FF-A known stranger - chapter 25 updated

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Yay another update. 😃

Uh what is wrong with this Mayavi girl. Jabardasti bechare Yash ke gale ka phanda ban rahi hain🤢

I always imagine Abhinav Shukla as Dev and when you said about Dev building up his muscles I was trying to imagine him prior to his beefed up body and cracked up😆

I like the friendship that Maan and Dev share, but I am intrigued whether the nameless addressless girl is going to turn out to be Geet and is the realtionship between these teo going to get effected.

Not sure how you are going to unravel this. That is what I love about this story

Expect the unexpected😉

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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Sphinx

@Sphinx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

What a day ...phew

i too need to sleep...☺️

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Mansi Tripathi

@mansi.tripathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

nice parts

maya after yash

yash is frustrated

dev 's proposal got approval

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Feeling pity on Yash,poor fellow cudnt even meet his dad coz of Bimbo Maya.

And Dev too cute,giving treat to Maan coz finally sm girl agreed to be his GF.But who is d girl,I wish its not Geet.

Gr8 going buddy.

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AKSashadow

@AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

chapter 15

Turning from one side to other. I placed my pillow on my ears. I think dev is never goona change, he always put the alarm in early morning but never wake up. It was now routine that i have to turn off alarm whereas he don't even move an inch from his place.

Leaving the bed i moved in bathroom to freshen up. Coming back to room. I saw him still sleeping. Going near his bed i picked his bottle which was filled with water and emptied it on his face.

Startled dev wake up at ones . Then upon understanding situation he wipes his face with towel and sleep on my bed.

Shaking my head i approched him and pulled his leg. He fell down on floor.

"ouch bro, you are a true demon. Why are u hell bent on waking me this early"-dev complaind to me.

"you yourself had put alarm for this time and beside that you have promised me to join for jog,remember"-saying this i motioned him to be quick.

After getting ready we moved out. Jogging side by side we reached in park. Dev upon reaching there sat on bench and relaxed himself. I thought of taking one round of park.

I have jogged only half way of park when a voice made me stop.

"hi maan"- turning to source of sound. I saw pari who was busy in early morning exercise.

I walked toward her and asked-"how are you?"

Pari said answering me-"i am absolutely fit and fine. What about you?Long time since seen you last."

I replied to her query -" I am good too. Just gone home for few days."

"let's go and relax in our place"-pari said while walking toward one side of park.

"Not today, as one of my friend have come in this park with me. He must be waiting"- I replied with little guilt as relaxing and chatting there was our usual routine.

"then let me meet your friend . Who has snatched my best buddy time."-she said with smile.

We started to walk toward dev. She was informing me about all the happenings which i missed due to my absence.

Reaching near dev i tapped his shoulder to gain his attention. There was no response from him. I tapped again , this time his body slide sideways and fall on arm rest of bench.

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Completed half century of post.
Now my newbie tag will be snatched from me.
And now groupbie tag will be given to a guy like me who is not part of any group till now. So so sad.

😭

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

First of all

CONGRATUALTIONS ON TURNING GROUPBIE🥳

And why are you not part of any group. You are a part of the best group. The GF group, and once you are a groupbie you are an official part of GF. You are no longer a new shining penny. You are an old timer like us.😃

I was very excited when I turned Groubie. Fianlly no more 10 posts a day limit, until i learnt groupbies had a 20 posts limit.😆

But still I was a very excited

So, dont worry be happy😉

and once again,

Congratulations

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Now for the update,

As I was reading the first part of the update, I totally cracked up. Reminded me of Geet pouring water on Maan's side of the bed in the outhouse scene.😆
Hmm, I should definitely try this on my husband. He sets the alarm clock exactly one hour before he has to wake up. It rings for about 6 times, in that hour at a 10 minute interval each. It is irritating as hell. All this, because he hates waking up as soon as the first bell goes off 🤔

Yeh Pari kaun hain and what the hell happened to Dev😲

DIlchasp ekdum dilchasp. You definitely know how to keep your readers hooked.

Fantastic update buddy.👍🏼

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

welcome back 😃

Congratulationsss fr becoming a Groupbie 🥳

nice chapters ...magica maya

"Then upon understanding situation he wipes his face with towel and sleep on my bed. "😆😆

n now wat happened to dev 😲...is he jst sleeping or something really happn????

who's pari????

wrong point to stop ...plz do continue soon😊

n plzzz plzz dnt b sad all ur readers r part of ur group... aren't we😃

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

CONGRATULATIONS buddy on becoming A Groupbie.
And why did U say that U dont belong to any group, hum hai na!!!!!

Today's part's end hit me...
Wat happened to Dev,why did he slide sideways without responding?????

This suspence is killing me yaar.

Pls kuch toh reveal karo.

BTW i m enjoying the story fully.

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AKSashadow

@AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Thanks to all.

@susegad - newbie has post limit of 10 and groupbie 20. Well, i was unaware of these facts. But thanks for informing.

@diva7 and sweetsampa39- yes , ofcourse you all are part of my group.

I just said that for dramatic ending of my 50th post😉 but felt good seeing your concern.

Edited by amks - 12 years ago