MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: punam2712

plss do let me know ..if u want it to be an OS ..like i can end it in 2 parts or SS ..plss plss plsss ...but yes it wont be a very happy happy dastaan ..me warning u already n those u can't handle mystery plss stay away as maan's character is like that till the end ...NOW DECIDE WHAT U WANT ...😃

SOBIA LOVED THE START

MAAN IS A RUDE ARROGANT MAN

BUT AN ANGEL WILL CHANGE HIM

MAKE IT AN SS AND A MYSTERY BUT LET IT BE A HAPPY ENDING

IF IT IS SAD THEN I WILL NOT LIKE TO READ IT

Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-

Congrats for the new story

I would like to read as SS

Beautifully written

Grrr Leena - want to kill her as she had played with Geet Career due to jealousy

Maan is now in guilt of not listening to Geet

As per the 1st poem -

Maan will be the saviour of Geet but will not come in front of her and will helped her out in all the difficult times and situation

Originally posted by: mishtib

let it be an ss least 10 parts or 15 parts

continue

Originally posted by: maneetislove

Fabulous, really like this! 😊

Update soon :)

Originally posted by: lovesia

nice update

is geet is suffering from some diseases ????????

nd past

maan without any thought insulted geet with a big humiliation

nd leena

i hate her

if she was not perfect she tried to insult geet

nd in such a bad manner

poor geet where she is gone

nd poem was awesome

love each line

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

simply a wonderful story..poor geet..pls make is as SS..hope nothing wrong with geet.😕..pls cont soon..

Originally posted by: spvd

congrats dear...

part 1
nice start...
oh ho its gonna be a painful story...
poor Geet...
and Maan that was so rude of him...
he should pay for it and think thats what hes doing now...
1st Anni?
what wrong with Geet or is it Maan?
cont soon dear...

PS - well if its a happy waala one then make it as an SS or FF but if its a sad one OS would be fine...i cant take sad ones that easily...u know that too...

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

That was an amazing update..
geet has a disease.. kya hua geet ko?
ye maan bhi na.. uske wajah se meri geet ki career barbaad ho gayi na..
but i loved her confidence!!

Originally posted by: snehadingoe

sobia... frstly congo... u are back vd a bang.. i surely need an ss... if possible ff... loved each n every bit of ths part... yaar the poems were vry b'fully written... frst part se hi irthni curiosity create kardi... kounsa disease..?? geet kaha gayi... ? ab maan kya karega..? kaise milenge... nd hw vl ds mst romantic couple fall in luv... plz yaar iss baar jaldi j😛aldi update karde... nd min 15 parts likh... plz ...

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Mind blowinggg start Sobi...
Very well written update...
The poem is really mesmerisinggg...
Aghhh..i am feeling like banging Maan's head somewhere...
Duffer..hamesha apni feelings chupaane ke chakkar me mwri Geet ko hurt karta hai..
& Leena Thaapar..kamini..uske toh mai tukde tukde kar ke kutto ko khila doon..
But loved the way Geet replied tht bloody b****..
Maan has realized his mistake..
Lekin Geet ne Maan ko aasani se maaf nahi karna chahiye..

& Sobi it's my humble request plzzz make it a ff..
I want to experience all the thick & thin moments of Maaneet's journey..plzzz..