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😃 PART 4😃

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Heyooo, i'm back... So sorry for disappearing guyss, but due to manyyy manyyy issues I had to disappear :( I know many of you commented for update but I couldnt respond as I was inactive since last few monthss..
But anywayss I had to come here 😃 since today is 5th of Feb, i.e. One year anniversasry of TL BUT... Mossttt mossttt importantly the birthday of my verrryyy verry very close darling, i.e. my sanu di :D... Yepp you all are right, the same person for while i actually started this story, and yet again for the same person im here with an update..
aage kuch ni bolungi, just that i lubbb yewww meleee motuuu, bohott se bhi bohott.. Sorry for every mistake i did. Love youuu andd miss yewww
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That was their last encounter that night... Geet had to go immediately since her driver arrived while maan too left along his parents.

Several days after the annual function passed, both got busy in their respective lives... But one thing that troubled maan was not getting some opportunity to meet or even see Geet. After annual function, the little time they got to spent together, see each other was missed terribly by both... Maan was almost losing it, thinking about her almost all time, craving to talk to her, see her.

Geet too though not readily accepting but she missed the sweet friend she found in him. His caring, his fun loving nature, his hilarious talks.. She missed them.
Maan getting almost insane with her thoughts, got some relief as the school resumed, after 1 weeks winter vacations.
He knew that at time of girl's arrival, the floor where there class was, looked no less than some football or cricket stadium. Just as in the stadium the audience crowd near the railings to watch the game, here too same way the senior class's boys loitered near the corridors for one reason or another to watch their objects of interests i.e the girls, who would be by then supposedly gathered in bunch in the quadrangle below for their assembly..
Maan along his gang was no exception, they too would loiter there, taadofying(staring) and spotting some random girl's *winks, the naughty souls they were, including maan.. It was just the usual trend for them, though for maan it was just fun, nothing serious. But today it was, like almost most impt task for him. Thus maan came out of his class impatiently making some excuse and came near the railing to spot her.. After several efforts he finally spotted HER.
Wearing the cute school uniform, shirt with a decent skirt, she stood there with her friends, yet again doing no much talks, just standing quietly smiling at her friends while they talked. Like some love stuck puppy that he was, he dreamily kept looking at her untill the departure bell rang. Dissapointed that now he had to leave, he followed his friends downstairs, ocassionally stealing glances at her.. Unknown to Geet, the dissapointed soul left the school building, glancing one last time at her.

It was his helplessness that all he could do was just stare at her in the little time he got, because going to her and talk was no option here, all thanks to the rules in their school.. Moreover it would be so awkward walking in the huge crowd of only and only girls, talking to her... No no, that wont be any good... It would just spoil their image. He didn't care about his, but her being looked upon by wrong eyes was all that mattered to him.

It thus became a routine for him to loiter near the corridors at that time with one reason or another, to just watch or stare at her.. While she stayed total oblivious to this fact... This routine of his was being silently observed by his buddies, yash and armaan... It took no long to guess it all in mins, what maan was upto... And their previous doubts about maan's increasing fondness towards Geet just got cleared.. Thinking something they both made a plan to help his buddy, so discussing it with pari pinky, who were now good friends of them, they arranged a movie plan with them. Knowing they would easily convince Geet to come along, they fixed it and also explained Pinky Pari about maan's liking for their friend Geet, so the girls readily accepted to help their both buddies maan-geet start something beyond friendship...

As usual maan was staring at her, while passing by the corridors.. A cute dreamy smile adored his face as he stared at her lovingly while she did her prayer along all others in the assembly.. Her pink lips moved inaudibly in silent prayers, while forehead wrinkled in pure concentration. As the prayer ended and she opened her eyes, maan came out of his trance and scratched his forehead with that silly smile still adorning his face.
"ahem ahem" a voice alarmed him, and he instantly turned panicked to see armaan and yash smirking... Yash winked at him asking "kya ho raha hai maan? Bada smile shmile kar rahe ho waha dekh ker, zara hum bhi toh dekhe" saying so he too tried peeping where maan was staring only to be interupted by maan "kuch toh nahi yash... Aisa kuch nahi hai.. Main toh bas aisehi" he fumbled.. "Accha toh janaab 'aisehi' girls line ki taraf dekh ker muskura rahe the?" armaan teased stressing on 'aisehi'. "Kya bak raha hai ammy, faltu mat dauda dimag apna, sacchi kuch nahi hai" Maan replied annoyingly moving forward holding his bag on his shoulder, clearly frustated.. "arre arree maan tu chid kyu raha hai yaar... Hum toh aisehi mazak kar rahe the yarr" saying armaan and yash rushed behind him...

"accha yeh sab chod, main baat toh bhul hi gaye hum bolnaa, kal hum xyz movie dekhne ja rahe hain and you are coming with us" yash said leaving him no chance to argue.. "mujhe nahi anaa" said maan in a grumpy mood "Arre aise kaise nahi anaa, plzz chalna yaar... Dekh bohot maza aayega, aur tu aise mana kar dega toh hum Pinky aur Pari ko kya kahenge! Hum toh already unhe bol chuke hai that maan bhi aayega" armaan said. "pari pinky?" maan asked with a frown, when did they started hanging out with them? And moreover it was long since they met last... "Haa pinky pari, wo dono bhi chal rahe hai na humare saath, aur Geeettt bhi" yash said teasingly stretching the *geeettt part a little. Maan swiftly diverted his all attention to yash, surprised hearing HER name "geet?" he asked shocked.. While armaan yash smirked at their hit, "saala khud aise evidently react karta hai uske naam per, aur hume uske bahano ko believe karne ki expect karta hai" armaan whispered in extremely low voice to yash, who chuckled himself. Poor maan pleasantly shocked hearing about geet, frowned looking at them whispering something among themselves, but shrugged it, at the moment SHE was far more important than their silly antics. "Haa Geet! Wo bhi toh aa rahi hai na kal movie ke liye.. Ab pari pinky ko bulaya toh geet ko kaise na bulate, wo bhi toh humari friend hai naa" armaan answered innocently, smirking from inside... "but bhai, maan toh ane hi nahi wala, toh kya matlab... Chod hum bhi kya force kare ab isse... Nahi ana hoga maan ko" yash faked sadness then to maan "maan its ok yaar, tu nahi ana chahta toh koi baat nahi, we wont force you" but maan was instant to react "Nahi, wait" saying he stopped yash and armaan, who started their bikes to leave "mei.. mei chalungaa.. Its ok, I will come, abb tumne unko bola hai toh it'll look rude agar mei na ayu, haina" maan smiles weakly while the duo laughed out loud at maan's attempts "seriousely maan, u are a very bad actor and liar, tujhse jab nahi chupte tere feelings toh jhoot kyu bolta hai tu?" yash said him smiling amusingly while maan was left amazed knowing they caught him, he looked down smiling slyly scratching his head not knowing wat to reply. Looking up he just muttered a small sorry to his buddies, who actually knew him inside out since childhood, and he was thinking of hiding such big thing from them, so foolish of him. Yash armaan smiled at their buddy and gave him friendly puch on his shoulder, forgiving him, to which maan hugged them both...

The remaining time passed extremely slow for maan since the yearning soul was too eager to meet HER... He actually spent most of time dreaming of her, smiling foolishly all the time, imagining meeting her after so long...

There other side, as pinky pari informed her of their movie plan, geet was totally uninterested, not in any mood to accompany them, but at the constant pressures by both, and many many emotional blackmails she had to agree finally defeated... Now sitting in her bed, lost in thoughts her mind went to HIS thoughts... Pinky pari did say that armaan yash would accompany them too, but would HE come too?? She was unsure about it... If he too was to come, pari pinky would have mentioned him too, but they didnt...
His thoughts always gives her some strange feelings... Like something happening ticklish in her tummy. He was her friend naa, then why thinking of him she feels this strange, but not while thinking of armaan yash? They were her buddies too? Then why? Uff tired by soo much thinking she retired to bed, yet again the thought of next day's plan in the back of her Mind.

The coming day, outside the movie theater, in one of the biggest malls of delhi stood the boys, near the ticket counter, waiting for the girls... Maan kept fixing his hairs every now and then, being extra conscious about his looks, trying to look best.. Ab kyu na ho, after all apni WO ko impress jo karna hai ;)...
"finally they're here" armaan's sigh caught his attention as he turned to the direction from where SHE entered, walking slowly behind the other two girls.. As she came in full view, bubbles of adornment filled his heart, as he looked at the cutie soft and innocent beauty in front of his eyes... Clad in baby pinkk kurti and open curls she looked... Ohh so cute, maan let out a sigh, totally flat on his cutie.
As geet lifted her eyes, first thing she saw was HIM, staring directly at her, which made her a bit conscious 'why is he staring at me like this' she frowned thinking and instictively her hand went up to tuck her curls 'uff still staring' Maan came out of his trance at her act, and looking down he chuckled at her nervousness. "kitni der kardi yar ane mei, movie choot jati naa" yash said irritated to the girls "sorry sorry, wo actually traffic k karan we got caught up" pari said apologetically.. Maneet came out of their trances... "kya yaar, ate hi complainig start kar di tum logo ne, itnee time baad mil rahe hai hum sab, toh atleast ek proper hi hello toh banta hai na" pinky said the boys, at which all others smiled and greeted each other in friendly way...

Maaneet looked at each other.. Geet smiled at him politely while maan was lost in her, in trance he just moved his hand ahead which geet confusingly looked at it.. But then giving him a dimpled smile forwarded her soft one too for handshake... The softness of her hand in his bought him to reality, and he looked at their hands and shook her hand slowly.. Muttering a slow 'hi' soon after their handshake, maan kicked himself mentally "seriousely maan! Handshake!" he unbelievebly rolled his eyes at himself...

Every one moved to the movie hall, where after reaching armaan yash told them that 2 of the seats werent in one row with others, it was few rows away... "Ab kya karenge? Sab saath mei baithte kitnaa mazaa ataa... But ab 2 logo ko alag baithna padega" pinky said sadly... "but main baat yeh hai ki wo do log honge kon?" pari said worridly... " dont worry yarr... Ab seats hi aise mile toh hum kya karte... Waise bhi itni mushkil se mili hai yeh seats bhi... But ab question ye hai ki alag se baithega kon" armaan said pretending to think, winking at yash slightly "kya kare bhai abb! Are haan... Maan tu baith ja na plz un seats pr, dekh ladkiya akeli baithengi nahi, aur armaan aur mei toh humesha last row hi prefer karte hai... Tujhe koi problem bhi nahi hogi... Toh tu baith ja na yarr..." yash said to Maan who was standing there with casually with hands in pocket waiting for them to solve the matter themselves..
On this maan's eyes widened at them making him only the Bali ka bakraa... But then pinky continued "haa yeh thik rahega, aur maan k sath Geet baith sakti hai, waise bhi usse koi interest nahi movie shovie Mei... Kyu Geet?baith jaegi na Tu?" pinky said innocently pleading to her, leaving Geet baffled too, but before both maneet could argue over it... They were already pushing them towards their seats... Maan turned back and gave a 'u are so dead' look to his buddies, at which they just smiled naughtily waving him and Geet bye... Geet looked at maan helplessly at which he gave her just a weak smile and sighed leading her to their seats..
Reaching to their seats they saw that two vacant places were there booked for them at the farthest corner of the row. Maan saw that the other side of one of the seat was occupied by one young boy, around their age only, and as Geet approached the seat walking ahead maan the boys eyes followed her. Maan saw that. And before Geet could sit there maan himself set there hurridly, smiling at Geet who had to then chose the last seat. Sitting there maan glanced dangerousely at that boy who looked a bit dissapointed seeing Geet taking the other seat but meeting maan's angry eyes he just looked away clearing his throat.

Geet nervousely was looking here and there. They were a little early and the movie had time to start. She sat there awkwardly fidgeting in her seat... This was the first time she was away from her friends, her friends usually never left her alone, but today god knows why they had to pick her only, to sit here all alone... Well not totally alone, which she was thankful, she thought glancing at Maan. He was her friend too, 'yes Geet maan is ur friend, u'r not alone... Woh hai na tere saath, toh itna ghabra kyu rahi hai.' She thought in her mind chidding herself...' Woh bhi toh akela hai naa. Uske bhi toh dost nahi uske saath, koi na chal ajj unki hi company enjoy kar le'. She thought smiling a bit seeing him looking around in boredome.
Actually not boredome but nervousness. Maan too was nervousely thinking how to initiate some talk to remove this awkwardness, to lessen her nervousness... Still in thoughts as he turned his face to look at her he saw her looking at him lost with a smile, that was it.. His heart missed a beat, like some hopeless lover, which he actually was. Clearing his throat he asked "kya huya Geet?" his voice a little hoarse due to her effect ;) "umm nahi, kuch nahi... Bass ayveyi Mei toh dekh rahi Thi" Geet said awkwardly while maan did a small ohh gesture like a fool. "woh, umm shall i bring some snacks for the movie? Popcorns and cold drinks? What say?" maan said after composing and chidding himself a bit 'maan control' he commanded in mind "ok, as u wish" Geet said with,a gentle smile "Mei Abhi aya then, ok" saying maan almost rushed off his seat, thinking that having some alone time would be best to calm myself...

'godd maan, tujhe ho kya gaya hai? Why the hell am i behaving so foolish' the said frustatedly brushing his hairs... ' firstly take a deep breath (taking a long breath) now release (releasing it) *phew ok now control... Yaha finallyyy u got the opportunity to be with her, talk to her, know her.. Aur tu hai ki apni madness mei sab spoil kara ja raha hai' he chidded himself 'but yaar, karu bhi toh kya, woh lag bhi toh itni cute rahi hai, uski smiles, uske gestures sab dekh ke toh meri saas hi atak jati hai' he thought lost in her 'haayyee, god Geet why whyy you had to be soo perfect' maan said with a cute pout, blaming her. "Excuse me sir, your order" said the person at the counter, handing him his order, bringing him to present "hmm" saying he took the order after paying him and moved back to the hall 'maan now dare u do something foolish anymore, relax yaar, just try being yourself' maan ordered himself before coming to his seat.
Sitting back in his place he forwarded the drink to her, giving her the bucket of popcorn, that fortunately or unfortunately they had to share *winks... Soon the movie started and they got indulged in it... Though the movie wasn't that interesting, but yet the entire experience proved to be most enjoyable for Geet, the reason was Maan...

After all those chidding and cursing sessions that he had with himself, he was pretty much back in his bindaas mood. His extra joyous personality, sense of humour, just hooked Geet.. She was tired laughing on his extra hilarious comments during the movie.. Let the scene be funny or extra emotional, his casual comments about the actors, dialogues were such that she just couldn't help herself crack up laughing..

While on other side, her laughing, smiling face was just pure bliss for maan... He felt blessed to have been capable of making her happy, while that adorable smile too didn't leave his face watching her so happy.

After movie ended, their friends joined them back, praising and going gaga over the movie... While the others were busy discussing the movie, geet's smile couldn't leave her face. Which was noticed by her buddies ofcourse, "kya huya Geet? Itna muskura Kyu rahi hai?" pinky asked her amazed, to which Geet just dismissed it nodding a no, and looked at maan once again.. How to tell why was she smiling, laughing this much! Maan looked at her smiling at him and he too winked at her naughtily at which she shooked her head thinking uff maan and his antics.. But whatever it was she just loved all of it, his company, his antics, his silly but successful attempts to keep others happy. Her respect for him just kept increasing by each passing moment.

They sat there in the Mc D enjoying their foods, laughing, talking, teasing each other.. Maan who was looking in his phone sipping his coke just got an idea... Looking up he casually asked the girls "you guys must be on watsapp naa?" to which Pari pinky nodded "cool! Then we can anytime chat there, what say?" saying so the three exchanged their numbers.., "Geet tum?" maan asked her afterwords "haa mei hu toh, but i don't use it that often" Geet said "are toh kya ho gya! Ab use kar lena" maan said naughtily "but.." before she could continue maan cut her in mid "uff no but and if... Tum mujhe do" saying maan just grabbed her cell lieing on table as if it was most casual thing and before she could protest further, fed his number in hers and took her number, giving a missed call on his.. "Done" said maan with a dimpled bright smile, giving it back to her, while Geet too couldn't say anything to him.

After their meal they all roamed a little in the mall, and after that all of them had to bid bye to each other.. Promising to be in touch
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back anya baby🤗
awesome update...
maan to geet ka deewana ban gaya hai...
geet poor her confuse abt her feelings...
maan is back in his bindas mood
he entertained geet with his funny antics...
both exchanged their numbers too...
loved it...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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NOTE

Hey all.. Here's the next update for TL.. Sorry for the inconvenient update this time due to its text styles and all since am having a REAL hard time doing it from cell 🤢 believe me its the toughest task I ever did in IF... Even the little editting I had to do using my programming knowledge 😆 putting each and every tags manually *OUCH
And due to the same reason I cant provide u with hyperlinked index OR even direct link in PM.. PM too I would have to experiment through cell, whether i'm able to do or not...
so plzzz plzzz bare with me this time, since I ONLY did this update for my cutie di..
AND for those waiting for LS, It would take some lot of time to be updated... Since i'm yet to think what to do with the further updates.. As for now i'm intending to finish off TL in few days (dont know exactly how long)...
So for now just enjoy this update untill I put up next up...
THANKS in advance 😳
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

anya baby good night sweet dreamzzz n all the best...

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awww bye byeee dii... And yepp her BELATED bday gift
koi na kall pad lenaa :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
tu yahannn n update ki 😲
aaayuuu i misss uuu sooo muchhh :* :* :* :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
superbbb update love it waiting for ls very much hope soon you ill be able to update this
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Posted: 11 years ago
good to see you back anyaa!!!!!
lovely update!!!!
maan hopelessly in love with geet and behaving like some deewana types😆
geet confused about her feelings for maan😳
but chalo atleast maan came back to his bindass avatar and entertained geet with his funny antics!!!!!😆

u updated this from mobile😲 hatts off to u dear👏😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back dear
lovely update
maan is in love with geet 😳
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awesome update buddy👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
nd welcome back really missed ur cute stories😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
maaneet becoming good buddies but poor maan has to cntrl his feelings fr his cutie
now thy hv xchanged numbers too
waiting fr d next
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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lovely part
maan drooling over geet in school and his friends notice that and planeed for a movie to get maaneet close

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