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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
chapter 16

'He must be sleeping. Earlier also , he used to sleep during morning classes in college and that too in sitting position ' thinking this i smiled little and coming in front ,shook him. A newspaper which was lying in his lap fell down due to movement and revealed his blood soaked shirt. Blood was flowing continously from his stomach.

I stood there like statue.Time has stood still for me. He is like younger brother to me . This sight had shook me from inside. I was just standing there without any movment.

Pari shook me hard to bring me out of shock and said anxiously-"we have to take him to hospital immediately. Wound is very big and deep. Hurry up. Mine car is in that side."

Picking up dev i rush toward her car. Opening back door she waited .after putting him inside i was going to sit there when pari gave me keys to drive and herself goes in back seat . I sat on driver seat and started the car.

She was searching something below seat and then she bring out first aid box. She said me to drive to sanjeevni hospital and herself started to clean his wound and bandaged him temprorily to prevent more blood loss.

Stopping car in front of sanjeevni , we rushed in. Dev was kept on stretcher and moved inside ICU . I was told to wait outside. As pari was herself a doctor she goes inside with other doctors.

Pacing up and down the corridor i waited patiently. Some police men came to inquire about this case.

I told them what happened in park. Somebody tapped my shoulder. I turned to him. There stand the same inspector whom i had met in last evening incident.

Inspector looked at me and recognising me he said-" you are Maan Singh Khurana , right?"

I only nodded to confirm him.

Getting my affirmation inspector continued-" We were about to call you for investigation in brij choudhary's case further. Its good i met you here only. "

I motioned him to continue.

" Probably you have not got the news of murder till now. Yesterday night brijesh choudhary was killed in his home. "-Inspector gave me this information and stood there observing my expression.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Damn, damn, damn. What the hell?😲
Dev is shot.
Brijesh is dead.
And you stopped there, whhhyy?😭
Is somebody trying to frame Maan?
Hmm, putting on my jassos thinking cap.😆

Agle part ke liye waiting most eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I guessed yaar smthng big is coming.It looks all, I mean Maan,Dev,Yash,Geet are smwhere involved deeply in the mystery.Smbdy tried to kill Dev or God knows if he is already dead(that shudnt happen),and Brij has also been murdered.

Total confusion boss.Anybody in Maan's position wud go bonkers.And there's no sign of Geet.


Amazing suspence buddy.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 😲 😲 ...these shocking smileys aren't enough to express my shocking state😆
ohh poor Dev... wat has he done to deserve dis...y anyone wnt to kill or hurt a harmless, flirty soul lyk Dev😕...Brijesh is dead ...where is Geet????
endless list of questions ...lets see wat u hav in store fr us...eagerly waiting fr nxt part

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 17

My head is ready to brust any moment with all the events going around me. Dev is already in ICU and now death of brijesh choudhary shocked me further.

Overcoming the shock i asked inspector-"how? I mean to say , Raghav is under arrest then who killed brijesh choudhary."

Inspector replied to me-"It is still not clear how and who killed him. May be the person who gave contract of killing Ms geet or any other rival. He had many enemies as he had bring out criminal activities of many politician and buissnessman. So he was a prime target for them too."

He then asked me-"when you reached in that flat yesterday. Have you noticed anything strange or felt anyone presence except Ms geet."

"No , not at all inspector. And how can a person be already present , when Ms geet had herself opened door and just after that i too reached there in few moments."

Inspector replied further-"I am just asking because within half an hour of our departure brijesh choudhary was killed."

Now pondering over last night incident , i tried to remember hard,anything which give them some clue but nothing came in my mind.

Sighing i said to inspector-"well i don't think anyone was already present there and if anyone was then he must have been caught when constable searched around the house."

"your point is good Mr Maan but after constable search too few places were left where search had not been done properly like store room because we were searching for proofs against raghav not any hidden person. We thought with arrest of raghav danger upon brijesh choudhary's life is removed"-inspector replied to me.

Bulb above ICU got switched off and doctors came out from there, so excusing myself i reached there.

Going toward one of the doctor i asked-"how is he doctor?"

Doctor questioned me in response-"who are you?"

"i am roommate and friend of dev. The patient who have been operated just now."-informing him i said this.

"Oh! well he is good now, Two bullets had been found in his body. He had also been smashed in his head right beside left eye too. If little more force would have been applied he would have been dead on the spot."

I asked further-"when he will be discharged doctor?"

"Mr dev have lost much blood , so for now we are keeping him under observation for 24 hours after that he have to rest atleast for a week."

I was going to ask question further when my sight fall on Ms geet who was coming from opposite side. Asking something from doctor she entered ICU where dev was kept.

Doctor excused himself and i too moved toward ICU.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally Geet is here.And Dev is also safe..
The mystery has got so intensified that my brain has stopped working.

Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting story...realy nice concept...👏
continue...update soon egerly waiting for next part...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My head is ready to brust any moment with all the events going around me.
This is exactly jow I'm feeling, as I read this story.
I'm glad that dev is safe, but can't help wondering how he is involved in all of this and whether he is the good guy or the bad.
Finally humari heroine proper entry maar rahi hain. Hopefully ab kuch thoda aur pata chalega.
You've set a good pace with this story buddy. Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

My head is ready to brust any moment with all the events going around me.
This is exactly how I'm feeling, as I read this story.


Ditto...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 18

Reaching near door i opened the gate. Geet was listening to pari as she was telling her something but stopped abruptly when pari gaze fell on me. I got puzzled watching them talking- 'do they know each other or geet knows dev and asking about him '. Abrupt halt in their discussion made me suspicious.

Only silence welcomed me in room as i entered. Geet turned to face the intruder between their talk. She was startled at my sudden appearance there but quickly composed herself.

Pari got a call on her cell. She opened her purse and looked on screen. Call was from her home so excusing herself she moved out.

Geet also started to follow her without looking at me. As she was passing me i catch her wrist . She looked back in shock.

Pari was gone closing the door behind. So, turning my full attention on geet i said-" Why are you in so much hurry? I am not stopping you, just before going answer my few questions."

She stared at me and then at my hold on her wrist. Leaving her hand i kept my both hands back in my jeans pocket.

She asked me-" who are you? And what questions?"

"My name is Maan Singh Khurana and i don't think you have forgot our previous meetings in the flat and near my hostel. And about questions, these are very simple questions for you but it is bugging my mind from our first meeting"

"So ,let's start from our first meeting. Why have you stole that dvd and what was in that?"-I questioned her.

Geet looked here and there at mention of our first meeting. Listening to my question she said-" what dvd ? I don't know anything about any dvd.

I replied to her sarcastically-"ya, you don't know anything about any dvd and You were just searching for sweets in my bag, right?"

Geet again said-"i haven't searched your bag and I don't know ,about what are you talking ?

"oh really? There is no need to lie. My friend have seen you searching my bag. So, now tell me the truth."- I told her.

She just stared at me in shock. I think she had no idea that someone was watching her.


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