If Only You Saw Me (5) - Page 69

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it

Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

lovely update
continue soon

Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
awesome part dear...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: april12

awesome update
G has cleared up Geet's head
and ayush acting all nice😆
and maan kinda confused😕 about how geet feels
looks like he bumped into her😉

Originally posted by: rashmi.vaish68

lovely update n stupid Geet
why she is avoiding him ?

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

👏👏brilliant update👏👏

Originally posted by: aashi14

fantastic update...
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

wonderful...
ayush is working on his promise...i luved maan's advice to him...
aww poor geet is so confused because of her dream...heehe..but geeta caught her...gr8...hope she makes her understand the feelings of maan...
i love maan's mother a lot...
then ayush and maan's bond is too good...
oh am damn sure its geet with whom he collided...yeah...am desperatly waiting for next part!!!!
continue soon!!!!

Originally posted by: trishadcute

Awesome update ...

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

bechara maan
geet is avoiding him
nice update dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: dreams-reality

fantastic part
loved it

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Awesome Update...loved it
Geet trying to avoid Maan
Loved Ayush effort ..hehhe poor guy
Last scene were beautiful
eagerly waiting for next update
continue real soon

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 9 - You very well described by restless of maan of not finding any clue about geet

</div>Liked how he took away her insecuriteis from her regarding marriage issue
You scared me with the letter part. It actually meant that she was forced to married the person chosen by her mom and thats why she disappeared ...but it was surprise with the 2nd page of letter whcih cleared all matter bet them...geet became more confortable with maan. I liked that how he took her to his hide out secret place
Its another surprise that aush loves anaya ...he is really a true friend. Loved their bonding & understanding bet each other and cleared their MU so easily and promised each other to woo their lady love
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Loved the dream sequence...it was so dreamy dream, reminded of this scene from GHSP

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 10 - Awesome part
Poor geet could not meet his eye after that dream and remidning it everytime she sees maan
Loved how G helped geet to realise her feelings for maan and indrectly hinted her that he also loves her
Loved ayush trying his ways to woo anaya put always failed...ayush & maan are becoming each others love guru, trying ways to make ralise their feelings to their lady love
Have maan collided with geet...hope so
Cont soon

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

i just love it...👏

Originally posted by: Neeju

lovely update

Originally posted by: saf24

Caught up with this recently. Read all the pasts in one go. A really nice story so far with each update better than the last. Beautifully written.

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Mind Blowing Update 😉
"G" knocking some senses in Geet😆
Maan n Ayush bonding is tooo Gud
Loved It Mayyam 😃
Superb 👏

Originally posted by: Susegad

Some people promised to stay away from here and I still see them.

Samajhne wale samajh gaye hain, na samhje woh anari hain😛

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Mommy know best🤣Sometimes listening to mommy is a good thing maan babu😉u never know how u might be 'blessed' but then i see that teh 'blessing' has already landed in his arms

And IF u change it then😡

I feel like giving the devilish laugh here! 😆 Who knows which blessing has landed in his arms? 😉

And BTW did u cal MSK Sweetreally mari? sweet🤔

thats like saying NPM is 'okay looking'😵

Accha? What would you have preferred? Waise NPM, I say, is okay looking. 😆

Loved Ayush n his shenanigans😆I am gonna enjoy AA story😉

Oh... Kay! That means I'll have to spend a considerable amount of time on AA as well. 🤔

Geetu baby, once u see something like THAT even in ur dreams, i doubt u wud ever forgt it in this lifetime☺️So give up trying🥱

Of course she won't forget but trying never hurts. She succeeds or not, wo baat alag hai. 😉

Geeta...well! she did her job! planted teh seeds of hope in geets mind waiting for teh plant to grow n geet to acknowledge it!

Seeds of 'hope'?? I'll call them seeds of 'doubt'. In a good way, of course. 😃

Great update Mari😃

Thanks Aash! 😃

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

@Mari...I forgot to mention about the BLueee shirt😒

Missing someone🥺