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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj



james bond naaahhh. CID... itna famous ho gaya hai log isse apni novels me daalne lag gaye hai...

@amks- mujhse to pronounce hi nahi ho raha hai aapka naam...is it like amx or amkas...
r u a GHSP fan???




Well i wanted to use short form of my name i.e. aks but as 4 alphabets were required so taken second alphabet from my name i.e. m .
So this is how amks is formed.

And yes i am ghsp fan .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome one...
Geet is not vicky's sister but meera...
Waiting for maaneet's meet again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 7

"hi , i am yash malhotra"- yash said jumping in the middle.

" not intrested " - saying this she moved her hand back.

It came as shock to me . 'how can she talk to my friend like that , this much rudeness'- i thought in my mind and turned my gaze to see yash expression. But was more shocked to see him smiling . 'no its not simple smile but misheveous'.maintaing a straight face. I Watched the expression on both faces and that forced me to think that something is missing.

"okay bye , we should leave now as our shopping is already over"- Suddenly Meera asked for leave from us , no-no not from us but from me.

But vicky interrupted-"di , this is cheating . You have promised me to buy new t-shirt.

"We will surely buy that but from other mall. Here clothes collection are not good."- she said which clearly indicated that she wanted to go away from yash.

Before vicky could say anything yash stated -" but its popular for its best clothes all over delhi."

Upon watching pleading face of vicky she got ready and said to vicky-" okay come fast and select one t-shirt"

Before going vicky grabbed my hand and said -" lets go , you will select my t-shirt this time . Because your choice is best in t-shirt."

I raised an eyebrow questioning him to which he replied with smile -" both of your t-shirt are too good and i like them pretty much . But that one which you wore in bus was best."

He was continouslly dragging me with him while telling about reason. Yash tagged along with me and was also coming.

Reaching to kids section i got busy in selecting dress when power went off. Starting of generator takes 2 minutes time . Till then we have to wait as light were on but in very less number which do not give sufficient light in this big mall which make diffcult for us to choose any t-shirt.

I turned left and right to see yash but he was not there . I looked everywhere but he was not present . Suddenly i saw two shadow emerging from darker side of the floor. They were yash and meera. Yash was grinning widely where as blush was seen by me on meera face with shy smile as they came near one of light.

Power was back and once again lighted whole floor but in these two minutes something has changed which anybody can tell by watching their faces. Then only i noted lipstick on yash lips and meera lipstick was smudged . I was stunned by the conclusion -'they were kissing each other'.

Going near yash i whispered in his ear-" lipstick mark is on your lips. Go and wash it and yes, tell meera to use lipstick once again. "

He stared at me with shock written all over face and ran away embarassed. He signaled meera before going to washroom.

Selecting a nice t- shirt we waited for few minutes and after arrival of yash and meera. we moved out billing our things.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it sure is an interesting n vey intriguing story...keep it up
well dat "lipstick mess" was quite embarrassing😆 bt must say yash knows how to make ideal use of two minutes power failure 😆
nice upate
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lipstick mark is on your lips. Go and wash it and yes, tell meera to use lipstick once again
😆
that was embarassing..
nice update...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-6 & 7

Its getting more and more interesting buddy.Meera being vicky's sis,and not Geet.And then Meera and Yash knew each beforhand and even kissed.But kiss was funny,being caught red handed by Maan.

Waiting for Maaneet to meet again.

I love the first person narration of Maan for telling the story.It gives a different tangent to story telling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 minute mein agar Maggie noodles pak sakte hain, toh 2 minutes mein kisses bhi jhalak sakte hain. 😉😆
Yeh accha twisty twist tha bandhu. I liked this one😆
I am totally loving this one amks. I will definitely mention this story on my thread next time. I am definitely spreading the word.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 8

After taking leave from vicky and meera we moved in the parking lot. Yash sat on backseat while i occupied frontseat of the bike and started the bike .

As we moved out of parking area. I asked to a silent and nervous yash -" will you now tell me whole truth or waiting for any invitation."

He shutterd little and said in shaking voice-" wwhat truuth ?"

Taking a shortcut through road of vaishali compound. I replied in cold voice-"As if you don't know?".

Composing himself he replied still trying to act ignorant- " I don't know about what you are talking. "

'There is no point in talking like this,he is not gonna explain by himself'- Thinking this and coming to the point i tried to ask-" why had you not told me about" but was cut in mid sentence.

"oh god"- suddenly yash exclaimed making me almost deaf with his loud voice which made me to apply brake simultaneously.

"I totally forgot .I have some urgent work in nearby office, I should leave"-yash said quickly and got off from bike and started walking away .

I knew yash is just making excuse to run away from me. So i was turning bike to offer him ride to office.

But I stopped midway. My gaze got fixed on the same girl who bumped in me at bus stand , trapped me and stole dvd.

She was standing near gate of an appartment building, talking to gaurd. A man in mid thirty was also standing close to her . Too close than normal.

Signing on register both moved inside compound and following them i tried to enter compound. But the guard stopped me.

Guard asked-"where are you going and to whom do you want to meet.

Another gaurd called him for some help from backside.

I was watching both of them walking toward lift and replied without thinking -"she is my old friend ".

Guard look suspiciously at me but again disturbed by call from other gaurd. He fumed and muttered to himself-" this person can't do a single work alone". He signalled me to wait but forgot to lock the gate.

Picking up this opprtunity i swiftly and secretly moved inside. Lift has just crossed fourth floor and moving upward. I ran through stair taking two-three step at one time. I listened to opening of lift when lift reached fifth floor. I hurried my steps.

Reaching fifth floor i saw them inside appartment 5C . Door was slightly open and through that i saw beard of that man was hanging from this side which means beard was duplicate. I was shocked by this revealation but the man looked sligtly known.

Thinking hard i tried to remember and then I remembered he is the criminal whose poster was stick on the wall of that signal where i stopped while coming to mall. I kept standing there stunned .

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Next update in few hours.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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stranger girl with criminal😲

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