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This was absolutely needed..!!! Maan was needed to show he is the not the one who had got hurt..There were other people who were hurt more than him...!!!😡
"You are awesomest...!!!" Shiku...!!!
You made me see,how Geet found Lasya aunty in the library,that too in their conversation..and the point,where Geet told him this,was perfectly chosen..Picture that your mind creates pinches your heart very sharply at that moment during their heated argument..Effect wouldn't have been this much,if you had written this in normal "descriptive scene" at the starting of chapter...!!!
You are absolutely brilliant author...Please do consider to write professionally some day...😊
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