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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet..for her dads sin she has become the target to maan
w8ing 4 maans reaction

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
Feeling sorry for geet😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part.. Poor Girl her father never cared for her.. He never cared for anyone in his life.. But still she is getting punishment of his deeds... Hope Maan would know this soon.. As she never get single happiness when her father was alive n after his death too.. He is punishing her for the crime which she never did.. If Maan would do bad with her.. what's difference btwn her father n now him(Maan)..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update but what makes maan and her father different both destroyed innocent lives difference is geet father did not kill an innocent child but maan does not care who he destroys from geet who was not part of her father life to and innocent baby he is worse that the man he wanted to take revenge from awesome update thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm 4 all updates! Read n commented except 4 Ch 8! Js read Chap 8 nw! Feeling 4 Geet! She is suffering so much! Maan wants to take revenge 4 wt her dad did! well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part maan won't be able to kill geet they r made for each other though they hate each other but belongs to each other
thnx for pm
waiting for next update
hey requesting u plz don't stop writing . M a big fan of yours writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Geet reminded her past n the letter
Gosh that was horrible
Maan had to witness his parents death
From that age he was burning in revenge
But what's geet's fault!!
Feeling pity for her :( n Amy too :(
Maan missed his target on geet :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...so geet's dad was a hitman & he killed maan's parents...poor maan he must have suffered a lot...his past is clear now...but now reading convo between geet & his dad I am curious to know why geet hate his father so much???...maan missed his target for geet...well ye to hona hi tha...u are attracted to her...& this shows that in future also he will miss his target...


btw I have send u a buddy request...I am a regular reader & comment everytime...may be sometimes I am late by 1-2 days due to my hectic schedule , but I always comment...I have a exam on 2nd feb , still I am commenting...well kya karu addicted to maaneet stories..😆...btw if u still refuse to accept buddy request then I have to be a stalker...🤣..btw why don't u shift ur stories to blog & send passwords to loyal readers...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally caught up n holy hell wat an ff .. ufff... Jus amazin.. luvin it .. Awesum
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay, here is another update for you guys for today!
I will try to update daily but show me some love!!😆😆😆


Chapter 9
Maan in Disguise


Geet had moved Animaah to her room, she knew that Maan would be back just like he promised he would. He didn't seem like the type of guy that wouldn't keep his word and she knew with the fire and thirst for revenge she saw in his eyes he will be back. Right now, she just had to be prepared for his return. She had to keep Animaah safe, if she has to repeat the history again then she will without any hesitation. There would be no way that she would allow Animaah to feel any kind of pain. Pain would have to go through her. Everyone was snatched from her and her daughter is the only form of consilation left in her life. Without her, the sacrafices she made would be of nothing.

"Alright, Geet everything is ready. Are you sure you want to do this? I could find a safe place for you and your daughter"

Geet looks at the detective that she had met up with the other day. She wanted to catch this Maan guy and had no othe option but to turn to the last person she had hoped. She hated seeing the pity look in his eyes for her. Last thing she ever wanted was pity. She had enough of people seeing her helpless, shaking their head while mumering the awful things that happened in her life. People refused to see what kind of person she has become, they refused to see how strong she is, how she is fighting her own battles. No, people only saw a widow going to jail, a mother being seperated from her child, a victim of life and circumstances left all alone to fend for herself and that made her angry.

"No am okay. I have learned how to fight my battles and this time I will do whatever I can to protect my daughter."

"Geet...I am your friend...please listen to me"

"I have no friends Detective Ajay. No one stood by me espeically those that I counted on, so don't even use that word in front of me."

"Okay, sorry. I uhh before I leave, there are few things you should know. I have placed a thin wire on each door so if there are anyone that will try to break in the thin wire will triger the house alarm alerting you and the police right away. The windows are tight shut and I will be right outside of your house in my car looking for any suspecious activity. If you hear any noises at all, then call me right away."

"Okay. Thank you!"

"No need to thank me..before I leave...I know you wouldn't beleive me but I really am looking out for you and fulfilling the promise I made to your brother. Whether you see me as a friend or an enemy i will always be there for you."

Maan sat in his car couple of blocks away. His guards were keeping a close eye on the house and they informed him of a guy that just exited from Geet's house. Maan looked at the picutre that his guards took, the same guy that Geet met up with at the resturant.

Ohh so she called a dectective to catch me? folish girl. Doesn't she know its Maan Singh Khurana she is dealing with. No police or dective or anyone for that matter will be able to catch him. He always has a way. He smirks.

Geet sat the bed looking at the door. She was not going to fall asleep tonight. She would wait for Maan whenever he decides to show up whether it would be today or tomorrow he wil show up sooner or later. Koora laid down on the bed besides Geet looking at the door as same as her waiting for the intruder. Geet's looks at the time it was midnight and still no sign of the intruder...her eyes slowly start to close when she hears a slight noise.

Koora was fast asleep not wanting to wake her dog up, she grabs the baseball bat she had kept under her bed for safety. Slowly, she starts to move toward the bedroom door which was opened wide. She peeks her head out the door to see if anyone was there, when coast was clear she makes her way in the hallway walking very slowly trying to make sure not to make any noise. Geet stops in her tracks when she sees a shadow at the end of the hallway. She felt him behind her again, quickly she turns around ready to strike when a hand holds her hand midway, twisting her wrist until she loosens her grip on the bat.

"You bas***d, you think I will be scared?"

"I came all the way here to see you and here you are welcoming me with a bat. Not nice! Now, drop the bat.." (he twists her other free hand behind her back harshly while pulling her closer toward himself. Slowly, he managed to bring her other hand behind her back as well while she fought to be released.)

"How did you get in?"

"You really think that dectective is going to stop me from seeing you? No one can stop me..."

"I know who you are...Maan" (He looks at her with a smirk..he holds both of her hands in one hand while with his other free hand he takes off his mask revealing his face to her)

"You are not as dumb as I thought...since you know my name might as well reveal how I look like to you." (he inches closer to her face while Geet struggled to go back as much as she can. Soon she found herself being pushed back against the wall while he presses his whole body against her caging her. She looks to her left at the end of the hallway, where another man stood with a mask on)

"If you don't stop, then that man will take your daughter. We know about the chip and he won't hesitate to cut open your daughter and take it out. You will only hear her screams and watch her bleed to death. He is as ruthless as I am" (The man stand next to Maan showing her a scalpal he was holding in his hand...)

"No..." (Geet whispers to herself and then looks at Maan with equal fury) "I dare you guys to go closer to my daughter or even try to touch her. You don't know me Mr. Maan..you don't know what extent I can go to"

"Well then lets find out..." (he signals the guy who slowly starts to walk toward the room.) "What will you do now?"

Geet smiles and thanking god that her hands were free. I had taken a self defense classes after her time out of jail and there were some tricks that i learned about dealing with your enemies espeically men. They say that seduction, if doing it right will leave men at their weakest point. Right now, I tend to use that defense to escape. If i make one wrong move or do anything too early then saving my daughter will be hard.

The whole part of sedution is starting slowly, looking at the enemies eyes, looking for their weakest point and when they do get to their weakest point attack! Attack with all the power and strength one could gather. I slowly, placed my hands on his back, alomost like hugging positon while maintaining eye contact to show him I am not scared.

I could feel his body stiffing underneath my touch as I slowly run my palms over his back slowly moving upwards. I knew he wanted to see what I could do with his daring eyes. He might have done a background check on me but he didn't count on me being so bold. Soon my hands move upwards toward his hair, I slowly began messaging his head while bringing his face closer and closer toward myself. Soon my lips joined his. I could feel his body relaxing little by little as he responds back to my kiss. Now, I just had to wait for perfect moment.

Maan didn't know what was going on, he was liking her slowl soothing touches. Slowly, he starts to respond and even hold her closer while Geet too didn't hesitate to kiss him back. Maan preses his upper body completley against hers as he hands went all over her top trying to feel her skin. Geet moans sligthly when she felt his hand touch her chest. Slowly, she opens her eyes looking past his shoulder and in one quick movement she kicks him on his private part making him fall back in pain. She runs toward her bedroom door where the guy was standing next to her daugther's crib abount to cut her arm. She grabs a vase throwing it towards him. The man stumbles back. She quickly grabs the kinife from his hand cutting his hand. Blood was all over the floor.

"I dare you to touch her again"

Koora wakes up hearing the noise and starts barking at the man. She snarls at the man ready to attack while Geet stands next to her daugther's crib. She sees Maan standing right behind the man patting him on his shoulder. The man then runs toward the hallway while Koora chases him within few seconds she heard Koora whimpering noises in pain. She wanted to check if she was alright but she couldn't. Maan was still here. The devil.

"its just you and me now..." (he closes the door behind him as he slowly walks toward her in slow steady steps.)

"Killing me or my daughter will not bring your parents back. Your revenge is pointless. You are waisting your time"

"I might be but now the game is not all about revenge...tell you what..." (he lays down on her bed while Geet still has the knife pointing towards him. Maan turns and lays on his side facing her) "I will forget about this revenge if you take off your top" (he smirks while Geet stands there not knowing what to say.)


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