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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Nyc idea. Thanks 4 pm

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Priya21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Wow shaktiman. Very gud os.

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: mrs.msk
i might write a part lol

OMG please do. I too would love to read a different take on Akhiri Pasta.😆

Or are you thinking of the next character.

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Susegad

OMG please do. I too would love to read a different take on Akhiri Pasta.😆
Or are you thinking of the next character.

well for akhri pasta hopefully its as funny as the last one shot😆

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

well for akhri pasta hopefully its as funny as the last one shot😆

Ji bohot bohot shukriya😳

But please write yaar, only 4 more days left for the character yaar. We need at least one more story. Do you have it ready by any chance?😃

OMG😲 just went and checked Mannetmaahis thread for your fictions. You are the person who wrote A walk to remember. I remember reading that SS some time ago and I absolutely loved, loved, loved it.

Only I was a silent reader back then.

Ab toh i definitely want to read.

Please please likhogi na?

Will be waiting eagerly.😃

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ji bohot bohot shukriya😳
But please write yaar, only 4 more days left for the character yaar. We need at least one more story. Do you have it ready by any chance?😃

OMG😲 just went and checked Mannetmaahis thread for your fictions. You are the person who wrote A walk to remember. I remember reading that SS some time ago and I absolutely loved, loved, loved it.
Only I was a silent reader back then.
Ab toh i definitely want to read.
Please please likhogi na?
Will be waiting eagerly.😃

yes i actually started writing

won't have it finished till 2marow lol

haha yes that's me...that was my first fan fic believe it or not

now I have so many other fan fics😆

glad you are not a silent reader anymore...talking here is fun😳

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

yes i actually started writing
won't have it finished till 2marow lol
haha yes that's me...that was my first fan fic believe it or not
now I have so many other fan fics😆
glad you are not a silent reader anymore...talking here is fun😳

Talking here is fun indeed. Na jaane kya ho jaata hain, diarrhea of mouth, umm more like of the brain and finger I should say. Mouth bechara quiet hota hai😆

Dhinka Chika, Dhinka Chika waiting waitng, I am waiting wating.😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Susegad

Talking here is fun indeed. Na jaane kya ho jaata hain, diarrhea of mouth, umm more like of the brain and finger I should say. Mouth bechara quiet hota hai😆
Dhinka Chika, Dhinka Chika waiting waitng, I am waiting wating.😆

haha i used ot be nervous before too but now am quiet comfy joking and all with everyone here lol

yeah just don't get your hopes too high..I am not even sure how ti will come out but I hope it was worth the wait😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

Thank you Tamanna😃

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply amazing.loved it😆

Thank you miss duckie😆

Originally posted by: punam2712
LOVED IT

Thanks Punam😃

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU
loved it

hilarious

Shukriya NANDY ji. I'm glad you liked it.😃

QUOTE=ramyayuppy]🤣🤣
great one gul luved it to core 🤣

Hey Ramya. That many LOL's tell me you really enjoyed it.

I'm happy to have given you some laughing gas therapy in your smooth sailing day.😆

Originally posted by: preethia
loved it
it was hilarious

Thanks Preethia for enjoying it and commenting on it.😳

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars
🤣🤣🤣
Oh my my Yeh kya tha😆
You rock Gaaalll Ohooo Mamma mia Iss Aakhri Pasta pe toh mai fida ho gaya yaara😉
Hai allahhh Yeh kya kya Naam dhunda hai😛
Singham Tijori Singh 😆
Oh oh Maa toh bilkul 70-80s ki nikli😛😛😛
Oh Oh so Chupa Rustam Geet went to meet Maan and convince Aakhiri Pasta😛
Eh le yeh to Mamma mia nikla 😆
Oh God yeh toh khud hi line maaarrriiinnggg😆
By God I swear I was laughing like hell dear reading his terms😛 and words about Maan😉 And Mummy was like what???😆
Oh oh Geet Maan ko akela chodke chali gayi for Aakhri Pasta to feast 😉
Bechara Maan kahan phas gaya but Dharmendra Paaji ki aulaad buhahahahahah🤣
Hey Bhaggu Daadi toh poori ki poori nautanki nikli😆
Haila 😲AP and Geet friends and discussing WHAT????☺️ *blush* Bechara Maan under high scrutiny😛
He he Geetu and Daadi... ohhh Geet Meena Kumari and Daadi 😳 I just love this daadi😛
Awww bechara Aakhri Pasta sacrificing😉😛
Ehh le Maan sympathising and giving WHAT!!! Manisha's number 😆 Gosh I am sooo LOVING this😳
he h Mohinder ne Tijori Singh ko pehchaan liya😛😛😛
Haaayyyeee Finally wedding with good presence of AP and Manisha🤣
Oh my my Maan ka doom is so delicious😉 and dole shole...uff Daddi kya kehna... Just loved it as a whole Total Laughter riot😆
Just Lovely speciallycreamy white Alfredo sauce😉
and Dharward buhahahahah God That just killed me in😆 LOL You're just freaking awesome dear... Each line was entertaining Sweety!!Love at construction site😲 buhahahah🤣
Lovely and Thank you for participating😃
Love
Marsi😳

Hey Madam Martian, Miss Marsie Mars,😆

I so badly wanted to make a tongue twister for your name. 😆

After I posted the OS i was waiting nervously to see how people received it. I wasn't sure if people would find it funny, or silly and OTT. But when I saw your comment I heaved a big sigh of relief.

Thank you for the wonderful short OS of a long comment to my OS.😳

I just absolutely love how your comment is exploding with all the smileys.😆

As for Tijori Singh, let me see.

You see, I love all old bollywood dialogues. They just crack me up.

Actually I was totally imagining A.K Hangal with a shaky voice saying the paraya dhan dialogue when I thought, hey what matches paraya dhan and that's where the whole Tijori Singh thing came about.😆

As for making him gay, there was this scene in the movie where he first meet's Randhir Kapoor and he act's totally like the Akhri Pasta in my OS.😆

I am so glad you figured out PSY- Oppa Gangnam Style. I was wondering if Oppa ka Appa had fallen flat on his face.😆

And I swear if I'd had to write this as a short story, I'd have made Maan the grandson of Phoolan Devi.😆

Now, how's that for a character huh?😉

Thank you so much Marsie for that awesome, awesome comment. Your comment made my whole OS writing expedition so very worthwhile.🤗

And thanks once again for this awesome thread.

Can't wait for the next character.

Hmm, I wonder what it's going to be?😉😆

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago