FF-A known stranger - chapter 25 updated

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prologue


"Its pretty dark "-comes voice of a boy from my adjacent seat and he clutched my hand.

My eyes were closed and i was in deep thought. Turn of events few hours before was still haunting me. But that voice bring me back to present.


I tried to look around but darkness have engulfed everything.

Few mobile lights are lighted and in that light conductor checked for fault.

When the light was again switched on . I looked beside myself , the boy was quite frightened and shivering. He must be of age 9 or 10.


I bring him in embrace ,after 2 minutes he calmed down.

Seprating from him i asked -"Are you okay" .
He muttered "fine" and "thanku".

I tried to start conversation -"hi , my name is maan and yours???."
The boy stared for few seconds at me and replied "vicky".
"Where are your parent"-was my next question. He simply replied "dead".

Few minute of silence existed after which vicky asked-"going to delhi?"
I nodded in yes and asked -"who is with you".
The boy looked at me in confusion.
"I mean to say who is going with you to delhi"-I explained thinking his guardian must be seated somewhere else.

But next word shocked me . He said he does not have anybody beside his cousin sister ,who is in delhi.

The bus has stopped at one of line hotel . He quickly got down and i followed him.



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Chapter 1


Atmosphere was quite chilled , picking up my jacket and putting it on myself. I moved toward the hotel, when some movment in darker side caught my attention. I moved to that side to see what is it.

The place was empty . After checking around for few second i started coming back . At that time a vechile passed and in that light something shined. On closer look it was a dvd disc.

At that point of time , i felt someone gaze on me . Once again i tried to look for any person. But all i got was defeat.

I bought that disc in light which have hardly one or two small scratches. The disc internal area is slightly grey and disc was little bit warm.

Upon watching and obseving this i came to conclusion that the disc is new and something is written on it recently.

Horn of bus broke my train of thought . Picking up snacks and water bottle , moved in bus and taken my seat.

I tried to sleep little-bit but that of no use . At my adjacent seat vicky has slept as soon as he hit the sit. My thoughts began to wander about recent event. Many questions come into mind with a thought 'was there really anyone ?'.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds intriguing...continue...would like to read more
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chapter 2


Last night sleep has not blessed me. All the time, events of past came upon me . I was watching the break of dawn . When vicky stirred in sleep.

Vicky opened his eye little bit and wished me "good morning" . I wished him back.

"How much time left to reach delhi"- vicky asked rubbing his eyes and stretching body.

Watching scenery of outside , i said -" it will take half hour to reach bus stand".

He nodded in acknowledgment that he heared.

Outside people were just running to reach their work places. Few were trying their luck to sell their goods to these passers.

"hello"- vicky's voice made me turn. He signaled me phone by his index finger. He was talking on a cell phone.

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"not again di, you have promised me to be on time."vicky said in complaining tone.

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"ya ya i very well know you. Your 15 minutes means 1hr for normal people like me."vicky said dramatically.

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"ok fine , come soon bye"- with these words. He cut the call and muttered -"di is never gonna change , always late".

After which he relaxed in seat. Remembring i have yet to tell my room mate in hostel. I messaged him. He will be sleeping right now but knowing his mood swing to go out at any time , i can not risk to wait at door.

In few minutes , bus entered stand. Picking up my bag , moved toward door with other passengers.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai buddy,
Reading the prologue,p-1 & 2,I really found it interesting.
The lil boy is mysterious and the d CD.Hmmm... I think the story 's gonna be grt,cont.soon.
And if possible,pls PM me when U update.
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chapter 3

My hostel from here was walking distance ,so i started to move toward exit. Glancing around i was moving forward when vicky come into my sight . He was standing there and waiting for his di . He was indeed right it seems his di had not come till now .He waved me bye .


Waving back i was about to move forward. When something or rather someone collided with great velocity. I fumbled two steps back but just controlled in time from falling.

A beautiful girl in late teenage came into view . She seems to be in hurry. Saying sorry she disappeared in crowd.

Shaking my head to clear her image i moved toward exit. After good fifteen minute walk i reached near my hostel but was surprised to see the same girl there who happened to bump in me.

She was moving in opposite direction when suddenly she hold her head . Moving forward with quick steps ,i hold her waist and prevented from falling but she had losed consiousness.

Patting her cheek i tried to wake her up but no response. Putting my bag down i brought bottle from it and sprinkled water . She opened her eye and demanded water to drink.

But water in bottle was almost over so i told her -"wait here i will be back in 2 minutes." I hurried to the hostel guard and said to fill it with drinking water.

Waiting for few minutes seemed hours to me. When i returned with water, she was gone and only my bag was laying there.

I checked around but there was no clue of her anywhere . Disappointed by myself for coming late. I entered hostel and then into room and sat on the bed.

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Wow so they met,but in such an awkward situation where Geet fainted and until Maan comes back she was gone.You are increasing curiosity buddy.
Gr8 going.

Thanx for d PM.
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chapter 4

Dev ,my room partner was in bathroom. He was taking shower. Tired with the journey, i closed my eye for small nap.

But Sudden knock on door made me groan. I choosed to ignore that. But the person was hell bent to irritate me. Leaving my comfort of bed , i opened the door.

"hey buddy , how are you and who was she."-yash said with a stupid grin.

Presence of yash was enough to annoy me but as that was not enough he disturbed my sleep and god knows about whom he is talking.

Walking back to my cupboard to arrange cloths from my bag i asked- "about whom are you talking ?"

"don't try to act smart . I have seen you with that hot-shot girl in yellow dress."-yash said with same stupid grin .

Now it clicked in my mind he is talking about the girl whom i met just few minutes back. Opening my bag i answered his question-"I don't know her . She was feeling giddy so i only helped her.

"oh ! Is that so. But why i feel something fishy-fis"- his words were not able to complete as i cut him in middle and exclaimed - "oh my god!!!".

My whole clothes were in total mess in the bag . yash came by my side and looked into bag . His next set of words shocked me to the core- " that girl was checking your bag. But why? Check fast maan , is something missing."

After checking twice i told yash that nothing is missing just things are disarranged .

A call came on yash mobile so he excused himself and go out to attend call.

Suddenly a thought came into my mind. I quickly opened my book where dvd was kept. But dvd was missing. I checked whole bag if by chance it would have fallen in bag but that dvd was gone.

So now i know , meeting her was not co-incidental. She was after that dvd and so she bumped into me to gain attention after which she act infront of me of giddyness and losing consiousness. And asked water to send me away and run away with that dvd.

"But why? What was there in that dvd ? How did she know that it was with me ? Who was she? Where she is gone" - several questions without any answer came rushing in my mind.

After call yash came back and said -" I am going out to meet my friend."

Yash was going out when i asked -" why did you said-that girl was checking my bag? what have you seen?"

"Nothing much , just when i come back from bathroom and looked out from window. you were holding girl's waist and standing close to her. After that you came near hostel and she picked up your bag. My mobile rang at that time so i moved away from window to pick mobile which was on table."

Yash moved out after that and i sat on bed thinking about whole issue and determined to find that girl.

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chapter 5

Dev comes out of bathroom singing a song in its most worst tune ever possible . He was in very happy and good mood . To protect my ears from his tortcher.

I asked him-" you seem quite happy. What happened?"

Dev replied flying in his own dream world -" bro, i am in love. It is love at first sight.

"So one more added to your list. Now total number of girls with whom you have fallen in love at first sight is 5 "- adding more to it i asked with smile -" have you checked her bacground info or not , just to avoid last time situation."

I said remembering a incident two week back. Dev was fond of parties . So , generally found in every party nearby . In some party he was invited while in most he gate-crash party. In one of those party . He gate crashed with other friends and was serving himself food, when he liked a girl and approached. But to his badluck , the girl have already had an over-possesive boyfriend who was state boxing champion too.

As usual he started flirting with her.
The girl moved away while her boy friend gave a strong punch on dev nose. Party organiser came to stop fight and that's When he happened to know , dev was uninvited . He throw him out with his friend quickly.

Dev words brought me back he was making faces and said-" the girl i met previous night don't have any boyfriend so no danger.and bro the last girl was just crush But it is love ."

I said quickly and innocently-" why do i feel , i have heared this crush and love line . 2 time before also.

"You don't want to believe then don't"he said grumping."From next time i will not tell you.

I shook my head at his childisness and moved for shower. shower have somewhat relaxed me .

I have to buy some things from market so dressed up quickly and taking dev's bike keys from drawer moved out.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey there, I just happened to see this story, read the prologue and was hooked instantly. The mystey element surrounding the story is awesome. It just keeps you coming back for more.
The updates read almost like a movie script. I could almost feel some mysterious music playing in the background as Maan found that CD.😆
So Vicky seems to be Geet's brother.
So was that Geet who crashed into Maan and stole the CD. Now that's intruiging and the mystery thicknens. Who, what, why are the questions my mind is raising along with Maan's.😃
Since Dev the flirt, called Maan bro, I'm wondering if they are brothers or just room mates.
Waiting eagerly to see if anything's going to happen in the market. My tingling senses feel that something definitely is.
I am totally loving this alag andaz, alag flavored mysterious story.
Waiting eagerly for the next installment.
Do ontinue soon.

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