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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

I loved your punishments. I once saw a movie, where the main theme was the reason behind sending criminals to jails. Is to protect the society, is it punish by taking away their freedom in lieu of the crime done or is it a chance for one to realise thier mistakes and repent and redeem to become a better person. Maybe it is a mix of all three but in my mind true justice is only when the offender actually realises his mistake because it is then that you protect society from future atrocities, you have a chance of true repentence and you have a redeemed person. It serves all the purposes giving true justice.

Time can not eb wound back for chiddi...but Daarji was affected by her same innocence which he tried to trample. Not able to take burden of his sins, he crumbled and took the easy way out...because sucide is just that.

Pammi was shown the mirror by Balwinder by making ehr realise that she lost to motherhood and being a wife the moment she stopped being a human

Balwinder stands alone...there is no one to follow or protect any more and neither is there any life partner...

Soki will burn in his remorse for acting on his insecurities by hurting another person

and Chiddi...poor girl will once again pay price for her innocence...Parenthood can nevr be a punsihment but responsibility at such young age will not be easy. I just wish that her innocent but warm heart will be able to rise and be what only few have courage to be...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

nope all clear
was already clear
but thanx for extra not dear

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

gr8 part..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: palindrome

Note:
Many of you have asked,who was "He" in the last paragraph...???
He was "Shoki"..the man who raped Geet in drunk state..His mother had sent him to Mukeria to attend Darjee's prayer meet..She had made him wear the sling so people would believe that he was also hurt in that accident in which channi lost her life..As you all know,darjee had told villagers that channi died in car accident when she was going to her "sasural" after "Bidai"..
Shoki is guilty about his acts thats why he had come to mohinder's house to ask for forgiveness...
Hope everything is clear now..
If still there are some questions,feel free to ask...

So channi is very much alive, but whereabouts not known, isn't it?

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: Viji79

So channi is very much alive, but whereabouts not known, isn't it?

No dear..she is not alive..Darjee himself killed her and to hide his crime made a fake story of her accident infront of villagers..

Read these lines from chapter 4

He tried to find a little shame,regret or pain in his eyes after slaughteringhis elder granddaughter with own hands but all he could see was a 'devilish gleam" enveloping his imperturbable ego.For him, He had just punished channi for her mistake or sin precisely.Her decision of eloping was a direct attack on reputation of choudhary clan and she was punished aptly for it.

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

never read someth so deep and real before...u write amazingly...
after this update and taking the title in consideration, i tend to believe that geet will b the parent, she didnt take the meds so unwillingly may become a parent. a kid being parent to another child...dnt know for sure if its this the story line but i trust u to surprise us with ur great imagination and writing...also liked ur punishments to those heartless people. eager to know more abt this geet of yours...

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: palindrome

Love you too avi..
The day i saw your previous account banned,I was disheartened badly..I had lost my inspiration for this story..Honestly if i had not come to know about your new account,i would have delayed the updates for a big time..may be till i complete life partner..
Its your love for "chidi" that always inspire me to write her tale...
Love you for being here with chidi {and me ofcourse}...🤗

I did come back for this love only... Chidi represents innocence and to see it destroyed is like picking up a beautiful rosebud only to step on it... There is more in Chidi to teach us, which is the lesson of life... nothing can crush the human spirit... nothing, ever.

I am glad you picked up this topic Palin and are sticking with it.. It takes a lot of courage as we found out when all of India, young and old stood up for someone. Also while her age is lower than the Geet in the show, it is what made us all watch the show to begin with, for the courage of Geet to make a life for herself and we loved Maan for what support he offered and we cheered when she made a life for herself...

I am always here for you🤗 not able to log on as much but will be here.. if only to see my darling Chidi get her just and happy life as I am sure you will make it in the end...

Love, Avi

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Palin you gave simple death to darji...he should have punished in front of the whole society...

Glad at least balwinder have some remorse of his doing

Omg geet what you have done, you threw the emergency pills that day...really destiny playing cruel with her...ufff...at least rano should have confirmed that she ate pills that day...

Good punishment for shoki...repent whole life with the guilt

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

sorry for late comment dear pinu

i liked the punishment u chose for the culprits

physical punishment cant do much but once a culprit realises his or her mistakes then it is guaranteed that he or she will never commit a crime

and that is the main objective of punishment

i knew it dear u will come up with something strong for a crime as grave as this

if only we were able to make all the culprits realise their mistakes then there wont be such crimes anymore

and u want geet to be mother so she threw the pills

oh dear

but i know u will write the next chapters with a difference too

and l like the way u deal with kids

it's always educative and entertaining dear

so looking forward to the next chapters dear

but kudos to u dear for such a thought of punishment

👏👏👏

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: gudmeet
sorry for late comment dear pinu

i liked the punishment u chose for the culprits
physical punishment cant do much but once a culprit realises his or her mistakes then it is guaranteed that he or she will never commit a crime
and that is the main objective of punishment

i knew it dear u will come up with something strong for a crime as grave as this
if only we were able to make all the culprits realise their mistakes then there wont be such crimes anymore

and u want geet to be mother so she threw the pills
oh dear
but i know u will write the next chapters with a difference too
and l like the way u deal with kids
it's always educative and entertaining dear

so looking forward to the next chapters dear

but kudos to u dear for such a thought of punishment
👏👏👏