If Only You Saw Me (5) - Page 65

Edited my nonstop blabbering on pg 64... 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Edited my nonstop blabbering on pg 64... 😆

It's too long& too much to read, so read when you have some time at hand... even I would never go back myself& read as I would feel who writes so much... 😆

Don't worry. You're not alone in this. I hardly read my own comments or the chapters once to proofread. Iss se zyaada padha hi nahin jata! 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Don't worry. You're not alone in this. I hardly read my own comments or the chapters once to proofread. Iss se zyaada padha hi nahin jata! 😆

Very true... Mere muh ki baat cheen li aapne ... 😆 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

There's a situation you often fall into. You hate it and other people sort of enjoy it. I've been through it and now it's your turn. 😆

Phir se daant dhikha rahi ho aap... Badi hassi aa rahi hain. Phir se laal chehre ka darshan karaoo kya...??

Originally posted by: Onir

Phir se daant dhikha rahi ho aap... Badi hassi aa rahi hain. Phir se laal chehre ka darshan karaoo kya...??

Main bachpan se hi bohat hasmukh hoon. Har baat pe hasti hoon. 😉

Busy woking, but thought to pop in for a minute, after reading Shikha's comment.

Originally posted by: Susegad

Busy woking, but thought to pop in for a minute, after reading Shikha's comment.

Mayyo post it. Polish it, varnish it, do whatever the hell, you've got to do but post it. I remember getting so mad when I read it and yet feeling so sad at the truth of it.

Ab tak agar post kar deti hum ne uspe comment bhi kar diya hota.

Post it. If you don't I will.😈

Okay, okay just kidding. I swear, I wont😆

Hey bhagwan iss Mayyo ki gaadi ko har baar dhakka dena padta hain.🤔

Hoping to see it on the writer's corner soon.😃

All I can say is, I'll try to do it. Agar I feel that it's good enough after a bit of the changes (which I haven't thought about), I'll post it. Frankly, I'll want it to remain in my laptop and not come out. But I'll still try. 😊

Awesome Update...loved it
Geet trying to avoid Maan
Loved Ayush effort ..hehhe poor guy
Last scene were beautiful
eagerly waiting for next update
continue real soon

Part 9 - You very well described by restless of maan of not finding any clue about geet Liked how he took away her insecuriteis from her regarding marriage issue You scared me with the letter part. It actually meant that she was forced to married the person chosen by her mom and thats why she disappeared ...but it was surprise with the 2nd page of letter whcih cleared all matter bet them...geet became more confortable with maan. I liked that how he took her to his hide out secret place Its another surprise that aush loves anaya ...he is really a true friend. Loved their bonding & understanding bet each other and cleared their MU so easily and promised each other to woo their lady love Loved the dream sequence...it was so dreamy dream, reminded of this scene from GHSP

Part 10 - Awesome part