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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: heytal
Fantastic update Maari
so so so loved it
😃
I'm happy to know that! 😳
Geet trying to avoid Maan
to mask her new found feelings for him😕
Maan trying to initiate a conversation between them
to strengthen their friendship😳
Ahh, I wouldn't call Geet's feelings 'those feelings' yet. 😉
Poor Ayush trying everything under the sun to woo Anaya
but in vain
Anaya not grasping the hints given😆
Maan mediates to give the much needed push
Maan is trying to save the day, but wouldn't you want Ayush to have to do a bit more efforts to reach Anaya's heart? 😃
Here G does the honours
and boom😛
Now finally Geet will try to reason out her feelings for him🤔
Yes, all Geet needed was push from a third person to get her thinking. 😳
Bechaara Maan trying hard to come to terms with Geet's weird behavior😔
He's not that bechaara! 😆
I loved this chori chori chupke chupke game😉
Its kind of interesting😉
*Grins*
So Maan has guests over😉
Jogging👎🏼
And The Crash😎
You don't like jogging or what? 😆
Maari😡 U are so mean
aise point pe chod diya
Ab next Wednesday tak
dono aise hi rahenge kya😲☺️
Dono ko aise rehna padega Wednesday tak! 😉
Can we have an early update
Pwweez 😊
Trying for it but it's a little difficult. 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: Susegad
I am loving totally loving this.
Maan run towards her b'coz he is attracted towards her, while she is running away from him for the same. It's like running on a tread mill Geet, thak jaogi, pasina pasina ho jaogi, but you'll get nowhere.
It's going to take her nowhere but when Maan is running a few steps behind on the same treadmill, he won't reach her either! 😆
Black jeans, blue shirt brought to mind this outhouse scene of his. I love him in this casual outfit and that smile.😳 Geet, you idiot, how can you run away from this.

Remember, she couldn't resist looking him up and down? 😳
Oh by the way, I so love this picture! ❤️

Poor Maan is conphoosed. Geet is behaving like a typical girl, sending him mixed signals.
Also, let me add poor Ayush to the equation. Bechare ka Anaya toh humesha band baja deti hain.
Oh man the whole thing was hilarious and exciting. Ankhen milna, phir churana, trying to impress the girl(read Ayush here), avoiding looking at the guy yet the eyes can't help but be helplessly drawn towards him.😳

So the thing I get from it is that Ayush is after Anaya, Maan is after Geet, Geet can't help but be impressed by Maan. What's left? Anaya. Who does she have eyes for? 😃

The moment I read the whole scenario, this song came to my mind.
Perfect perfect song for it

Yeh kya hua kaise hua
Yeh kab hua kya pata
Chori chori jab nazarein mili
Chori chori phir neendein udi
Chori chori yeh dil ne kaha
Chori mein bhi hai maza

😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2H4uIuuBEzQ[/YOUTUBE]

I like that song. Perfect for this scenario! Though I couldn't open the video you posted.

'Are you really this blind or do you choose to be ignorant?'

Hmm, all I will say for this one is, the author does know her characters very well doesn't she? Can't help but think, this one phrase, fits our author along with Geet perfectly.😆

I didn't think that line would be taken like this! Mujh pe hi laga di?! 😆

I could totally imagine that whole scenario, with Geet and G in the mall. I can see G grinning like a cheshire cat, while Geet is rambling on and clearly exposing her atrraction to Maan.😃

G, I love you for pointng out Maan's obvious behaviour to Geet, to which our girl is so oblivious.😉

G is the wise elder sister with an eye out for who's the admirer of her younger sister and she has her ways to get Geet to say what's in her heart. 😉

Maan the man is giving advice to Ayush on how to woo a girl. Ab hum aur kya kahe😲
But love these two buddies. Both are in the sam boat and trying to help each other row. I guess from Maan's vantage point he can see his friend clearly, rather his mistakes clearly, for they know each other so well, and yeah Ayush can only win Anaya over by being his own self. If he is not being himself, then even if he wins her over, it's not actually him who would be the winner is it? Are you getting, what I'm trying to say?😕

I was waiting for someone to say the bold part! There's a proverb in Urdu for this. "Khud miyan faseeyat aur doosron ko naseehat!' It means, he teaches what he doesn't really practice himself. 😆
You said that right, if Ayush isn't being himself and he wins Anaya over, it wouldn't be him who wins.

Mayyo, Mayyo, if that is not Geet he has fallen on and you pull another Geeta on us, or it is a 90 kg aunty, he is cushioning himself on, remember Lara Croft has two guns. One is enough for Onir and I'm going to hunt you down with the other one😡

This one gave me and my sister a good laugh! 🤣

Or is it somebody or something or somebody to do with Ranbir. I dont trust you, I dont trust you at all.😔

Tch tch tch. Sad to know you don't trust me. But you'll find out soon who he has taken down with himself in the great fall and who that person has to do anything with. 😆

But can I just say, I have the biggest grin after reading this update, reminiscing old memories. Yet once again, you've brought back beatiful memories to me😳

Hmm.. Beautiful memories, eh? 😃

Earth to Nisha, please come back. Nisha is currently floating two feet above the ground.😉

Let Nisha stay there for a while before she absolutely has to land on the ground. Just be careful she doen't fall with a thud and lands safely. 😆

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