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Posted: 11 years ago
IF YOU ARE READING THIS PLESE RE-ADD ME IF i HAVE DELETED YOU!!!



Chapter 8
The Deed


"I am not a good person Geet..I uhh killed some people. Their son will come for revenge..I know when he does please give him these papers. Please."

"After ruining my life you expect me to do something for you? You not only ruined some poor person's life but you ruined my life too...I am what I am today because of you"

"I know and am sorry...I wished I had listened to you but my ego was more important to me then my daughter's feelings. I know I will have to come back in next birth to pay for my sins...please forgive me"

"I am no one to forgive you its up to the god. Anyway, I will fulfil your last dying wish. Whatever you have done to the guy's family doesn't concern me but I will wait for him and see to it that he gets this"

"thanks Beti.." (He smiles..Geet forces herself to smile as her dad passes away leaving her alone with a file for a strange man that she doesn't know. Geet throws the file on the bed when a letter falls down. Curiously, she picks up the letter it was from her father)

Dear Geet,

If you are reading this then I guess I am dead and just like with everyone else my death might have brought some kind of relief for you if not a bitter taste in your mouth. I am not going to apologize for anything that I have done since I know I can't be forgiven easily. The purpose of this letter is to inform you of my past deed. You might not care but it is important for me to tell you what happened and who might come looking for you. Maan. (Geet mumbles his name under her breath)

I killed his parents...I used to be a hit man and I was hired to take out an influential people who refeused to give in money. I killed his parents right in front of him in public, his eyes filled with rage and sadness, I could never forget and till this day his face still haunts me. After killing his parents, I realized what I have done, if only I could take back the time. The little boy did not cry for his parents death, instead he promised that one day he will come for me. One day he will take revenge for his parents death. Seeing the determination on his face, I knew he would.

As years went by, Maan became the most influential and ruthless business man in the world. I knew the reason behind his ruthlessness and I knew the day is not far when he would use his contacts to find me. Unfortuately, I will not be around to pay for my sins. Please give the files to him even though it will not make up for what I did but it would be something.

Please forgive me!

Your father,

Mohindar Handa

Geet wakes up remembering the past that she had chosen to forget..the letter that her father wrote she remembered that she had burned that letter and putting away the files for him to come. Maan. That was his name. He did come as his father had promised. He will take revenge from me and my daugther because of my father.

No matter how much we both hate each other we both had one common enemy...my father. If only he was alive to see this. He not only ruined my life but his too and god knows how many other people are behind him for the sake of revenge.

She still remembers his words, he will be back and this time she knew how he was. He is not a mystery anymore but the question is will she be ever ready for what he migth have planned? Whatever he did yesterday, she knew it was a trailor there was a lot more to see and a lot more to come from him but in what form she doesn't know.

"Bang"

Maan shoots at his target board with Mohindar's face. The bullet hits right between his eyes. Perfect bulls eye! Adi, his assistant, claps for his boss...he never misses his shot...Adi runs up to the target board and places a new picture on it this time of Geet. Maan looks at the picture and closes his eyes. He could see her face in his mind of Geet. He was so close to her, he could still feel the warmth of her body against his chest, her angry eyes which amused him, her being fearless in front of him, first person to try that too. He shoots toward the target remembering who she was. Maan opens his eyes, he missed. Never did he miss his target even with eyes closed he was able to shoot with such perstine that leaves everyone shocked.

"Sir..."

Adi says shocked at what he saw. Maan raises his hand in anger silencing him. He drops the gun walking away in rage and angry. He was angry at himself for thinking about a mere girl, epsecially the girl that was related to his enemy. How can he? He needed to do something fast.


Note;
I told you guys of Maan's past...the rest of the story will be here on fourth will be of Geet. I don't want to go through Maan's past where the story of how he became is clear now
Edited by mrs.msk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
Feeling sorry for geet. Hope soon Maan starts to feel for geet
😊 Geert is suffering for her dad doings
Edited by ambbiha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So mohinder guessed everything from starting
Gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏



so mohinder killed maans parents😡



he spoiled geets life also😡



maan is taking revenge on geet for her father deeds😲



is maan falling for geet?😉



update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet suffering for another deeds
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Posted: 11 years ago
glad to know maan's past...he was right in his place to punish her father...but what is geet's mistake in this ...she herself suffering for her dad's wrong deeds and running & hiding away to save her daughter...hope maan will change his mind soon...egar to know geet's past and who she married
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so geet's father mohindar handa killed maan's parents infront of him
now geet paying for her father's deed
maan thinking about geet and missed his aim...
waiting to know geet's past
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gr8 updt ... So geets dad was a hit man I thought they were business rivals thts y he killed maan's parents ... Waiting fo geets past ... Updt sooon plezzz eagerly waitinggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
so geet's dad killed his parents
now he is here to tk revenge on geet
but y geet and her father don't get along
oops maan missed it

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...

She knows its maan but wat will he do she does not know... she knows tat he will take his revenge from her and her daughter and she does not even know how will he

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