MG OS COTW Wk 11 OS1 pg 119 Thread #2 link pg1/119 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Hey dear this work was hillarious

I did not know that u write also
though i have also never heard abt aakhri pasta
but ur writing did not require any knowledge abt him
the character created by u was perfect in its own
and what a funny story u weaved around him and our dear maan and geet
and some of ur dialogues ...oh god they were too much
i was laughing like a maniac
doodh wale ki gai gopi...
maan's lips 😆
what a description yaar
dharmendra's connection
just to name a few
and how kind hearted u r
u did not break aakri pasta's heart
u setteled him with manisha
😆😆😆
very very very funny os dear
and few very innovative and hillarious dialogues
loved it dear thoroughly



Hey Gudmeet,
I am so very glad you read the OS and enjoyed it. Ab toh aap jaan chuki hain ki hum jaise pagal bhi GF pe aake bakwas kar sakte hain, aur aap jaise pagal usse awesome awesome ka darja de jaate hai😆

Everybody in their FF's will mention maan's lips as pefect M shaped lips. Ab jab bhi main letter M dekhti hoon I will start scrutinizing it really closely, and think, abey nahi yaar yeh wala M, Maan ke lips jaisa nahi hain, and then I move on to the next M, so I did not want to talk about the shape, bt rather thought of what would the texture be like.😉
As for the milk, that was my mom's dialogue, I never breast fed you she'd say, tujhe ghar ke baju ki pagal gai ka doodh pilaya tha, Isliye tu uske jaise behave karti hain kabhi kabhi. her exact words, except her's used to be in marathi.😆

Me very very glad to be an entertainment source for you😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Divu ki bacchi, tu chaar dham jake kya sikhke aayi, waqt, waqt par apne joote badalte raho yahi na?😆
Love those purple heels BTW😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

huh m back finally 😳

so yeh kya tha nishu di.. ...m jokinnng😆
tu ru ru tu ru ru tu ru ru ru kahan se karu main aapki tareef shuru🤣
title padkar hi mazza aa gaya tha "Paraye Dhan ki Tijori, Bani Pasta Ki Kamzori.."😆...
Mamma miyaan... huzur bada shukriya badi meharbani fr including world's best PT teacher in ur OS..pom pom😆
u know i was imagining maaneet lyk actors of 80s, bt background is different, here they running in slow motion in some construction site ... singing n dancing of course pair uthakar😆...how u thought abt it n evn linked it wid roMAANce😆😆...hats off to u ji
so both pasta n geetu drooling over maanu janu😉...kya kare woh cheez hi aisi hain, ki achche achche badal jate hain ..toh pasta bhaisaab kya hain😆
atleast now pasta ji is nt alone ...he got a vry gud company ...aur maanu janu ne dono se apna peecha bhi chuda liya...must say clever move...ek teer se do shikaar 😆
vry nice OS di ...lykd it😊





Divu ji iss tareef ko main kya naam doon.😆

We had a long discussion on Palin's thread about the dance maestro, For a period of time in the 80's he was the rage.

Hmmm, kutte ke dance mein aur actors ke dance mein fark itna hi hota hai, ki
ladka ladki ko bolta hai,
janemaan, ao twist kare mai aur tu, kutta bole,
mujhe zor ki lagi hai, mujhe marna hai shu.🤣

Haan AP aur Geet dono same gana gaa rahe the, tu cheez badi hain mast mast wala.😆

t and Palin said you had this awesome collection of Jeetu dances that I want to see. I posted one on Palin's thread. You can post your's at her thread or mine. Pleeease.

Thank you for the awesome awesome comment Miss India.
Love you.🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

aha koi ped dikha, apna pair utha ke shuru ho jaate the.Arey bhai yeh aap log kya anap shanap soch rahe hain. Woh kutte thode hi na hai, ki ped dikha aur pair uthakar shuru ho gaye.
omg these lines cracked me so muich🤣🤣
seriously fopr once i was confused pair utha ke om
g🤣🤣🤣
iot was so hilarios
just lvd it
i was laughing laughing n laughing
🤣🤣
Ap jaldi hi chote chote gore gore pasta bambinas ka grandfather ban jayega. 🤣🤣
maaneet ke babies pasta bambinas 🤣🤣
n geet ke maanu pe pasta fida
wow lv at first sight amazing 🤣
n that maa doods part🤣🤣
n daddi omg 😲🤣
daddi rock🤣🤣
finally r\ishta pakka
awww me lvd iot
so muck
best os🤣🤣
🤣🤣


Kyu confuse kyu ho gayi aap Tia ji. Kutte ko kabhie dekha nahi hai kya pair utha ke blessing the tree. 😆 ya phir bollywood actors ko nahi dekha hai nachte hue, Both of them are performing the premating dance in their own style.🤣

Hume khushi hui ki humne aapko itna hasya ki apka ROFL, bambinas paida karte gaya😆Thanks for the lovely comment.😃






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Posted: 12 years ago
Mamma Mia... Pom Pom
Mamma Mia... Pom Pom

That's what I've been doing at regular intervals after reading this OS! 🤣
Simply put, this was just too good to hold myself from laughing! 😆

Only imagining Geet and Maan dancing and singing around trees like yesteryear movies was a treat! Aur uspar she sings 'main teri deewani deewani' and he sings 'tere mast mast do nain'!! 🤣

And then there was ahha Aakhri Pasta! Could just get any more hilarious? 'Dharward' 'Tum hard pasta, soft sauce ke saath mix hone se perfect ho jaata hain.' 🤣

Geetu Maanu, Daadi ka Singham aur Khatmalal Singh Khurana ka 'kutte main tera khoon pee jaaunga'! And then Geet and AP discussing Maan's doom was way beyond my point of control on laughter! 🤣 Though I did much of it in whispers and when it would just burst out without notice, I had to cover up with coughs! 😆

As a whole, this was a riot, Apa! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guess I have to remove the rule NO PERSONAL CHATTING 🤣 🤣 So here I go 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

Guess I have to remove the rule NO PERSONAL CHATTING 🤣 🤣 So here I go 😛

You are trying to close the barn door after the horse ran away.
Ab toh bohot der ho chuki hain jaani.
Gali ka kuttaa bhi iss baat ko jaanta hain.😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

You are trying to close the barn door after the horse ran away.
Ab toh bohot der ho chuki hain jaani.
Gali ka kuttaa bhi iss baat ko jaanta hain.😆😆

he he eh😆😆😆😆 oops It seems I am Late😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Mamma Mia... Pom Pom
Mamma Mia... Pom Pom

That's what I've been doing at regular intervals after reading this OS! 🤣
Simply put, this was just too good to hold myself from laughing! 😆

Only imagining Geet and Maan dancing and singing around trees like yesteryear movies was a treat! Aur uspar she sings 'main teri deewani deewani' and he sings 'tere mast mast do nain'!! 🤣

And then there was ahha Aakhri Pasta! Could just get any more hilarious? 'Dharward' 'Tum hard pasta, soft sauce ke saath mix hone se perfect ho jaata hain.' 🤣

Geetu Maanu, Daadi ka Singham aur Khatmalal Singh Khurana ka 'kutte main tera khoon pee jaaunga'! And then Geet and AP discussing Maan's doom was way beyond my point of control on laughter! 🤣 Though I did much of it in whispers and when it would just burst out without notice, I had to cover up with coughs! 😆

As a whole, this was a riot, Apa! 😃

And like I said now my OS is complete.🤗
I'd have really liked to have seen you trying to dabaofy your laughter and reading. Waise kaha baith ke padh rahi thi😆
And I am glad you enjoyed the riot.
Anything for you janemaan.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

he he eh😆😆😆😆 oops It seems I am Late😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Chaddo yaar. 😆
Marsie this thread is the best. Can't wait for the next two writers that are coming up.

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