MG SS : Dastaan -E- Wafa *|| Part 18 @ Page 74 ||* 21-June-15 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congrats for the new story dear
its awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Congrats for new story ...
Wow it amazing start ...
waiting for next part ...
continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
edited my post in pg 1... do seee...
luv ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Congo for new story
awesome start...loved it
waiting for next..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
pls update...waitin 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

hi all
thnks for this warm welcome ..😃
really glad u all liked this ...😳😳


so with all ur response n some THREATS by some darling readers n awesom friends ..
i am making this as an SS ...really don't know who the pace of the story will be as many of u have seen me going at a really slow pace in Dark Angel ...will try n avoid it ...😃

but i saw some of u saying if its has a sad ending ...

well to all those ...it does not have a sad ending
i personally can't handle sad endings ...specially after reading a story till so many part its a big NO
tou i can't even right one with sad ending ..

hope u all will be happy ...😊
but again wanna say this ...to all those who can't handle mysteries plss stay away as maan's character may trouble u all till few starting parts ..but after that i assure u u'll love him ...😉😉

leaving u all with a teaser ..😳😳
enjoy n extract what u can ...😆

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TEASER


Kahan jaati kis ko batati ..
Toote khwaboon ka shlooq kis ke dar par manati
Na koi apna tha na koi ghar iss jahan mien
Ab tou bas chal pari thi ..anjaan rahoon par
Na koi saathi tha na humrahi
Bas apne hi hosloon ki dor pakre aagayi thi nagri uski ...😳😳



Maan (placing the change in his palm n sketched it in front of her) : tumhari chain ..

Geet (gave him a confused look ..then replied coldly) : sorry par yeh meri nahi hai ..(n moved ahead)

Maan (sighing he moved with her) : u don't have to give me that money back …its nothing to a person like me ..just take this with u ..

Geet (stopped n glanced at him with disgust) : ya right to a rich ruthless …arrogant self centered person like u ..its nothing ..but tell me one thing Mr. Khurana y do u think I will take any kind of a favor with a person who is soul responsible for all this chaos in my life …uhh ..get off my way Mr. or u will again assume things ..😡😡

Maan (again coming in front of her) : listen miss ..i am just …yeh chain tumhari fav. Hai …y r u trying to be so arrogant ..just take it n ill go away …(n went away)

Geet (amused ..stopped n looked at him) : aapko kaise pata …??

Maan (looking away frm her) : jis tarha tum uss chain ko uss lady ke haath mien dekh rahi thi ..buhat obvious tha ..

Geet (back to her strong self) : thnkss but mujhe ajnabiyon se cheezien lene ki adat nahi hai …got that now move ..😉



hmm ..tou u think MSK ainvayi jaane dega ya fir he will try something else ..?? 😛😛

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tou ..how much u think u will like to see this theekhi mirchi ..😉

will try n update soon

PLSS DO LEAVE UR REVIEWS N LIKES

luv ya all

SOBIA

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good going geet..
msk deserves this for being an oversmart idiot🤔
ohh..so its an ss..love uuu sobiii🤗
waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OOSUMMM,Fab Teaser SOBI...waiting so eagerly fr da nxt...jaldi update dena...

LOVE U LotSo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
aise teasers dogi toh humara kya hogi...
jaani...
waiting for this geet...
poor maan...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww sobia awesome teaser
i think maan rokega 😉
ase thore jaane dega apni lady love ko 😃

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