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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 9

I was thinking about what to do next . At that time i saw him closing the door with his left hand ,without even turning toward door . His whole concentration was on the girl i think.

I don't know what came in to me at that time . I jumped forward and opened almost closed door with a great force . This cause three loud voices - first was of banging of door by me and simultaneously two loud cry reached my ear one was of that criminal due to pain and second was of that girl due to fear.

In front of me that wanted criminal was lying with pain in his left hand shoulder . Something black had flied near sofa as soon as he fall down due to my sudden arrival with a bang.

He soon recovered with shock of my arrival and jumped in air to give me a flying kick. But guessing his move earlier i blocked by my right hand and turning round attacked on his rib with a palm down knife strike which throw him to opposite wall.

Standing with diffculty he pulled out gun from his left side of jacket and pointed on me .

At that time a glass jug with small amount of water came flying over him that was thrown by that girl when she saw a gun pointed on me . He was startled by this sudden attack and was fully shoaked in water. This distraction gave me chance and in quick strides I reached there and grabbing gun from him. I smashed him with palm directly on his forehead while his head hit the wall behind. He groaned in pain and losed consiousness.

I waited for sometime ready for any attack and then checked him twice before confirming myself ,' he is really unconsious and not faking uncounsiousness like that girl.'

'That girl, where is she ? I was here to confront her. Right?' thinking this i glanced around but there was no sign of her. Some foot steps sound made me face toward door in anticipation of her, but gaurd of the building came into scene with police.

The gaurd glared at me and said to police-" he is friend of Ms geet with whom this criminal came."


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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
maan ko hi fasa diya...
is guard ki to😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
P-8 and 9
Ek toh yeh Yash fishy behave kar raha hai and Now this police.

But Geet saved Maan by throwing d jug.She may be sm agent working witg the criminal to dig out the truth or get proofs against him.

Nice twist.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

aiiiyyyooo😲

this man yash is something...atleast one thing is clear dat d mysterious girl is none other dan geet...bt she was wid d criminal or all dis was her plan to trap dat criminal guy??...n she saved maan!!!

so who's she ?????😕

how come police came on time wid guard ...they r not supposed to be on time 😆...untill n unless they r also d part of d plan.

m i d only confused soul, who's suspicious abt everyone n everything...no wonder if i end up doubting evn maan n vicky 😆

nice twisty chapters.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 10

Inspector looked around and ordered something to assisting constables. After which one constable handcuffed the criminal and put him on chair. He stand beside him keeping eye on him where as others began checking whole appartment. Inspector now turned toward me.

He asked looking at me-"Your name?". A constable beside him was noting down this whole enquiry .

In reply I told him-"Maan Singh Khurana".

Inspector then said-"Show me any identity proof".

Taking out my driving license from wallet. I handed forward.

He looked at it for sometime then returning it he asked-"Are you friend of Ms geet?"

"No,I don't know her"-came my instant reply.

Guard jumped in middle of conversation and accused -"Sir ,he is lying. He himself told me that he is her friend."

Inspector glared at gaurd and said in warning tone-"shut up, we are doing our investigation. When i will question you. Then only you have to open your big mouth.

Turning back to me he asked -" You are not her friend . Then what are you doing here?"

"I was returning to hostel from mall when i happened to see both of them . As i had seen poster of this criminal near a traffic signal . I found his face similar and got suspicious of this person . I followed him here to confirm my suspicion and call police . But before that ,i saw him closing door and in rush i accidently fall on door . He saw me then and a fight broke up. After that you people entered here"- I spoke mixing lie and truth in whole story.

Gaurd said hearing this-"I am telling you sir . He is lying."

Inspector hearing this said in annoyed tone-" If you again spoke a single word without being asked i will put you in lock up.

There was a sudden knock on door and sub-inspector walked in.

"Sir, whole statement of Ms geet is written in this."- saying this he Forwarded her whole statement.

"did you asked about him to her"-inspector asked sub-inspector pointing at me.

"Yes sir, i have asked . But she don't know him"- sub-inspector informed him.

"Where is Ms geet now"-inspector asked further.

"She went home now. I have noted down her address and phone number , in case we need her in further investigation"- sub-inspector replied.

"how can you leave her to go home? What if she run away? She was the one with whom he came."-not able to control himself guard voiced out his worry pointing finger on criminal.

Now inspector completely lost his temper and blasted-" we know our job very well , so you better not tell us and Stop poking your nose in other's work. If you have not shown negligence in your job and performed your duty well then the criminal would have been caught on gate itself. And now you are accusing Mr. Maan and Ms. Geet who helped us to catch this criminal. I don't know who made you senior gaurd, you are not suitable for even gaurd job."

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Wow totally confusing update tha yaar.
Ye Geet toh aur mysterious hoti jaa rahi hai.May be she herself called the police.
Pls jaldi se koi disclosure do.


Your story is very gripping.Gr8 going buddy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Kahani toh har mod pe aur bhi dilchasp aur rahasyamay hote jaa rahi hain.
I loved how you established a link between the poster and the criminal. I had thought.
Mystery girl turned out to be Geet after all.
Maan banne chala hero, aur khud phaas gaya.
Keep giving these short quick updates please. It's keeping us hooke to the story.
Loved the last 3 updates.
Hats off to you.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohkkk...aftr interrupting twice ...fr third time... i was anticipating wid so much enthusiasm dat when our guard bhaiyaa is goin to butt in again😆 ..n boy!!! he didn't disappoint me n i burst out laughing when he gav his final valuable gyan to officer ...😆
guard bhaiyyya😎 is d hero of d update at least fr me🤪
oho now again madam geet is gone.
update was ..."Raaz... the mystery continues"😆
gud goin...nice chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
getting interesting...
guard was so irritating. gud that the inspector put him off..
nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
chapter 11

Blasting session of inspector would have continued if constable voice had not disturbed-"Sir we found another gun, its a pocket pistol."

'I had snatched the revolver from the criminal and given in police custody, now another gun . So whose gun is this?'-These thought crossed my mind.

Inspector examined the gun and said-" These seecamp LWS 380 gun is not easy to get for someone like him and that too in jail. How did he get this?

Inspector told me to give my address and phone number to the constable and he relaxed on a chair nearby and started reading geet's statement. Finishing the statement he filled water in a glass and drank it.

At that time , famous crime reporter 'brijesh choudhary' walked in with SP 'Arjun Rathod'.

Inspector and the others saluted SP Arjun. They walked to couch and settled themself comfortably. Then motioned us to sit.

Taking lead of discussion.Arjun asked about me to inspector-" Who is he?"

"He is Maan Singh Khurana. He is the person who came behind Raghav and helped to get him arrested"-Inspector replied to arjun and he nodded in acknowlegement.

'So the criminal name is Raghav'- I thought in my mind.

Then brijesh choudhary asked further-" So , what actually happened here. Have you any idea of whole incidents."

Inspector replied -"Investgation is almost complete sir. Motive is also crystal clear. "

Arjun said listening this-" So tell us about whole case in detail."

Inspector sighed slowly then started his narration-" Two days back in evening raghav sneakly esaped from jail . When the information spread in jail then jailor called in our police station as we were nearest and informed us about his escape . We searched throughly in whole area but were not able to find him . So we stuck posters today morning all over city.
In span of few hour Ms geet came in our police station.

Both Arjun and Brijesh looked at him questioning.

Inspector replied looking toward brijesh-" Yes ,your cousin geet. She came to know about raghav escape. So ,she wanted security for you as before going to jail he had threatened you to kill,for becoming eye-witness of murder he had done."

After a short pause he continued-"As you were supposed to come in evening. So I thought to visit here in evening. After leaving from there Ms geet finishing her own work came here to meet you and talk to you about raghav.
She came here and asked for the extra key which you always leave with gaurd for maid. Gaurd then called you and asked for giving your appartment keys to Ms geet. When gaurd was talking to you, raghav came behind her and pointing a pocket pistol from below hanky . He said her to remain quiet"

Inspector showed the seecamp LWS 380 and informed-"this is the gun which was pointed on her."

'The gun was indeed very small in size and easy to hide."- I thought seeing gun.

Keeping that gun back inspector continued-"Ms geet stayed quiet because of two reasons first was gun and second she also had knowledge of our arrival in any minute and that too before your arrival.
After call gaurd give the keys to Ms geet. He noticed raghav standing beside her . Raghav introduced himself as her uncle . Gaurd noticed hanky but thought of some wound in raghav's hand and let them go."


Edited by amks - 12 years ago

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