geet got angry wid his behavoir 1^st he didn't let her to colour him , 2^ndshouting on her n 3^rd ly holding her soo near to him in which she was getting restless as she loves him soo it was getting difficult for her to hold more soo she just pushed him wid all anger n said

Geet- tumhe ku farak parta h haan, mera jo dil karega wahi karugi , jab tumhe meri parwah hai hi nahi toh mai tumahre bare me ku sochu ..tumhe toh aapna ego pyara hai na that's y u don't let me too colour u n us sam ki bacchii ke sath bade aache se baat n khel rahe the huh n mai handel kar sakti thi unhe tumhe aane ki jarrurt nahi thi samjhe MR. MAAN SINGH KHURNA '..(till now maan ka bhag bht jada cadh chukka ka )'when she turned back to see him ..he was slept on bed lolz .he felled on bed n was sleeping but blabbering something

Maan-they can't touch u like that geet I will kill them ...koi meri mishty ko aese cuhaege yeh bardasst nahi kar sakta hu mai'u r mine only mine mishty

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Geet - Aaj v lagta h jase kal ki hi baat thi maan ..ap jo hosh me nahi keh pae who hosh khone ke bad keh dia '...shayad who baate mai aapse phir sun paati maan 'agle din suha ek hope ke sath aapse milne gae thi par sab khatam ho gaya kuki aapko kuch yaad nahi tha..she broke down completely on floor n tear was continuously pouring out from her eyes'. Ku kar rahe ho aesa maan '...jab ek baar aapna keh chuke ho toh phir ku nahi bolte maan apni dil ki baat ...mujhe suna hai maan aapse yeh suna h ...'mai sirf aapki hu yeh suna h mujhe maan

Or mai yeh sun ke hi rahugi ...'dekhti hu koi chipkali (naina) kaese aati h mere or aapke beech agar aap MSK ho toh mai bhi GH hu agar ghee siddhi ungali se nahi nikalti toh ungali tedi kar leni cahie maan ...maine v wahi kia h'..shaddi toh meri apse hi hogi warna yeh geet jindagi bhar shaddi nahi karegi yeh wadda h mera maan khud se

Thanks to veer who helping me '...us din jab usne mujhe propose kia tha mujhe bht bura laga maan phir v maine usko mana kia n sab bataya'n he agreed to help in getting u ...'n yeh uska hi plan tha to make u jealous n aap hoge v I know '...u know na how best actor is ur geet ..she smiled lil '.soo MR. MSK ready for the shock treatment from tomm. Veer aate hi hoge ..humare plan ke sath '''''just wait n watch mai kaesa GMSK banati hu ..woh v aaphi kahoge yeh ''.she smiled evilly while thinking this n went to sleep in hope of new day of her life'...

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Maan in his room too called naina n said to come here n she got agreed'n they discussed about their plan how make geet realise his love n went to sleep in hope of new ray

Dono ke dil mein pyar

Dono aanjan hai

Ek dusre ko cahte h

Par bata nahi paate h

Kya yeh aapni jindagi ko nae raah

Nahi manjil de paege

Precap- same entery of veer n naina

At last likh lia lolz in 2hrs only

Me waiting for response

Mujhe jaana hai aap logo ko kahani me twist n mera sweet wala mini heat attack kaesa laga

Plzzz bata jarur m desperate to know

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Wow.. loved it... kya proposal tha... Ab jaldi se Geet ko realize karwa do... 😃

Update soon :)